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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMDGFW0DZZEVFG6E0B5P8B
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Model:
Claude 3.5 Sonnet
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
41.5s
Cost:
$0.049554
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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AI
The green neon sign cast a sickly glow through the window, painting shadows across Aurora's face as she wiped down the bar counter. The old maps on the walls
seemed to
breathe in the dim light, their edges curling like waves frozen in time. It was that dead hour between the afternoon regulars and the evening crowd, when the Raven's Nest felt more like a tomb than a pub. The door creaked open, letting in a gust of autumn air and a figure Aurora hadn't seen in seven years. She nearly dropped the rag she
was holding
. "Jenny?" The name felt strange on her tongue, like a word from a language she'd forgotten. Jennifer Walsh - formerly Jennifer
Chen
- stood in the doorway, her designer coat and
perfectly
styled hair a
stark
contrast to the pub's worn wooden floors and shabby charm. She'd lost the pink streaks and nose ring that had been her signature at university, but her eyes were the same deep brown that Aurora remembered. "Rory?" Jennifer's manicured hand flew to her mouth. "My God, I almost didn't recognize you." Aurora ran a self-conscious hand through her black hair, aware of her worn jeans and the bar's logo on her t-shirt. "That makes two of us," she said, forcing a smile. "What brings you to this part of town?" "Client meeting." Jennifer moved to the bar with the careful steps of someone wearing
very
expensive shoes. "I'm with Hartley and Barnes now. Corporate law." She settled onto a barstool, her posture perfect. "I never expected to find you... here." From his usual corner table, Silas looked up from his crossword puzzle, his hazel eyes taking in the scene with quiet interest. His silver signet ring caught the light as he turned a page in his newspaper, maintaining his practiced air of polite disinterest. "What can I get you?" Aurora asked, falling back on the safety of bartender protocol. "White wine spritzer," Jennifer said, then laughed
softly
. "Remember how we used to drink those awful £3 vodka mixers from the corner shop?" "And swore we'd never touch alcohol again e
very
Sunday morning." Aurora reached for a wine glass, letting the familiar motions ground her. "Those were different times." "They were." Jennifer watched her pour the drink. "You disappeared, you know. After e
very
thing with Evan. I tried calling." Aurora's hand
trembled
slightly
as she added the soda water. The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist
seemed to
tingle with the memory. "I needed a clean break." "We all did," Jennifer said, her voice gentler now. "But you didn't have to cut e
very
one out. We were worried." "Were you?" Aurora placed the drink on a coaster. "Because I remember trying to tell you about Evan. About what was
really
happening. You said I was being dramatic." Jennifer's
perfectly
lined lips parted, then closed again. She took a sip of her drink instead of answering. Silas shifted in his chair, his slight limp evident as he stood and made his way to the bar. "Evening, ladies," he said, his voice carrying the
weight
of someone used to diffusing tension. "E
very
thing alright here?" "Fine, Si," Aurora said, grateful for the interruption. "Just catching up with an old friend." Jennifer's eyes darted between them. "You two know each other well?" "Rory lives upstairs," Silas said, settling onto a barstool with the ease of long practice. "Makes the best Old Fashioned in Soho, though she's too modest to admit it." "Lives upstairs," Jennifer repeated
slowly
. "So this is... permanent? I always thought you'd go back to law school eventually." Aurora felt the old defensiveness rise in her throat. "This is my life now. I'm happy here." "Are you?" Jennifer leaned forward, her expensive perfume cutting through the pub's familiar scent of wood polish and stale beer. "Because the Rory I knew had plans. She was going to change the world, remember? Not serve drinks in a Soho pub." "The Rory you knew was trying to be what e
very
one else wanted," Aurora said, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands. "Maybe serving drinks in a Soho pub is exactly what changing the world looks like for me now." Silas cleared his throat
softly
, his grey-streaked auburn hair catching the dim light as he turned toward Jennifer. "Sometimes the most important changes happen in the smallest places," he said. "I've seen more lives turned around at this bar than in any courtroom." Jennifer's face softened
slightly
. "I didn't mean... I just worry about you, Rory. We all did. Do." "I know," Aurora said, though she didn't, not
