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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMDYNY1YB9PNAQQHGVH5N9
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Model:
Hermes 3 70B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
56.1s
Cost:
$0.000830
Provider:
DeepInfra
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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AI
The green neon sign above the entrance
flickered
, casting an eerie glow over the old cobblestone street. Aurora Carter, known to her friends as Rory, pushed open the heavy wooden door of The Raven's Nest and stepped inside. The dimly lit interior was a welcome respite from the brisk London evening. She scanned the room, her bright blue eyes adjusting to the gloom. "Rory! It's been too long!" The familiar baritone voice belongs to Silas Blackwood, the bar's proprietor and a man she once trusted more than anyone else in this world. He looked like he'd aged a decade in the five years since she'd seen him last, his auburn hair now streaked with grey, matching the neatly trimmed beard that framed hisaquiline nose and firm jaw. His hazel eyes still carried that same intensity though, which used to make her
feel
like he could see right through her. Rory forced a smile as she approached the bar, trying to ignore the sudden tightness in her chest. "Silas. It's good to see you." The words felt hollow, inadequate. She wanted to say more, to ask why he'd left without a word, why he'd abandoned her when she needed him most. Silas must have sensed the tension because he
quickly
changed the subject. "What brings you back to London?" Before Rory could answer, the door swung open again, letting in a blast of cold air and a man Rory had never seen before. He was tall, with broad shoulders and a shock of black hair falling into his eyes. He scanned the room with a practiced ease, his gaze lingering on Rory for just a moment before he slid into a booth in the corner. Silas watched him too, his expression
unreadable
. Finally, he turned back to Rory with a sigh. "That's Idiris Mal. He's been asking about you." Rory's heart skipped a beat. "About me? Why?" "He didn't say." Silas frowned, his gaze shifting back to the man in the corner. "I don't like it. There's something not right about him." Rory glanced over her shoulder, studying the stranger with a
newfound
curiosity. He
was watching
her now, his eyes dark and inscrutable in the dim light. She
quickly
looked away, uncomfortable under his scrutiny. Silas leaned in closer, lowering his voice. "Listen, Rory, I know we have a lot to catch up on, but I need to talk to you about something important. It's about your mother." That got Rory's attention. She'd been so focused on the strange man, on trying to keep her composure in front of Silas, that she'd almost forgotten why she'd come back to London in the first place. "What about her?" Silas glanced around the bar, making sure no one was close enough to overhear. "She's in trouble, Rory. Serious trouble. I've been trying to help her, but she's in over her head." Rory's mind raced as she
processed
this information. Her mother had always been secretive, always keeping her at arm's length, but Rory had never imagined she could be mixed up in something dangerous. "What kind of trouble?" Silas hesitated, as if weighing how much to tell her. "It's complicated, but let's just say she made some enemies in some
very
high places." He paused, his gaze intense. "I need you to do something for me, Rory. I need you to go see her, talk to her. She won't listen to me, but she might listen to you." Rory stared at him, trying to understand what he
was asking
of her. She hadn't seen her mother in years, not since the day she'd walked away from e
very
thing and e
very
one she'd ever known. The thought of facing her now, after so much time had passed, filled her with a deep sense of dread. Silas must have seen the hesitation in her eyes because he placed a hand on hers, his touch gentle but insistent. "I wouldn't ask if it wasn't important, Rory. Please. Your mother needs you." Rory took a deep breath, letting the warmth of Silas's hand seep into her skin. She knew he wouldn't have asked unless it was
truly
necessary. And despite e
very
thing, despite the years of silence and secrets, she knew she couldn't turn her back on her mother now. "Okay," she said
softly
, meeting his gaze. "I'll do it. I'll go see her." Silas sighed with relief, his shoulders sagging as if a
weight
had
been lifted
from them. "Thank you, Rory. You have no idea how much I appreciate this." He
started to
say more, but the door opened again, letting in another blast of cold air. This time, a woman entered, her long red hair catching the light from the flickering neon sign above the door. She scanned the room with a practiced ease, her gaze landing on Rory with a jolt of recognition. Rory felt the blood drain from her face as she stared at the woman she'd once considered her best friend. Eva. The girl she'd left behind
without a second thought
, the girl she'd promised to never forget. Eva approached the bar
slowly
, her steps unsteady as if she
were seeing
a ghost. She stopped in front of Rory, her green eyes wide with shock. "Aurora? Is it
really
you?" Before Rory could answer, Silas stepped in, his voice smooth and assured. "Eva, I think you two need some time alone. Why don't you take a seat in the back, catch up properly?" Eva glanced at him, her expression
unreadable
. Then she turned back to Rory, holding her gaze with an intensity that made Rory's heart race. "Please? I just want to talk." Rory hesitated, her mind spinning with memories she'd tried so hard to forget. But in the end, she nodded, allowing Eva to lead her to a secluded booth in the back of the bar. They slid into the leather seats, the years melting away as they faced each other across the scarred wooden table. Rory couldn't help but stare at her old friend, seeing the changes time had wrought on her once-familiar face. Eva had always been beautiful, with creamy skin and a mass of unruly red hair, but now she looked tired, worn down by life. There were lines around her eyes that hadn't been there before, and a sadness in her expression that made Rory's heart ache. "How have you been?" Eva asked
softly
, her voice barely audible over the buzz of conversation from the other patrons. Rory hesitated, unsure how to answer. How could she possibly explain the last five years, the choices she'd made, the things she'd seen? "It's been a long time, Eva. A lot has changed." Eva nodded, her gaze drifting to the scar on Rory's left wrist. "I can
see that. But
some things never do, do they?" Rory looked down at the crescent-shaped mark, a relic from another life. She remembered the day she'd gotten it, remembered the sharp pain and the warm blood trickling down her arm. She remembered how Eva had held her hand, pressing a clean cloth to the wound as they waited for Rory's father to come home and take her to the hospital. "No," she said
softly
. "Some things never change." They sat in silence for a moment, the
weight
of the past settling over them like a heavy blanket. Then Eva reached across the table, taking Rory's hand in her own. Her touch was warm, familiar, and for a moment, Rory felt like she was home again. "I've missed you, Rory. E
very
day, I've missed you." Tears pricked at the corners of Rory's eyes as she squeezed Eva's hand,
feel
ing the same warmth and familiarity in return. She knew she should say something, should tell Eva how much she'd missed her too, but the words wouldn't come. Instead, she just sat there, letting the silence stretch out between them until it became unbearable. Finally, Rory stood up, pulling her hand free from Eva's grasp. "I have to go," she said quietly, not meeting Eva's gaze. "I have something I need to do." Eva nodded, her expression resigned. "Of course. You always had somewhere else to be." Rory winced at the bitterness in her voice, hating herself for causing it. But she knew there was nothing she could do now, no way to make up for the past. So she just turned and walked away, leaving Eva alone in the booth, just like she had all those years ago. As she stepped out into the cool London evening, Rory
couldn't help but feel
the
weight
of the past pressing down on her. She knew she had a long road ahead of her, knew that facing her mother would be one of the hardest things she'd ever done. But as she thought of Silas's words, of his plea for help, she knew she couldn't turn back now. She had to see this through, no matter the cost. She owed it to her mother, to Silas, to herself. So she squared her shoulders, took a deep breath of the crisp night air, and started walking, ready to face whatever the future might bring.
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2/17/2026, 1:47:23 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
0.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
4
adverbTagCount
3
adverbTags
0
"she said softly, meeting his gaze [softly]"
1
"she said softly [softly]"
2
"she said quietly, not meeting Eva's gaze [quietly]"
41.0223%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1526
totalAiIsmAdverbs
9
found
0
adverb
"quickly"
count
2
1
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
2
adverb
"softly"
count
3
3
adverb
"really"
count
1
4
adverb
"truly"
count
1
5
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"quickly"
1
"slowly"
2
"softly"
3
"really"
4
"truly"
5
"very"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
47.5754%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1526
totalAiIsms
8
found
0
word
"flickered"
count
1
1
word
"processed"
count
1
2
word
"unreadable"
count
2
3
word
"newfound"
count
1
4
word
"weight"
count
3
highlights
0
"flickered"
1
"processed"
2
"unreadable"
3
"newfound"
4
"weight"
66.6667%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
2
found
0
label
"without second thought"
count
1
1
label
"couldn't help but"
count
1
highlights
0
"without a second thought"
1
"couldn't help but feel"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
81
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
81
filterMatches
0
"feel"
hedgeMatches
0
"started to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
102
matches
0
"see that. But"
80.6960%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
38
mean
40.11
std
17.34
cv
0.432
sampleLengths
0
63
1
86
2
51
3
18
4
66
5
24
6
8
7
25
8
34
9
33
10
39
11
32
12
37
13
60
14
54
15
34
16
47
17
14
18
28
19
55
20
37
21
32
22
33
23
30
24
34
25
39
26
46
27
20
28
33
29
23
30
69
31
56
32
57
33
29
34
14
35
52
36
67
37
45
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
81
matches
0
"been lifted"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
3
totalVerbs
229
matches
0
"was watching"
1
"was asking"
2
"were seeing"
98.3399%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1265
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
53
adverbRatio
0.04189723320158103
lyAdverbCount
15
lyAdverbRatio
0.011857707509881422
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
102
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
102
mean
14.94
std
7.2
cv
0.482
sampleLengths
0
17
1
21
2
13
3
12
4
29
5
35
6
22
7
18
8
11
9
22
10
12
11
6
12
24
13
16
14
26
15
7
16
9
17
8
18
5
19
3
20
15
21
10
22
12
23
14
24
8
25
7
26
26
27
4
28
32
29
3
30
14
31
18
32
8
33
25
34
4
35
10
36
20
37
30
38
13
39
21
40
20
41
21
42
13
43
15
44
11
45
21
46
7
47
7
48
16
49
12
50.6536%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
5
diversityRatio
0.3333333333333333
totalSentences
102
uniqueOpeners
34
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
4
fancyCount
3
fancyTags
0
"she said softly, meeting his gaze (say softly, meet)"
1
"she said softly (say softly)"
2
"she said quietly, not meeting Eva's gaze (say quietly, does not meet)"
75.5855%