Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMDYNY1YB9PNAQQHGVH5N9

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Duration:
56.1s
Cost:
$0.000830
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DeepInfra

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above the entrance flickered, casting an eerie glow over the old cobblestone street. Aurora Carter, known to her friends as Rory, pushed open the heavy wooden door of The Raven's Nest and stepped inside. The dimly lit interior was a welcome respite from the brisk London evening. She scanned the room, her bright blue eyes adjusting to the gloom. "Rory! It's been too long!" The familiar baritone voice belongs to Silas Blackwood, the bar's proprietor and a man she once trusted more than anyone else in this world. He looked like he'd aged a decade in the five years since she'd seen him last, his auburn hair now streaked with grey, matching the neatly trimmed beard that framed hisaquiline nose and firm jaw. His hazel eyes still carried that same intensity though, which used to make her feel like he could see right through her. Rory forced a smile as she approached the bar, trying to ignore the sudden tightness in her chest. "Silas. It's good to see you." The words felt hollow, inadequate. She wanted to say more, to ask why he'd left without a word, why he'd abandoned her when she needed him most. Silas must have sensed the tension because he quickly changed the subject. "What brings you back to London?" Before Rory could answer, the door swung open again, letting in a blast of cold air and a man Rory had never seen before. He was tall, with broad shoulders and a shock of black hair falling into his eyes. He scanned the room with a practiced ease, his gaze lingering on Rory for just a moment before he slid into a booth in the corner. Silas watched him too, his expression unreadable. Finally, he turned back to Rory with a sigh. "That's Idiris Mal. He's been asking about you." Rory's heart skipped a beat. "About me? Why?" "He didn't say." Silas frowned, his gaze shifting back to the man in the corner. "I don't like it. There's something not right about him." Rory glanced over her shoulder, studying the stranger with a newfound curiosity. He was watching her now, his eyes dark and inscrutable in the dim light. She quickly looked away, uncomfortable under his scrutiny. Silas leaned in closer, lowering his voice. "Listen, Rory, I know we have a lot to catch up on, but I need to talk to you about something important. It's about your mother." That got Rory's attention. She'd been so focused on the strange man, on trying to keep her composure in front of Silas, that she'd almost forgotten why she'd come back to London in the first place. "What about her?" Silas glanced around the bar, making sure no one was close enough to overhear. "She's in trouble, Rory. Serious trouble. I've been trying to help her, but she's in over her head." Rory's mind raced as she processed this information. Her mother had always been secretive, always keeping her at arm's length, but Rory had never imagined she could be mixed up in something dangerous. "What kind of trouble?" Silas hesitated, as if weighing how much to tell her. "It's complicated, but let's just say she made some enemies in some very high places." He paused, his gaze intense. "I need you to do something for me, Rory. I need you to go see her, talk to her. She won't listen to me, but she might listen to you." Rory stared at him, trying to understand what he was asking of her. She hadn't seen her mother in years, not since the day she'd walked away from everything and everyone she'd ever known. The thought of facing her now, after so much time had passed, filled her with a deep sense of dread. Silas must have seen the hesitation in her eyes because he placed a hand on hers, his touch gentle but insistent. "I wouldn't ask if it wasn't important, Rory. Please. Your mother needs you." Rory took a deep breath, letting the warmth of Silas's hand seep into her skin. She knew he wouldn't have asked unless it was truly necessary. And despite everything, despite the years of silence and secrets, she knew she couldn't turn her back on her mother now. "Okay," she said softly, meeting his gaze. "I'll do it. I'll go see her." Silas sighed with relief, his shoulders sagging as if a weight had been lifted from them. "Thank you, Rory. You have no idea how much I appreciate this." He started to say more, but the door opened again, letting in another blast of cold air. This time, a woman entered, her long red hair catching the light from the flickering neon sign above the door. She scanned the room with a practiced ease, her gaze landing on Rory with a jolt of recognition. Rory felt the blood drain from her face as she stared at the woman she'd once considered her best friend. Eva. The girl she'd left behind without a second thought, the girl she'd promised to never forget. Eva approached the bar slowly, her steps unsteady as if she were seeing a ghost. She stopped in front of Rory, her green eyes wide with shock. "Aurora? Is it really you?" Before Rory could answer, Silas stepped in, his voice smooth and assured. "Eva, I think you two need some time alone. Why don't you take a seat in the back, catch up properly?" Eva glanced at him, her expression unreadable. Then she turned back to Rory, holding her gaze with an intensity that made Rory's heart race. "Please? I just want to talk." Rory hesitated, her mind spinning with memories she'd tried so hard to forget. But in the end, she nodded, allowing Eva to lead her to a secluded booth in the back of the bar. They slid into the leather seats, the years melting away as they faced each other across the scarred wooden table. Rory couldn't help but stare at her old friend, seeing the changes time had wrought on her once-familiar face. Eva had always been beautiful, with creamy skin and a mass of unruly red hair, but now she looked tired, worn down by life. There were lines around her eyes that hadn't been there before, and a sadness in her expression that made Rory's heart ache. "How have you been?" Eva asked softly, her voice barely audible over the buzz of conversation from the other patrons. Rory hesitated, unsure how to answer. How could she possibly explain the last five years, the choices she'd made, the things she'd seen? "It's been a long time, Eva. A lot has changed." Eva nodded, her gaze drifting to the scar on Rory's left wrist. "I can see that. But some things never do, do they?" Rory looked down at the crescent-shaped mark, a relic from another life. She remembered the day she'd gotten it, remembered the sharp pain and the warm blood trickling down her arm. She remembered how Eva had held her hand, pressing a clean cloth to the wound as they waited for Rory's father to come home and take her to the hospital. "No," she said softly. "Some things never change." They sat in silence for a moment, the weight of the past settling over them like a heavy blanket. Then Eva reached across the table, taking Rory's hand in her own. Her touch was warm, familiar, and for a moment, Rory felt like she was home again. "I've missed you, Rory. Every day, I've missed you." Tears pricked at the corners of Rory's eyes as she squeezed Eva's hand, feeling the same warmth and familiarity in return. She knew she should say something, should tell Eva how much she'd missed her too, but the words wouldn't come. Instead, she just sat there, letting the silence stretch out between them until it became unbearable. Finally, Rory stood up, pulling her hand free from Eva's grasp. "I have to go," she said quietly, not meeting Eva's gaze. "I have something I need to do." Eva nodded, her expression resigned. "Of course. You always had somewhere else to be." Rory winced at the bitterness in her voice, hating herself for causing it. But she knew there was nothing she could do now, no way to make up for the past. So she just turned and walked away, leaving Eva alone in the booth, just like she had all those years ago. As she stepped out into the cool London evening, Rory couldn't help but feel the weight of the past pressing down on her. She knew she had a long road ahead of her, knew that facing her mother would be one of the hardest things she'd ever done. But as she thought of Silas's words, of his plea for help, she knew she couldn't turn back now. She had to see this through, no matter the cost. She owed it to her mother, to Silas, to herself. So she squared her shoulders, took a deep breath of the crisp night air, and started walking, ready to face whatever the future might bring.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she said softly, meeting his gaze [softly]"
1"she said softly [softly]"
2"she said quietly, not meeting Eva's gaze [quietly]"
41.0223% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1526
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count3
3
adverb"really"
count1
4
adverb"truly"
count1
5
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"slowly"
2"softly"
3"really"
4"truly"
5"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.5754% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1526
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"processed"
count1
2
word"unreadable"
count2
3
word"newfound"
count1
4
word"weight"
count3
highlights
0"flickered"
1"processed"
2"unreadable"
3"newfound"
4"weight"
66.6667% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"without second thought"
count1
1
label"couldn't help but"
count1
highlights
0"without a second thought"
1"couldn't help but feel"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences81
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences102
matches
0"see that. But"
80.6960% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean40.11
std17.34
cv0.432
sampleLengths
063
186
251
318
466
524
68
725
834
933
1039
1132
1237
1360
1454
1534
1647
1714
1828
1955
2037
2132
2233
2330
2434
2539
2646
2720
2833
2923
3069
3156
3257
3329
3414
3552
3667
3745
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"been lifted"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs229
matches
0"was watching"
1"was asking"
2"were seeing"
98.3399% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1265
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount53
adverbRatio0.04189723320158103
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.011857707509881422
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences102
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences102
mean14.94
std7.2
cv0.482
sampleLengths
017
121
213
312
429
535
622
718
811
922
1012
116
1224
1316
1426
157
169
178
185
193
2015
2110
2212
2314
248
257
2626
274
2832
293
3014
3118
328
3325
344
3510
3620
3730
3813
3921
4020
4121
4213
4315
4411
4521
467
477
4816
4912
50.6536% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3333333333333333
totalSentences102
uniqueOpeners34
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she said softly, meeting his gaze (say softly, meet)"
1"she said softly (say softly)"
2"she said quietly, not meeting Eva's gaze (say quietly, does not meet)"
75.5855%