really
. The years stretched between them like a vast ocean, filled with all the things they'd never said and could never take back. "But I'm not that scared girl anymore, Jenny. I found my way here, and it's not the path anyone expected, but it's mine." "I should go," Jennifer said, reaching for her handbag. "My client..." "Of course." Aurora watched as she pulled out a sleek wallet. "It's on the house." "At least let me give you my card. In case you ever want to..." Jennifer trailed off, placing a cream-colored business card on the bar. "In case I want to what?" Aurora asked. "Go back? Pretend none of it happened?" "In case you want to talk," Jennifer said quietly. "Really talk this time. I was wrong back then, about Evan. About a lot of things." The admission
hung in the air
between them, heavy with seven years of silence. Aurora picked up the business card, running her thumb over the embossed lettering. "Maybe," she said finally. "Someday." Jennifer nodded, gathering her coat around her like armor. At the door, she paused, looking back at the bar where Aurora stood in the green neon glow, at home in a way she'd never been in their shared past. "You look well, Rory," she said
softly
. "You look free." The door closed behind her with a gentle click, leaving Aurora alone with Silas and the
weight
of e
very
thing that had and hadn't
been said
. Outside, London continued its eternal rush, but inside the Raven's Nest, time
seemed to
stand still, held in the space between who they had been and who they had become.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
8.3333%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
16
adverbTagCount
6
adverbTags
0
"Jennifer said, then laughed softly [then softly]"
1
"Jennifer repeated slowly [slowly]"
2
"Aurora said, though she didn't, not really [really]"
3
"Jennifer said quietly [quietly]"
4
"she said finally [finally]"
5
"she said softly [softly]"
0.0000%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1039
totalAiIsmAdverbs
12
found
0
adverb
"perfectly"
count
2
1
adverb
"slightly"
count
2
2
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
3
adverb
"softly"
count
3
4
adverb
"really"
count
3
5
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"perfectly"
1
"slightly"
2
"slowly"
3
"softly"
4
"really"
5
"very"
80.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
0
"Chen"
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
61.5014%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1039
totalAiIsms
4
found
0
word
"trembled"
count
1
1
word
"stark"
count
1
2
word
"weight"
count
2
highlights
0
"trembled"
1
"stark"
2
"weight"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"hung in the air"
count
1
highlights
0
"hung in the air"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
52
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
3
narrationSentences
52
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
78
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
37
mean
28.03
std
14.91
cv
0.532
sampleLengths
0
69
1
28
2
16
3
56
4
15
5
39
6
40
7
44
8
15
9
23
10
26
11
19
12
28
13
20
14
29
15
18
16
37
17
15
18
11
19
29
20
19
21
17
22
42
23
41
24
43
25
17
26
54
27
11
28
15
29
25
30
15
31
25
32
27
33
5
34
39
35
10
36
55
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
52
matches
0
"been said"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
112
matches
0
"was holding"
99.0964%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
664
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
22
adverbRatio
0.03313253012048193
lyAdverbCount
14
lyAdverbRatio
0.02108433734939759
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
78
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
78
mean
13.29
std
7.32
cv
0.55
sampleLengths
0
23
1
21
2
25
3
20
4
8
5
16
6
30
7
26
8
8
9
7
10
21
11
10
12
8
13
17
14
16
15
7
16
22
17
22
18
15
19
8
20
15
21
22
22
4
23
8
24
11
25
10
26
13
27
5
28
9
29
11
30
9
31
20
32
8
33
10
34
19
35
15
36
3
37
8
38
7
39
5
40
6
41
15
42
14
43
5
44
14
45
9
46
8
47
20
48
22
49
23
86.7521%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
4
diversityRatio
0.5512820512820513
totalSentences
78
uniqueOpeners
43
18.7500%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
16
fancyCount
10
fancyTags
0
"she said, forcing a smile (say, force)"
1
"Jennifer said, then laughed softly (say, laugh softly)"
2
"he said, his voice carrying the weight of someone used to diffusing tension (say, carry diffuse)"
3
"Silas said, settling onto a barstool with the ease of long practice (say, settle)"
4
"Jennifer repeated slowly (repeat slowly)"
5
"Aurora said, though she didn't, not really (say, does do not)"
6
"Jennifer said, reaching for her handbag (say, reach)"
7
"Jennifer said quietly (say quietly)"
8
"she said finally (say finally)"
9
"she said softly (say softly)"
79.6725%