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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMDSY1PX5J28S7FXDN29GD
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Model:
Hermes 3 405B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
1m 20s
Cost:
$0.001803
Provider:
DeepInfra
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Meta
AI
The distinctive green neon sign above the entrance
flickered
as Aurora Carter pushed open the heavy oak door, her bright blue eyes blinking against the dim light. The familiar scents of aged wood and stale beer washed over her, transporting her back to nights spent huddled in a corner booth, pouring her heart out to Silas over cheap whiskey. She scanned the room, taking in the black-and-white photographs and old maps covering the exposed brick walls, until her gaze landed on a figure hunched over the bar, his neat auburn beard catching the glow from the pendant lights overhead. Her breath hitched. Silas. Rory wove through the scattered tables, her
footsteps
muffled by the sticky floor, until she slid onto the worn leather stool beside him. Up close, she noticed the strands of silver threading through his hair,
echoes
of the neatly trimmed beard that failed to fully hide the deep lines bracketing his mouth. When had he gotten so old? "It's been a long time, Si," she said
softly
, the nickname feeling foreign on her tongue after so many years. Up close, she could make out the shape of the silver signet ring he always wore on his right hand where it rested on the bar. He turned to face her, hazel eyes widening in surprise before crinkling at the corners as he smiled. "Rory. Christ, it's good to see you. What brings you back to the Raven?" She shrugged, dropping her gaze to where her slender fingers fiddled with a cocktail napkin. It had always been hard to lie to Silas, especially when those perceptive eyes
were fixed
on her. "Things got complicated in Cardiff. I needed a fresh start." "'Things', huh?" He chuckled, the sound low and familiar. "And how long are you planning on hiding out here at the bar before facing them again like I taught you?" A wry smile tugged at her lips. "As long as it takes for my past to stop nipping at my heels, old man." Silas signaled the bartender for another drink before turning back to her, his expression sobering. "Listen, kid. You can't outrun your demons forever. At some point, you've gotta turn around and stare them down, or they'll chase you to your grave." Rory nodded, her throat tight. She knew he was right, that the ghosts of her mistakes would forever haunt her until she made amends. But the idea of facing them - facing him - sent a shudder of fear down her spine. Abruptly, Silas stood, wincing
slightly
as he put
weight
on his left leg. Of course, the injury that forced him into early retirement. It seemed time had left its mark on both of them. He fished a key out of his pocket and tossed it on the bar between them. "You remember the back room, right? Through the bookshelf. I've got some business to attend to, but the place is yours for the night. Go on, get out of here. Staying in one place too long will only make the running catch up quicker." With a parting squeeze of her shoulder, he limped off toward the secret room, leaving Rory staring after him,
the weight of unspoken words
and regrets heavy in the air between them. How many nights had they spent trading stories and confessions in this
very
spot, her head on his shoulder as she spilled her secrets and he absorbed them into his calm silence? Sighing, Rory reached for the key, catching a glimpse of the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist. She traced it with her thumb, the ghost of a childhood memory flitting through her mind. Perhaps Silas was right. Perhaps it was finally time to stop running and face up to who she was, who she'd become. As she tucked the key into her pocket and stood, resolve straightening her spine, Rory felt a twinge of sadness for the girl she used to be - the girl who had laughed with carefree abandon, who had faced the world with a defiant tilt of her chin. She was long gone now, leaving behind only this shadow of herself, this woman with scars and secrets and a past that wouldn't leave her be. But maybe, just maybe, with Silas' help, she could find her way back to that girl again. Or at least to a version of herself that could look in the mirror without flinching away from her own reflection. It was worth a try, anyway. And so, with one last glance around the bar, at the memories and the might-have-beens that lingered in e
very
corner, Aurora Carter squared her shoulders and went to face down her demons, one scarred piece at a time.
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2/17/2026, 1:47:40 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
0.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
1
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"she said softly, the nickname feeling foreign on her tongue after so many years [softly, so]"
61.9772%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
789
totalAiIsmAdverbs
3
found
0
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
1
adverb
"softly"
count
1
2
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"slightly"
1
"softly"
2
"very"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
23.9544%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
789
totalAiIsms
6
found
0
word
"flickered"
count
1
1
word
"unspoken"
count
1
2
word
"weight"
count
2
3
word
"footsteps"
count
1
4
word
"echoes"
count
1
highlights
0
"flickered"
1
"unspoken"
2
"weight"
3
"footsteps"
4
"echoes"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"weight of words/silence"
count
1
highlights
0
"the weight of unspoken words"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
35
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
35
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
41
matches
(empty)
33.8127%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
17
mean
46.29
std
12.42
cv
0.268
sampleLengths
0
59
1
44
2
58
3
46
4
32
5
43
6
30
7
23
8
41
9
42
10
50
11
44
12
64
13
55
14
74
15
44
16
38
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
35
matches
0
"were fixed"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
106
matches
(empty)
88.6154%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
650
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount
30
adverbRatio
0.046153846153846156
lyAdverbCount
9
lyAdverbRatio
0.013846153846153847
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
41
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
41
mean
19.2
std
11.1
cv
0.578
sampleLengths
0
27
1
32
2
40
3
3
4
1
5
23
6
29
7
6
8
20
9
26
10
18
11
14
12
15
13
18
14
10
15
9
16
21
17
7
18
16
19
15
20
26
21
5
22
19
23
18
24
13
25
10
26
11
27
16
28
44
29
32
30
32
31
17
32
16
33
4
34
18
35
48
36
26
37
17
38
21
39
6
40
38
86.1789%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
3
diversityRatio
0.5609756097560976
totalSentences
41
uniqueOpeners
23
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
1
fancyCount
1
fancyTags
0
"she said softly, the nickname feeling foreign on her tongue after so many years (say softly)"
76.1493%