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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMME1K2T48KC6B63XCAQP8S
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Model:
Hermes 3 405B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
1m 38s
Cost:
$0.002156
Provider:
DeepInfra
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Meta
AI
The distinctive green neon sign above the entrance
flickered
as Rory pushed open the heavy wooden door, slipping into the familiar dimness of The Raven's Nest. Her bright blue eyes scanned the bar, taking in the old maps and black-and-white photographs that papered the walls. It had been too long since she last set foot in here, back when she and Silas were practically inseparable. She made her way to the bar, perching on a worn leather stool as Silas approached, his neat beard matching his grey-streaked auburn hair. "Aurora Carter," he said, his hazel eyes crinkling at the corners as he smiled. "What brings you back to the Nest?" Rory brushed a strand of straight, shoulder-length black hair behind her ear, revealing a small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. "Just needed a familiar face, I suppose." Silas nodded, his slight limp noticeable as he moved behind the bar. "The usual?" "Please." She watched him pour her drink, the silence between them comfortable despite the years apart. When he slid the glass towards her, she took a sip, savoring the burn of the whiskey. "So, what's new with you, Si?" He leaned against the bar, his signet ring
glinting
under the low lights. "Oh, you know. Keeping the bar running, keeping my ear to the ground. Same old." He tilted his head, studying her. "What about you? Last I heard, you were studying law in Cardiff." Rory grimaced. "That didn't work out. I'm in London now, working at the Golden Empress." Silas raised an eyebrow. "The restaurant down the street? That's a far cry from law." "It's complicated," she sighed, running a finger along the rim of her glass. "Let's just say I needed a fresh start." "I
understand that," Silas
said, his tone neutral. He glanced around the bar, empty save for a couple in the corner booth. "Listen, I have something I need to take care of in the back. Can you watch the bar for a few minutes?" Rory hesitated, then nodded. "Sure, I remember how it's done." Silas smiled his thanks before disappearing through the door behind the bar. Rory stood, rounding the bar to better keep an eye on the remaining patrons. As she did, the door to the back room opened again, and a man stepped out. He was tall, with dark hair and piercing blue eyes, wearing a well-tailored suit. He paused when he saw Rory,
a flicker of recognition
crossing his face. "Aurora? Aurora Carter?" Rory froze, her heart stuttering in her chest. "Evan?" A smile spread across his face, but it didn't reach his eyes. "It's been a long time. You look... different." "You too," Rory said faintly. The last time she'd seen Evan, he'd been a scruffy university student, not this polished, urbane figure. "What are you doing here?" Evan glanced towards the back room. "Business. Silas and I have some... mutual interests." He stepped closer, and Rory had to fight the urge to back away. "But I'm glad I ran into you. I've been meaning to look you up." "Oh?" Rory's voice was steady, but her pulse
was racing
. "Why's that?" He reached out, tucking a lock of hair behind her ear, and she flinched. He noticed, his smile turning sharp. "You didn't
really
think you could just disappear, did you, Aurora? I have a long memory." "Evan, I—" Rory's words cut off as Silas emerged from the back, his expression
unreadable
as he took in the scene. "Ah, I see you two have met," Silas said
lightly
, but there was an undercurrent of tension in his voice. "Evan, I think it's time you were on your way." Evan held Rory's gaze for a long moment before nodding. "Of course. We'll catch up later, Aurora." He turned, striding out of the bar without a backward glance. Silas watched him go, then turned to Rory, his brow
furrowed
. "Are you alright?" Rory let out a shaky breath. "I will be. I just... wasn't expecting to see him. Ever." Silas studied her for a long moment. "There's a story there." "It's not a pleasant one," Rory said, her voice tight. He nodded
slowly
. "I can imagine. But Rory... if he's going to be a problem, I need to know. There are things..." He shook his head. "Just... be careful, alright? And if you need anything—" "I know where to find you," Rory finished, managing a weak smile. "Thanks, Si." He squeezed her shoulder before turning to the couple in the booth. "Right, you two. Drink up, we're closing early tonight." As Silas herded the last of the patrons out the door, Rory slipped back behind the bar, grabbing a rag to wipe down the polished wood. But her mind
was reeling
, thoughts
churning
with a tangled mix of fear and something else, something harder and brighter. Seeing Evan again, it was like a match dropped in a pool of gasoline, igniting a dark corner of her mind she'd thought long-extinguished. She knew, with sudden, visceral certainty, that this was just the beginning. That Evan's reappearance in her life was going to lead somewhere dangerous, somewhere she wasn't sure she was ready to go. But she also knew, deep in her bones, that she wasn't the same girl who'd fled Cardiff two years ago. She'd spent too long running, too long looking over her shoulder. If Evan thought he could waltz back into her life and pick up where he left off, he was sorely mistaken. Rory glanced up, catching Silas' eye as he locked the door. He tilted his head towards the back room, and she nodded, following him into the hidden space behind the bookshelf. It was time to face her past head-on, to stop running and start fighting. And with Silas at her back, an ally with secrets of his own, she had a feeling the battle was just beginning.
