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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMDF6BMW6A2S6288STW6TH
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Model:
Cohere Command R+ (Aug. 2024)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
40.5s
Cost:
$0.020237
Provider:
Cohere
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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AI
London's evening mist crept through Soho's narrow streets, its tendrils seeking warmth and light within the bustling neighborhood. The distinctive green neon sign of The Raven's Nest glowed invitingly amid the fog, beckoning passersby like fireflies to its lair. The interiors of the bar offered respite from the chill outside, bathed in a warm amber glow. Vintage maps and photographs adorned the walls, creating an antiquated atmosphere. Candlelit tables and dim lamps added to the hushed, intimate ambiance, encouraging hushed conversations. Behind the ancient-looking bar stood a barman, his eyes shifting from the aged whiskey in front of him to the assortment of bottles on shelves reaching high above his head. His nimble fingers plucked out fresh glasses, his movements as measured as his silence. A young woman entered, her dark straight hair swinging across her shoulders as she scanned the dimly lit pub.
Satisfied that she
was alone, Aurora, or Rory as her friends knew her, made her way to the counter. The lilt of her Welsh accent was unmistakable as she asked, "Silas around?" The barkeeper looked up, the soft creases around his eyes deepening. "He might be. Who's asking?" His voice was steady and disciplined, revealing nothing. "I'm an old friend," she replied, shifting her
weight
to one hip. "Silas has many old friends." His grip tightened on the bottle as if ready to defend against an unseen foe. "What's your name, friend?" "Rory. Rory Carter." He considered her for a moment, his eyes narrow, then nodded. "Si's in his office. Back there." He pointed toward a narrow door. Aurora made her way through the web of tables and chairs toward the door, her gait hesitant. As she neared, she
noticed that the
door was a sneaky part of a bookshelf, one whose faux library
facade
was a thin veneer obscuring a window into the secret room. A figure sat at a desk within, engrossed in some work, his profile illuminated against the backdrop of old photos. The man—Silas Blackwood—was every bit as she remembered him from her childhood visits to his home: ramrod-straight shoulders, a mane of greying auburn hair, and a
carefully
trimmed beard matching the tones of his thick locks. Time had worked its magic on him, painting in subtle shades of grey, imparting a
weight
y wisdom to his eyes, and slowing his gait with a slight limp. Yet he retained the aura of quiet command she had always associated with him, perhaps even more so. Aurora hesitated at the threshold, torn between calling out and stealthily observing. But not for long. Years had passed, bridging the gap between the small boy she once knew and the adult man before her. The warm glow of memory wrapped around the cold reality of the present. She had grown and changed, and so had he. Her boots creaked on the wooden floors as she stepped inside, the sound reverberating within the intimate space. Silas didn't look up from his work, but his hand slipped beneath the desk, fingers grazing an unseen weapon. "Yes, child?" he asked. His voice had deepened, like stones rolling in an ancient river, carrying the
weight
of time and experience. "Mr. Blackwood?" Aurora's voice was tentative. "I
know that voice
," he said,
slowly
lifting his head, his eyes narrowing. He studied her for a beat of breath before recognition dawned. "By all the angels, it cannot be..." His voice trailed off, his gaze fixed firmly on her. "Hello, Silas," Aurora said, her voice quiet but steady. The former child had become a woman standing before her old friend, both older and broader than she remembered, her straight black hair now framing her jawline. "You're not dead," he said finally, half a statement, half a question. His voice was rough, the words rasping against the long-overdue reunion. "Last I checked," she said
lightly
, attempting to keep things casual. But she couldn't stop her fingers from fiddling with the frayed edge of her sleeve, the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist peeking out—a faded reminder of childhood trauma. "I'm pretty sure I'd notice." Silas shook his head, almost imperceptibly. "You should be." "Oh?" Aurora raised an eyebrow, her breath catching in her throat. "And why's that?" "Too much time. Too many miles." He waved a hand at the walls, the world beyond. "Too many risks." She smiled
softly
, a mixture of emotion flitting across her features. "Time has a way of blurring those lines. The risks we take for the people we care about are never in vain." Silas's
eyes narrowed
, a
glint
of something fierce and hidden in their hazel depths. "So many years," he said, his voice hoarse with
unspoken
words. "So much to say." "Yes." Her voice held a world of understanding. "I thought I'd lost you. Everyone,
really
