| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 64.75% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 993 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "cautiously" | | 1 | "inexorably" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "suddenly" | | 4 | "quickly" | | 5 | "tightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 993 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "pounding" | | 2 | "spectral" | | 3 | "solitary" | | 4 | "enigma" | | 5 | "anticipation" | | 6 | "could feel" | | 7 | "scanning" | | 8 | "amiss" | | 9 | "dance" | | 10 | "surreal" | | 11 | "sense of" | | 12 | "unspoken" | | 13 | "quickened" | | 14 | "gloom" | | 15 | "pulse" | | 16 | "beacon" | | 17 | "stomach" | | 18 | "shimmered" | | 19 | "dancing" | | 20 | "otherworldly" | | 21 | "pulsed" | | 22 | "yearning" | | 23 | "racing" | | 24 | "warmth" | | 25 | "encounter" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 60 | | matches | | |
| 23.81% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 60 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 990 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 972 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.72 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 4 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Rory | 7 | | Faerie | 1 | | Aurora | 4 | | Carter | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Carter" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "Heartstone" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if yearning to return to its home" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 2.02 | | wordCount | 990 | | matches | | 0 | "not just a trinket, but a key, a conduit to something more" | | 1 | "no longer solid but" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | |
| 66.87% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 25 | | mean | 39.6 | | std | 15.21 | | cv | 0.384 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 38 | | 1 | 54 | | 2 | 53 | | 3 | 64 | | 4 | 52 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 35 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 59 | | 9 | 49 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 35 | | 12 | 51 | | 13 | 50 | | 14 | 43 | | 15 | 54 | | 16 | 30 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 50 | | 19 | 48 | | 20 | 30 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 37 | | 23 | 38 | | 24 | 48 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 167 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 62 | | ratio | 0.065 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory had received a mysterious message—a simple location and time, no explanation." | | 1 | "She was certain now; this place was not what it seemed." | | 2 | "The boundaries between worlds thinned, revealing a glimpse of a place beyond—a realm of shadows and dancing lights, where figures moved with otherworldly grace." | | 3 | "It was beautiful, enchanting, and dangerous—a place where humans were seldom welcome." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 975 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.035897435897435895 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012307692307692308 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 62 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 80.63% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 62 | | mean | 15.97 | | std | 5.61 | | cv | 0.352 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 34 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 24 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 67.74% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.43548387096774194 | | totalSentences | 62 | | uniqueOpeners | 27 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, as quickly as it" | | 1 | "Then, as suddenly as it" |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "It had come just as" | | 1 | "She looked down at the" | | 2 | "Its warm crimson glow seemed" | | 3 | "She had no idea who" | | 4 | "She spun around, scanning the" | | 5 | "she called out, her voice" | | 6 | "Her breath formed faint clouds" | | 7 | "She was certain now; this" | | 8 | "she whispered into the gloom," | | 9 | "Her fingers dug into the" | | 10 | "Her breath came in quick" | | 11 | "She reached for the pendant," | | 12 | "she demanded, her voice strong" | | 13 | "It was beautiful, enchanting, and" | | 14 | "She released a breath she" | | 15 | "she murmured, addressing the unknown" | | 16 | "She knew this was only" | | 17 | "She just hoped she was" |
| | ratio | 0.3 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak trees loomed" | | 1 | "Aurora, her heart pounding in" | | 2 | "Night had fallen, casting Richmond" | | 3 | "Wildflowers danced in an unfelt" | | 4 | "A faint hum, like the" | | 5 | "Rory had received a mysterious" | | 6 | "It had come just as" | | 7 | "She looked down at the" | | 8 | "Its warm crimson glow seemed" | | 9 | "She had no idea who" | | 10 | "The air grew heavy with" | | 11 | "She spun around, scanning the" | | 12 | "The wildflowers continued their serene" | | 13 | "she called out, her voice" | | 14 | "Her breath formed faint clouds" | | 15 | "Rory's hand flew to the" | | 16 | "The clearing felt smaller now," | | 17 | "Aurora's breath quickened as she" | | 18 | "She was certain now; this" | | 19 | "she whispered into the gloom," |
| | ratio | 0.7 | |
| 83.33% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 19.23% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora, her heart pounding in her throat, stepped cautiously under the archway of intertwined branches, leaving the modern world behind." | | 1 | "She had no idea who had sent it to her or why, but it had arrived in the mail the previous week, a shimmering enigma that had pulled her inexorably toward this …" | | 2 | "As if in response to her unspoken thoughts, a nearby patch of wildflowers rustled as though disturbed by an unseen force." | | 3 | "The clearing felt smaller now, as though the standing stones had shifted closer together, tightening the boundaries of this hidden realm." | | 4 | "The pendant began to glow brighter, its pulse quickening like a beacon seeking to draw attention." | | 5 | "Shadows danced at the edge of her vision, forming shapes that eluded her direct stare." | | 6 | "With each step, the pendant's glow increased, casting an ethereal light that danced around her." | | 7 | "She released a breath she hadn't known she'd been holding, her heart racing." | | 8 | "But Aurora Carter knew that her life had just taken an irrevocable turn, and she was eager to uncover the mysteries that awaited her." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she called out, her voice breaking the unnatural stillness" | | 1 | "she demanded, her voice strong and steady, belying her inner turmoil" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she called out (call out)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 3 | "she murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |