| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 90.92% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1101 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1101 | | totalAiIsms | 29 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "looming" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "tinged" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "footsteps" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "quickened" | | 8 | "pounding" | | 9 | "echoed" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "could feel" | | 12 | "weight" | | 13 | "searing" | | 14 | "raced" | | 15 | "racing" | | 16 | "comforting" | | 17 | "beacon" | | 18 | "the last thing" | | 19 | "echoing" | | 20 | "familiar" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "blood ran cold" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "blood ran cold" | | 1 | "The air was thick with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 10 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "tried to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 97 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1101 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 31 | | wordCount | 1066 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.75 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Fae | 4 | | Grove | 7 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Eva | 4 | | Rory | 8 | | Silence | 1 | | Fae-touched | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Fae-touched" | | 3 | "Richmond" | | 4 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 79 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "shapes that seemed to move when she wasn't looking directly at them" | | 1 | "seemed different tonight, as if it had shifted in some subtle, unsettling way" | | 2 | "quite hear" | | 3 | "shadows that seemed to slither and writhe" | | 4 | "forms that seemed to melt and reform in the darkness" | | 5 | "heat that seemed to push back the darkness" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.908 | | wordCount | 1101 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 23 | | mean | 47.87 | | std | 24.69 | | cv | 0.516 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 109 | | 1 | 74 | | 2 | 68 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 71 | | 5 | 58 | | 6 | 64 | | 7 | 58 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 51 | | 10 | 67 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 49 | | 13 | 54 | | 14 | 52 | | 15 | 53 | | 16 | 47 | | 17 | 43 | | 18 | 53 | | 19 | 38 | | 20 | 46 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 2 |
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| 97.80% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 183 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't looking" | | 1 | "were closing" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 97 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1067 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 39 | | adverbRatio | 0.03655107778819119 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006560449859418931 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 97 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 97 | | mean | 11.35 | | std | 5.33 | | cv | 0.469 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 30.41% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 19 | | diversityRatio | 0.24742268041237114 | | totalSentences | 97 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the sound of her" | | 1 | "Just the standing stones and" | | 2 | "Then, a low, guttural growl." | | 3 | "Then, there was nothing but" |
| | ratio | 0.044 | |
| 17.80% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 46 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "Her childhood friend had been" | | 2 | "She glanced around, her bright" | | 3 | "She shook her head, trying" | | 4 | "she muttered to herself" | | 5 | "She quickened her pace, heading" | | 6 | "It was said to be" | | 7 | "She spun around, her heart" | | 8 | "She let out a shaky" | | 9 | "She reached out to touch" | | 10 | "She closed her eyes, trying" | | 11 | "She needed to find the" | | 12 | "She turned, scanning the darkness." | | 13 | "She took a step back," | | 14 | "She stumbled, her hand shooting" | | 15 | "she called, her voice trembling" | | 16 | "She had heard stories of" | | 17 | "She had always dismissed them" | | 18 | "She reached into her bag," | | 19 | "It wasn't much, but it" |
| | ratio | 0.505 | |
| 9.45% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 82 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stood at the" | | 1 | "The air was thick with" | | 2 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 3 | "The Grove had always been" | | 4 | "Tonight, it felt different." | | 5 | "The usual hum of magic" | | 6 | "Rory had come here at" | | 7 | "Her childhood friend had been" | | 8 | "Eva had said" | | 9 | "Rory had found the pendant" | | 10 | "The Grove was eerily quiet." | | 11 | "She glanced around, her bright" | | 12 | "The standing stones cast long," | | 13 | "She shook her head, trying" | | 14 | "she muttered to herself" | | 15 | "The Grove seemed different tonight," | | 16 | "The wildflowers, usually a riot" | | 17 | "She quickened her pace, heading" | | 18 | "It was said to be" | | 19 | "She spun around, her heart" |
| | ratio | 0.901 | |
| 54.95% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, as she stepped into" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 47.62% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The usual hum of magic was tinged with something darker, something that made the hairs on the back of her neck stand on end." | | 1 | "The standing stones cast long, twisted shapes that seemed to move when she wasn't looking directly at them." | | 2 | "She shook her head, trying to dispel the unease that had settled in her stomach." | | 3 | "The Grove seemed different tonight, as if it had shifted in some subtle, unsettling way." | | 4 | "The pendant's glow intensified, casting eerie shadows that danced around her." | | 5 | "She had heard stories of creatures that lurked in the Fae-touched places, beings that were neither human nor Fae." | | 6 | "She could see movement at the edge of her vision, shadows that seemed to slither and writhe." | | 7 | "They were closing in, their eyes glowing with an unnatural light." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she called, her voice trembling" | | 1 | "she warned, her voice steadier than she felt" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she warned (warn)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.444 | |