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2/17/2026, 1:48:07 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
38.0952%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
7
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"Rory said faintly [faintly]"
1
"Silas said lightly, but there was an undercurrent of tension in his voice [lightly]"
69.6970%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
990
totalAiIsmAdverbs
3
found
0
adverb
"lightly"
count
1
1
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
2
adverb
"really"
count
1
highlights
0
"lightly"
1
"slowly"
2
"really"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
39.3939%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
990
totalAiIsms
6
found
0
word
"churning"
count
1
1
word
"flickered"
count
1
2
word
"flicker"
count
1
3
word
"glinting"
count
1
4
word
"unreadable"
count
1
5
word
"furrowed"
count
1
highlights
0
"churning"
1
"flickered"
2
"flicker"
3
"glinting"
4
"unreadable"
5
"furrowed"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"flicker of emotion"
count
1
highlights
0
"a flicker of recognition"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
55
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
55
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
79
matches
0
"understand that,\" Silas"
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
34
mean
28.88
std
15.05
cv
0.521
sampleLengths
0
65
1
45
2
28
3
14
4
39
5
46
6
15
7
15
8
21
9
44
10
10
11
42
12
30
13
9
14
20
15
27
16
41
17
12
18
36
19
21
20
30
21
28
22
14
23
17
24
11
25
10
26
35
27
14
28
21
29
46
30
57
31
52
32
45
33
22
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
55
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
2
totalVerbs
135
matches
0
"was racing"
1
"was reeling"
94.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
719
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount
25
adverbRatio
0.03477051460361613
lyAdverbCount
6
lyAdverbRatio
0.008344923504867872
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
79
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
79
mean
12.43
std
6.58
cv
0.529
sampleLengths
0
26
1
19
2
20
3
24
4
14
5
7
6
21
7
7
8
12
9
2
10
16
11
17
12
6
13
13
14
21
15
12
16
2
17
13
18
4
19
11
20
13
21
8
22
8
23
14
24
22
25
4
26
6
27
12
28
14
29
16
30
14
31
13
32
3
33
8
34
1
35
12
36
8
37
5
38
17
39
5
40
6
41
21
42
14
43
10
44
2
45
14
46
6
47
16
48
21
49
20
70.0422%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
3
diversityRatio
0.4430379746835443
totalSentences
79
uniqueOpeners
35
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
7
fancyCount
5
fancyTags
0
"he said, his hazel eyes crinkling at the corners as he smiled (say, crinkle smile)"
1
"she sighed, running a finger along the rim of her glass (sigh, run)"
2
"Rory said faintly (say faintly)"
3
"Silas said lightly, but there was an undercurrent of tension in his voice (say lightly, be)"
4
"Rory finished, managing a weak smile (finish, manage)"
83.0134%