Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMME37K01YBSQG294K93FMJ

Run Details

Duration:
30.2s
Cost:
$0.014785
Provider:
Cohere

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The ancient oak trees loomed like silent guardians, their gnarled branches framing the entrance to the Fae Grove. Aurora, her heart pounding in her throat, stepped cautiously under the archway of intertwined branches, leaving the modern world behind. Night had fallen, casting Richmond Park in a shroud of darkness, but here in the Grove, a mystical light illuminated the clearing. Wildflowers danced in an unfelt breeze, their colors vibrant even in the spectral glow. A faint hum, like the distant thrumming of insect wings, filled the air, setting her nerves on edge. Rory had received a mysterious message—a simple location and time, no explanation. It had come just as she was finishing her delivery route, a solitary run through the park's winding paths. Intrigued yet cautious, she had made her way here, to this secretive clearing, only to find herself even more alone and uncertain. She looked down at the Heartstone Pendant resting against her chest, its silver chain cool against her skin. Its warm crimson glow seemed almost in sync with her own heartbeat. She had no idea who had sent it to her or why, but it had arrived in the mail the previous week, a shimmering enigma that had pulled her inexorably toward this very spot. The air grew heavy with anticipation, and Rory swore she could feel unseen eyes upon her, tracking her every movement. She spun around, scanning the perimeter marked by the towering oaks, but nothing seemed amiss. The wildflowers continued their serene dance, and the grove whispered with the unintelligible language of the wind. "Hello?" she called out, her voice breaking the unnatural stillness. "Anyone there?" No answer came, save for the persistent, mysterious hum, now joined by the distant hooting of an owl. Her breath formed faint clouds in the crisp night air, giving her a surreal sense of detachment. Trust your instincts, she thought. There's something here, something hidden. As if in response to her unspoken thoughts, a nearby patch of wildflowers rustled as though disturbed by an unseen force. Rory's hand flew to the pendant, her heart quickening. Taking a cautious step forward, she studied the spot where the flowers had twitched, half expecting to find a woodland creature or an errant breeze. But there was nothing. The clearing felt smaller now, as though the standing stones had shifted closer together, tightening the boundaries of this hidden realm. Aurora's breath quickened as she realized the light had dimmed imperceptibly, the wildflowers losing their vibrant hue. She was certain now; this place was not what it seemed. "Why did you bring me here?" she whispered into the gloom, her words carried away by the whispering wind. The pendant began to glow brighter, its pulse quickening like a beacon seeking to draw attention. In that moment, she knew it was not just a trinket, but a key, a conduit to something more. As her gaze fixed on the crimson stone, the hum intensified, and the world seemed to twist around her. Shadows danced at the edge of her vision, forming shapes that eluded her direct stare. Rory's stomach dropped as she sensed the true nature of this place, the hidden boundary between realms. The ground beneath her feet seemed to shift, and she stumbled, catching herself against a gnarled tree root. Her fingers dug into the rough bark, searching for stability in a world that suddenly felt fluid and unreal. Her breath came in quick gasps, each exhalation visible in the cold air. Then, as quickly as it had begun, the surreal sensation passed. The light stabilized, and the hum receded, leaving her shaky and disoriented. Rory stood upright, smoothing her hands down the front of her jacket, a physical attempt to steady her rattled nerves. Taking slow, deliberate steps, she made her way toward the center of the Grove, drawn by an unseen force. With each step, the pendant's glow increased, casting an ethereal light that danced around her. The grove seemed to react to her presence, the wildflowers swaying in her wake, as if in greeting or farewell. At the heart of the clearing, Rory stopped, closing her eyes and taking a deep, steadying breath. She reached for the pendant, her fingers wrapping tightly around the cool stone. "Show me," she demanded, her voice strong and steady, belying her inner turmoil. In response, the world shifted once more, but this time, she was prepared. The standing stones shimmered, no longer solid but translucent portals into another realm. The boundaries between worlds thinned, revealing a glimpse of a place beyond—a realm of shadows and dancing lights, where figures moved with otherworldly grace. Aurora's breath caught at the sight of the Faerie realm, a place she'd only ever heard whispered tales about. It was beautiful, enchanting, and dangerous—a place where humans were seldom welcome. The pendant pulsed with a life of its own, as if yearning to return to its home. Then, as suddenly as it had opened, the veil closed, leaving her alone in the earthly grove. She released a breath she hadn't known she'd been holding, her heart racing. "I see you now," she murmured, addressing the unknown force that had led her here. "But why me?" The pendant continued to glow in her grasp, its warmth a silent reassurance. She knew this was only the beginning, a first step into a hidden world. She just hoped she was ready for what came next. With one last lingering look around the mystical clearing, Rory turned and retraced her steps, leaving the Fae Grove behind. As she stepped back into the mortal realm, the pendant's glow dimmed, returning to its usual quiet radiance. The night air, once again ordinary, caressed her face as she made her way back to the city streets, leaving the supernatural encounter behind. But Aurora Carter knew that her life had just taken an irrevocable turn, and she was eager to uncover the mysteries that awaited her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
64.75% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount993
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"cautiously"
count1
1
adverb"inexorably"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count2
4
adverb"quickly"
count1
5
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"cautiously"
1"inexorably"
2"very"
3"suddenly"
4"quickly"
5"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount993
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"pounding"
count1
2
word"spectral"
count1
3
word"solitary"
count1
4
word"enigma"
count1
5
word"anticipation"
count1
6
word"could feel"
count1
7
word"scanning"
count1
8
word"amiss"
count1
9
word"dance"
count1
10
word"surreal"
count2
11
word"sense of"
count1
12
word"unspoken"
count1
13
word"quickened"
count1
14
word"gloom"
count1
15
word"pulse"
count1
16
word"beacon"
count1
17
word"stomach"
count1
18
word"shimmered"
count1
19
word"dancing"
count1
20
word"otherworldly"
count1
21
word"pulsed"
count1
22
word"yearning"
count1
23
word"racing"
count1
24
word"warmth"
count1
25
word"encounter"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"pounding"
2"spectral"
3"solitary"
4"enigma"
5"anticipation"
6"could feel"
7"scanning"
8"amiss"
9"dance"
10"surreal"
11"sense of"
12"unspoken"
13"quickened"
14"gloom"
15"pulse"
16"beacon"
17"stomach"
18"shimmered"
19"dancing"
20"otherworldly"
21"pulsed"
22"yearning"
23"racing"
24"warmth"
25"encounter"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences60
matches
0"y with anticipation"
23.81% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences60
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences62
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords990
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount972
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.72
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Fae2
Grove4
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Rory7
Faerie1
Aurora4
Carter1
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Rory"
2"Aurora"
3"Carter"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
4"Heartstone"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if yearning to return to its home"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords2.02
wordCount990
matches
0"not just a trinket, but a key, a conduit to something more"
1"no longer solid but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"knew that her"
66.87% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs25
mean39.6
std15.21
cv0.384
sampleLengths
038
154
253
364
452
512
635
710
859
949
1019
1135
1251
1350
1443
1554
1630
1713
1850
1948
2030
2118
2237
2338
2448
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs167
matches
0"was finishing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences62
ratio0.065
matches
0"Rory had received a mysterious message—a simple location and time, no explanation."
1"She was certain now; this place was not what it seemed."
2"The boundaries between worlds thinned, revealing a glimpse of a place beyond—a realm of shadows and dancing lights, where figures moved with otherworldly grace."
3"It was beautiful, enchanting, and dangerous—a place where humans were seldom welcome."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount975
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.035897435897435895
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.012307692307692308
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences62
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
80.63% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences62
mean15.97
std5.61
cv0.352
sampleLengths
018
120
222
314
418
512
619
722
818
912
1034
1120
1215
1317
1410
152
1618
1717
185
195
2021
219
2225
234
2421
2517
2611
2719
2816
2919
3019
3115
3217
3318
3419
3513
3611
3712
3820
3919
4015
4120
4217
4313
4413
4513
4613
4724
4819
4912
67.74% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.43548387096774194
totalSentences62
uniqueOpeners27
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences60
matches
0"Then, as quickly as it"
1"Then, as suddenly as it"
ratio0.033
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences60
matches
0"It had come just as"
1"She looked down at the"
2"Its warm crimson glow seemed"
3"She had no idea who"
4"She spun around, scanning the"
5"she called out, her voice"
6"Her breath formed faint clouds"
7"She was certain now; this"
8"she whispered into the gloom,"
9"Her fingers dug into the"
10"Her breath came in quick"
11"She reached for the pendant,"
12"she demanded, her voice strong"
13"It was beautiful, enchanting, and"
14"She released a breath she"
15"she murmured, addressing the unknown"
16"She knew this was only"
17"She just hoped she was"
ratio0.3
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount42
totalSentences60
matches
0"The ancient oak trees loomed"
1"Aurora, her heart pounding in"
2"Night had fallen, casting Richmond"
3"Wildflowers danced in an unfelt"
4"A faint hum, like the"
5"Rory had received a mysterious"
6"It had come just as"
7"She looked down at the"
8"Its warm crimson glow seemed"
9"She had no idea who"
10"The air grew heavy with"
11"She spun around, scanning the"
12"The wildflowers continued their serene"
13"she called out, her voice"
14"Her breath formed faint clouds"
15"Rory's hand flew to the"
16"The clearing felt smaller now,"
17"Aurora's breath quickened as she"
18"She was certain now; this"
19"she whispered into the gloom,"
ratio0.7
83.33% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"As if in response to"
ratio0.017
19.23% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Aurora, her heart pounding in her throat, stepped cautiously under the archway of intertwined branches, leaving the modern world behind."
1"She had no idea who had sent it to her or why, but it had arrived in the mail the previous week, a shimmering enigma that had pulled her inexorably toward this …"
2"As if in response to her unspoken thoughts, a nearby patch of wildflowers rustled as though disturbed by an unseen force."
3"The clearing felt smaller now, as though the standing stones had shifted closer together, tightening the boundaries of this hidden realm."
4"The pendant began to glow brighter, its pulse quickening like a beacon seeking to draw attention."
5"Shadows danced at the edge of her vision, forming shapes that eluded her direct stare."
6"With each step, the pendant's glow increased, casting an ethereal light that danced around her."
7"She released a breath she hadn't known she'd been holding, her heart racing."
8"But Aurora Carter knew that her life had just taken an irrevocable turn, and she was eager to uncover the mysteries that awaited her."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she called out, her voice breaking the unnatural stillness"
1"she demanded, her voice strong and steady, belying her inner turmoil"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she called out (call out)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"she demanded (demand)"
3"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
73.5455%