| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said aloud [aloud]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |
| 70.45% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 846 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gently" | | 1 | "truly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "perfectly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 34.99% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 846 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "flickered" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "gleaming" | | 5 | "otherworldly" | | 6 | "tinge" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 70.22% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 854 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 822 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.97 | | worstName | "Grove" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 7 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Grove | 8 | | Like | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 8.49% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "quite there" | | 1 | "appeared normal but she could have sworn she'd felt something wrap around her ankle" | | 2 | "shadows that seemed to move independently of her motion, reaching toward her with spindly fingers before retreating back into darkness" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 854 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 27.26% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 20 | | mean | 42.7 | | std | 10.48 | | cv | 0.245 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 62 | | 1 | 57 | | 2 | 47 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 39 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 48 | | 7 | 50 | | 8 | 46 | | 9 | 38 | | 10 | 41 | | 11 | 51 | | 12 | 43 | | 13 | 47 | | 14 | 48 | | 15 | 40 | | 16 | 47 | | 17 | 32 | | 18 | 38 | | 19 | 41 |
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| 99.32% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | |
| 21.03% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 149 | | matches | | 0 | "was inhaling" | | 1 | "was building" | | 2 | "were saying" | | 3 | "was lying" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 59 | | ratio | 0.119 | | matches | | 0 | "Her phone's screen cast just enough light to avoid tripping over exposed roots, though she hardly needed it — she'd walked this route often enough in daylight." | | 1 | "The Grove was never truly dark — there was always some ambient light from the wildflowers that bloomed impossibly year-round." | | 2 | "Time moved strangely in the Grove — she knew this." | | 3 | "When she looked down, the ground appeared normal — but she could have sworn she'd felt something wrap around her ankle." | | 4 | "Something moved in her peripheral vision — something tall and wrong-shaped that disappeared when she turned her head." | | 5 | "A sound behind her — fabric rustling, or leaves, or something else entirely." | | 6 | "Rory stumbled backward, her heel catching on a root — a real one this time — and she fell." |
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| 69.19% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 292 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 18 | | adverbRatio | 0.06164383561643835 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.03424657534246575 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 59 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 59 | | mean | 14.47 | | std | 7.05 | | cv | 0.487 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 26 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 26 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 25 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 27 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 35 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 52.54% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.3559322033898305 | | totalSentences | 59 | | uniqueOpeners | 21 | |
| 58.48% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, the words seemed to" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 13 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Her phone's screen cast just" | | 1 | "She'd come because of a" | | 2 | "Her voice sounded flat, dampened" | | 3 | "She turned, but saw only" | | 4 | "She found herself straining to" | | 5 | "Her heel caught on nothing" | | 6 | "Its light cast strange shadows" | | 7 | "she said aloud, hoping her" | | 8 | "She turned to leave, but" | | 9 | "She was certain the exit" | | 10 | "She spun in place, trying" | | 11 | "She whirled around and for" | | 12 | "Her head struck something hard," |
| | ratio | 0.228 | |
| 56.49% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 46 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "The night air held an" | | 1 | "Her phone's screen cast just" | | 2 | "The Heartstone pendant thumped gently" | | 3 | "She'd come because of a" | | 4 | "The standing stones emerged from" | | 5 | "Rory's fingers brushed the crescent" | | 6 | "Something felt wrong from the" | | 7 | "The Grove was never truly" | | 8 | "Tonight they seemed to pulse" | | 9 | "Her voice sounded flat, dampened" | | 10 | "The air hung thick and" | | 11 | "The pendant's warmth intensified, less" | | 12 | "Rory pulled it out from" | | 13 | "The stone's inner light flickered" | | 14 | "A rustle of movement caught" | | 15 | "She turned, but saw only" | | 16 | "The wrongness of it prickled" | | 17 | "Time moved strangely in the" | | 18 | "The silence pressed in around" | | 19 | "She found herself straining to" |
| | ratio | 0.807 | |
| 87.72% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Because now she couldn't shake" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 87.91% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The Grove was never truly dark — there was always some ambient light from the wildflowers that bloomed impossibly year-round." | | 1 | "Its light cast strange shadows that seemed to move independently of her motion, reaching toward her with spindly fingers before retreating back into darkness." | | 2 | "She spun in place, trying to find any landmark that might guide her out, but the Grove had become a maze of identical trees and writhing shadows." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Her voice sounded flat, dampened" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |