| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 21 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said finally [finally]" | | 1 | "she said lightly [lightly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 44 | | tagDensity | 0.477 | | leniency | 0.955 | | rawRatio | 0.095 | | effectiveRatio | 0.091 | |
| 77.58% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1338 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "lightly" | | 3 | "softly" | | 4 | "really" | | 5 | "truly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 6.58% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1338 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "measured" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "scanned" | | 5 | "lilt" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "facade" | | 8 | "firmly" | | 9 | "reminder" | | 10 | "eyebrow" | | 11 | "glint" | | 12 | "depths" | | 13 | "unspoken" | | 14 | "gleaming" | | 15 | "flickered" | | 16 | "dance" | | 17 | "desire" | | 18 | "tracing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1336 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 25 | | wordCount | 952 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.05 | | worstName | "Silas" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | Soho | 1 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Aurora | 9 | | Rory | 1 | | Welsh | 1 | | Silas | 10 | | Blackwood | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Silas" | | 5 | "Blackwood" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.975 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1336 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 91.76% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "Satisfied that she" | | 1 | "noticed that the" |
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| 77.83% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 41 | | mean | 32.59 | | std | 13.76 | | cv | 0.422 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 39 | | 1 | 42 | | 2 | 44 | | 3 | 51 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 48 | | 10 | 56 | | 11 | 46 | | 12 | 57 | | 13 | 37 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 41 | | 17 | 36 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 45 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 33 | | 24 | 29 | | 25 | 41 | | 26 | 37 | | 27 | 52 | | 28 | 40 | | 29 | 33 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 51 | | 32 | 40 | | 33 | 31 | | 34 | 27 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 29 | | 37 | 25 | | 38 | 29 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 52 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 154 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 46.55% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 89 | | ratio | 0.034 | | matches | | 0 | "The man—Silas Blackwood—was every bit as she remembered him from her childhood visits to his home: ramrod-straight shoulders, a mane of greying auburn hair, and a carefully trimmed beard matching the tones of his thick locks." | | 1 | "But she couldn't stop her fingers from fiddling with the frayed edge of her sleeve, the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist peeking out—a faded reminder of childhood trauma." | | 2 | "\"Even the wicked sneak their heads above water. Only for a while, though; the pull is inevitable.\" Silas rose, his hand flexing as if around an imaginary trigger." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 959 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.028154327424400417 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011470281543274244 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 89 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 89 | | mean | 15.01 | | std | 8.24 | | cv | 0.549 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 30 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 31 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 36 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 27 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 29 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 73.03% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.47191011235955055 | | totalSentences | 89 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 55.29% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "His nimble fingers plucked out" | | 1 | "His voice was steady and" | | 2 | "she replied, shifting her weight" | | 3 | "His grip tightened on the" | | 4 | "He considered her for a" | | 5 | "He pointed toward a narrow" | | 6 | "She had grown and changed," | | 7 | "Her boots creaked on the" | | 8 | "His voice had deepened, like" | | 9 | "he said, slowly lifting his" | | 10 | "He studied her for a" | | 11 | "His voice trailed off, his" | | 12 | "he said finally, half a" | | 13 | "His voice was rough, the" | | 14 | "she said lightly, attempting to" | | 15 | "He waved a hand at" | | 16 | "She smiled softly, a mixture" | | 17 | "he said, his voice hoarse" | | 18 | "Her voice held a world" | | 19 | "Her voice trailed off, and" |
| | ratio | 0.412 | |
| 11.47% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "London's evening mist crept through" | | 1 | "The distinctive green neon sign" | | 2 | "The interiors of the bar" | | 3 | "Vintage maps and photographs adorned" | | 4 | "Candlelit tables and dim lamps" | | 5 | "His nimble fingers plucked out" | | 6 | "A young woman entered, her" | | 7 | "The lilt of her Welsh" | | 8 | "The barkeeper looked up, the" | | 9 | "His voice was steady and" | | 10 | "she replied, shifting her weight" | | 11 | "His grip tightened on the" | | 12 | "He considered her for a" | | 13 | "He pointed toward a narrow" | | 14 | "Aurora made her way through" | | 15 | "A figure sat at a" | | 16 | "The man—Silas Blackwood—was every bit" | | 17 | "Time had worked its magic" | | 18 | "Aurora hesitated at the threshold," | | 19 | "Years had passed, bridging the" |
| | ratio | 0.897 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Behind the ancient-looking bar stood a barman, his eyes shifting from the aged whiskey in front of him to the assortment of bottles on shelves reaching high abo…" | | 1 | "But she couldn't stop her fingers from fiddling with the frayed edge of her sleeve, the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist peeking out—a faded reminder of …" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 21 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora said, her voice quiet but steady" | | 1 | "she said lightly, attempting to keep things casual" | | 2 | "Aurora raised, her breath catching in her throat" | | 3 | "he said, his voice rough with emotion" | | 4 | "She lifted, the crescent scar gleaming in the low light" | | 5 | "Aurora hesitated, her fingers tracing the edge of the table" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 44 | | tagDensity | 0.227 | | leniency | 0.455 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |