Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMDSY1PX5J28S7FXDN29GD

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Duration:
1m 20s
Cost:
$0.001803
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The distinctive green neon sign above the entrance flickered as Aurora Carter pushed open the heavy oak door, her bright blue eyes blinking against the dim light. The familiar scents of aged wood and stale beer washed over her, transporting her back to nights spent huddled in a corner booth, pouring her heart out to Silas over cheap whiskey. She scanned the room, taking in the black-and-white photographs and old maps covering the exposed brick walls, until her gaze landed on a figure hunched over the bar, his neat auburn beard catching the glow from the pendant lights overhead. Her breath hitched. Silas. Rory wove through the scattered tables, her footsteps muffled by the sticky floor, until she slid onto the worn leather stool beside him. Up close, she noticed the strands of silver threading through his hair, echoes of the neatly trimmed beard that failed to fully hide the deep lines bracketing his mouth. When had he gotten so old? "It's been a long time, Si," she said softly, the nickname feeling foreign on her tongue after so many years. Up close, she could make out the shape of the silver signet ring he always wore on his right hand where it rested on the bar. He turned to face her, hazel eyes widening in surprise before crinkling at the corners as he smiled. "Rory. Christ, it's good to see you. What brings you back to the Raven?" She shrugged, dropping her gaze to where her slender fingers fiddled with a cocktail napkin. It had always been hard to lie to Silas, especially when those perceptive eyes were fixed on her. "Things got complicated in Cardiff. I needed a fresh start." "'Things', huh?" He chuckled, the sound low and familiar. "And how long are you planning on hiding out here at the bar before facing them again like I taught you?" A wry smile tugged at her lips. "As long as it takes for my past to stop nipping at my heels, old man." Silas signaled the bartender for another drink before turning back to her, his expression sobering. "Listen, kid. You can't outrun your demons forever. At some point, you've gotta turn around and stare them down, or they'll chase you to your grave." Rory nodded, her throat tight. She knew he was right, that the ghosts of her mistakes would forever haunt her until she made amends. But the idea of facing them - facing him - sent a shudder of fear down her spine. Abruptly, Silas stood, wincing slightly as he put weight on his left leg. Of course, the injury that forced him into early retirement. It seemed time had left its mark on both of them. He fished a key out of his pocket and tossed it on the bar between them. "You remember the back room, right? Through the bookshelf. I've got some business to attend to, but the place is yours for the night. Go on, get out of here. Staying in one place too long will only make the running catch up quicker." With a parting squeeze of her shoulder, he limped off toward the secret room, leaving Rory staring after him, the weight of unspoken words and regrets heavy in the air between them. How many nights had they spent trading stories and confessions in this very spot, her head on his shoulder as she spilled her secrets and he absorbed them into his calm silence? Sighing, Rory reached for the key, catching a glimpse of the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist. She traced it with her thumb, the ghost of a childhood memory flitting through her mind. Perhaps Silas was right. Perhaps it was finally time to stop running and face up to who she was, who she'd become. As she tucked the key into her pocket and stood, resolve straightening her spine, Rory felt a twinge of sadness for the girl she used to be - the girl who had laughed with carefree abandon, who had faced the world with a defiant tilt of her chin. She was long gone now, leaving behind only this shadow of herself, this woman with scars and secrets and a past that wouldn't leave her be. But maybe, just maybe, with Silas' help, she could find her way back to that girl again. Or at least to a version of herself that could look in the mirror without flinching away from her own reflection. It was worth a try, anyway. And so, with one last glance around the bar, at the memories and the might-have-beens that lingered in every corner, Aurora Carter squared her shoulders and went to face down her demons, one scarred piece at a time.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.25
80.87% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount784
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slightly"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
10.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount784
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"echoes"
count1
5
word"grave"
count1
6
word"down her spine"
count1
7
word"weight"
count2
8
word"unspoken"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"traced"
count1
11
word"resolve"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"familiar"
2"scanned"
3"footsteps"
4"echoes"
5"grave"
6"down her spine"
7"weight"
8"unspoken"
9"silence"
10"traced"
11"resolve"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of unspoken words"
53.57% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences35
matches
0"g in surprise"
1"a twinge of sadness"
2"felt a twinge"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences35
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences41
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords787
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount636
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity0.94
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Aurora2
Carter2
Silas6
Rory5
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences30
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount787
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences41
matches(empty)
33.81% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs17
mean46.29
std12.42
cv0.268
sampleLengths
059
144
258
346
432
543
630
723
841
942
1050
1144
1264
1355
1474
1544
1638
95.24% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences35
matches
0"were fixed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs105
matches(empty)
3.48% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences41
ratio0.049
matches
0"But the idea of facing them - facing him - sent a shudder of fear down her spine."
1"As she tucked the key into her pocket and stood, resolve straightening her spine, Rory felt a twinge of sadness for the girl she used to be - the girl who had laughed with carefree abandon, who had faced the world with a defiant tilt of her chin."
92.22% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount571
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.04203152364273205
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.01576182136602452
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences41
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences41
mean19.2
std11.1
cv0.578
sampleLengths
027
132
240
33
41
523
629
76
820
926
1018
1114
1215
1318
1410
159
1621
177
1816
1915
2026
215
2219
2318
2413
2510
2611
2716
2844
2932
3032
3117
3216
334
3418
3548
3626
3717
3821
396
4038
86.18% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.5609756097560976
totalSentences41
uniqueOpeners23
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences34
matches
0"Abruptly, Silas stood, wincing slightly"
1"Of course, the injury that"
2"Perhaps Silas was right."
3"Perhaps it was finally time"
ratio0.118
67.06% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences34
matches
0"She scanned the room, taking"
1"Her breath hitched."
2"she said softly, the nickname"
3"He turned to face her,"
4"She shrugged, dropping her gaze"
5"It had always been hard"
6"He chuckled, the sound low"
7"She knew he was right,"
8"It seemed time had left"
9"He fished a key out"
10"She traced it with her"
11"She was long gone now,"
12"It was worth a try,"
ratio0.382
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount19
totalSentences34
matches
0"The distinctive green neon sign"
1"The familiar scents of aged"
2"She scanned the room, taking"
3"Her breath hitched."
4"Rory wove through the scattered"
5"she said softly, the nickname"
6"He turned to face her,"
7"She shrugged, dropping her gaze"
8"It had always been hard"
9"He chuckled, the sound low"
10"A wry smile tugged at"
11"Silas signaled the bartender for"
12"Rory nodded, her throat tight."
13"She knew he was right,"
14"It seemed time had left"
15"He fished a key out"
16"She traced it with her"
17"She was long gone now,"
18"It was worth a try,"
ratio0.559
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences34
matches(empty)
ratio0
28.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Up close, she noticed the strands of silver threading through his hair, echoes of the neatly trimmed beard that failed to fully hide the deep lines bracketing h…"
1"Silas signaled the bartender for another drink before turning back to her, his expression sobering."
2"As she tucked the key into her pocket and stood, resolve straightening her spine, Rory felt a twinge of sadness for the girl she used to be - the girl who had l…"
3"Or at least to a version of herself that could look in the mirror without flinching away from her own reflection."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"He chuckled (chuckle)"
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.25
75.8907%