. When I moved to London..." Her voice trailed off, and she stared at the scar, a remnant of a time when she felt trapped and helpless. "Even the wicked sneak their heads above water. Only for a while, though; the pull is inevitable." Silas rose, his hand flexing as if around an imaginary trigger. "I'm an old man now, thinking of the future." An unexpected laugh burst from her. "You? An old man?" She shook her head, her bright blue eyes sparkling with amusement. "I don't think so. Last I heard, you were the one who broke four agents out of the Prague embassy and somehow made it out with a bullet in your knee." Silas winced, his fingers absently rubbing his leg. "That mission left a scar much deeper than the one on my skin. It's a reminder that the world's lines aren't as clear as we'd like. Not everything is black and white." She nodded, her lips pressing together in a thin line. "I know something about scars, Silas. About living with reminders of the past, of choices we made when we were younger and dumber." "You didn't deserve those memories, child," he said, his voice rough with emotion. "You should never have known the things you do. I failed you there." Aurora met his gaze, her bright eyes fierce with conviction. "But you also taught me that we can stand up to our fears. That there's power in facing what terrifies us." She lifted her wrist, the crescent scar
gleaming
in the low light. "That scars fade, but strength and wisdom remain." Silas's eyes
flickered
to her wrist, the primal urge to protect burning within him, his fingers curled into fists at his sides. His voice held a quiet promise. "We carry the shadows, but they don't carry us. That's the secret." Her lips curved into a wry smile. "I wish I had known that when I was younger. I was angry and lost for a long time, trying to outrun my fears." Silas's voice softened. "We can never outrun them. But we can learn to
dance
with the shadows so that they become our partners rather than our demons." There was a pause as they each heard the
unspoken
words between them, the regret and relief, the
weight
of choices and their consequences. "I'm off to bed," she said, pushing away from the table, a self-deprecating smile tugging at her full lips. "Long day at the restaurant, and I've an early shift." "Your restaurant?" The question
was loaded
with years of separation, the
unspoken
desire to know more, to fill in the blanks of their shared history. "Part-time work while I figure out my next steps." Aurora hesitated, her fingers tracing the edge of the table. "It's good to see you again, Si. Truly, it is." Silas nodded, his gaze holding hers. "Stay in touch, child. London can be a lonely place." Aurora lingered for a heartbeat, then turned and walked out. Her steps were quick, each movement holding the promise of a new story ready to unfold. Silas watched her go, his eyes holding the past and the future in equal measure as the secret room hummed with the
weight
of their reunion.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
0.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
10
adverbTagCount
4
adverbTags
0
"he said, slowly lifting his head, his eyes narrowing [slowly]"
1
"he said finally, half a statement, half a question [finally]"
2
"she said lightly, attempting to keep things casual [lightly]"
3
"she said, pushing away from the table, a self-deprecating smile tugging at her full lips [away]"
55.3571%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1344
totalAiIsmAdverbs
6
found
0
adverb
"carefully"
count
1
1
adverb
"lightly"
count
1
2
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
3
adverb
"softly"
count
1
4
adverb
"really"
count
1
5
adverb
"truly"
count
1
highlights
0
"carefully"
1
"lightly"
2
"slowly"
3
"softly"
4
"really"
5
"truly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
10.7143%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1344
totalAiIsms
12
found
0
word
"facade"
count
1
1
word
"flickered"
count
1
2
word
"gleaming"
count
1
3
word
"glint"
count
1
4
word
"unspoken"
count
3
5
word
"weight"
count
4
6
word
"dance"
count
1
highlights
0
"facade"
1
"flickered"
2
"gleaming"
3
"glint"
4
"unspoken"
5
"weight"
6
"dance"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes narrowed"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
69
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
69
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
3
totalSentences
89
matches
0
"Satisfied that she"
1
"noticed that the"
2
"know that voice"
77.8327%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
41
mean
32.59
std
13.76
cv
0.422
sampleLengths
0
39
1
42
2
44
3
51
4
24
5
12
6
24
7
3
8
23
9
48
10
56
11
46
12
57
13
37
14
22
15
6
16
41
17
36
18
23
19
45
20
9
21
14
22
19
23
33
24
29
25
41
26
37
27
52
28
40
29
33
30
26
31
51
32
40
33
31
34
27
35
24
36
29
37
25
38
29
39
16
40
52
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
69
matches
0
"was loaded"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
154
matches
(empty)
94.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
959
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount
27
adverbRatio
0.028154327424400417
lyAdverbCount
11
lyAdverbRatio
0.011470281543274244
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
89
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
89
mean
15.01
std
8.24
cv
0.549
sampleLengths
0
18
1
21
2
17
3
11
4
14
5
30
6
14
7
19
8
19
9
13
10
11
11
13
12
12
13
20
14
4
15
3
16
11
17
12
18
17
19
31
20
20
21
36
22
28
23
18
24
12
25
4
26
19
27
13
28
9
29
18
30
19
31
4
32
18
33
6
34
13
35
11
36
17
37
9
38
27
39
12
40
11
41
11
42
29
43
5
44
6
45
3
46
11
47
3
48
16
49
3
73.0337%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
5
diversityRatio
0.47191011235955055
totalSentences
89
uniqueOpeners
42
25.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
10
fancyCount
6
fancyTags
0
"The lilt of her Welsh accent was unmistakable as she asked, (be ask)"
1
"she replied, shifting her weight to one hip (reply, shift)"
2
"he said, slowly lifting his head, his eyes narrowing (say, slowly lift narrow)"
3
"he said finally, half a statement, half a question (say finally)"
4
"she said lightly, attempting to keep things casual (say lightly, attempt keep)"
5
"she said, pushing away from the table, a self-deprecating smile tugging at her full lips (say, push away tug)"
78.5846%