| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 81.22% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1065 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "quickly" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1065 | | totalAiIsms | 37 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "otherworldly" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "unraveling" | | 3 | "could feel" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "beacon" | | 7 | "chill" | | 8 | "tangible" | | 9 | "scanning" | | 10 | "surreal" | | 11 | "silence" | | 12 | "echo" | | 13 | "sense of" | | 14 | "uncanny" | | 15 | "footsteps" | | 16 | "loomed" | | 17 | "etched" | | 18 | "trembled" | | 19 | "racing" | | 20 | "wavering" | | 21 | "resolve" | | 22 | "profound" | | 23 | "stark" | | 24 | "comforting" | | 25 | "newfound" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 9 | | narrationSentences | 57 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1064 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.08% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 31 | | wordCount | 1046 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.34 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 14 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 2 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Pendant | 4 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Pendant" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.831 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 18.42% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "atmosphere that seemed to seep into her very pores" | | 1 | "wail that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere" | | 2 | "rhythm that seemed to echo the beat of her own heart" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1064 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 51.72% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "knew that the" | | 1 | "feeling that her" |
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| 23.11% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 20 | | mean | 53.2 | | std | 12.28 | | cv | 0.231 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 67 | | 1 | 75 | | 2 | 67 | | 3 | 60 | | 4 | 67 | | 5 | 41 | | 6 | 48 | | 7 | 45 | | 8 | 60 | | 9 | 50 | | 10 | 53 | | 11 | 50 | | 12 | 48 | | 13 | 49 | | 14 | 31 | | 15 | 37 | | 16 | 39 | | 17 | 43 | | 18 | 75 | | 19 | 59 |
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| 86.80% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "been described" | | 1 | "being stalked" | | 2 | "were filled" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 154 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.60% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 58 | | ratio | 0.017 | | matches | | 0 | "A sound pierced the silence—a low, mournful wail that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1050 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.022857142857142857 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007619047619047619 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 58 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 68.27% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 58 | | mean | 18.34 | | std | 5.88 | | cv | 0.321 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 30 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 33 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 27 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 23 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 39.66% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.3103448275862069 | | totalSentences | 58 | | uniqueOpeners | 18 | |
| 58.48% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, as quickly as they" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "She was far from the" | | 1 | "She had come to the" | | 2 | "It spoke of answers and" | | 3 | "She paused, her bright blue" | | 4 | "She stepped over the threshold," | | 5 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 6 | "Her hand closed around the" | | 7 | "Their eyes glowed with an" | | 8 | "She had come here seeking" | | 9 | "She turned to run, but" | | 10 | "She could feel the pulse" | | 11 | "She reached out with her" | | 12 | "They recoiled from the light," | | 13 | "she declared, her voice steady" | | 14 | "She took a deep, shuddering" | | 15 | "She tucked the pendant back" |
| | ratio | 0.281 | |
| 30.18% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 49 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "The moon hung heavy and" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter, known to her" | | 2 | "She was far from the" | | 3 | "She had come to the" | | 4 | "It spoke of answers and" | | 5 | "The pendant now lay against" | | 6 | "She paused, her bright blue" | | 7 | "Wildflowers bloomed in defiance of" | | 8 | "The grove was a pocket" | | 9 | "She stepped over the threshold," | | 10 | "The silence of the grove" | | 11 | "Rory's hand instinctively went to" | | 12 | "The grove was not as" | | 13 | "The trees seemed to lean" | | 14 | "Shadows flitted at the edge" | | 15 | "Rory's cool-headedness, her quick, out-of-the-box" | | 16 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 17 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 18 | "The air was alive with" | | 19 | "A sound pierced the silence—a" |
| | ratio | 0.86 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 50.26% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "It spoke of answers and the unraveling of mysteries that had plagued her since the Heartstone Pendant came into her life." | | 1 | "The trees seemed to lean in, their branches creaking and groaning with a voice that was not their own." | | 2 | "A sound pierced the silence—a low, mournful wail that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere." | | 3 | "The shadows around her began to coalesce, taking form and substance, revealing figures that were not entirely human." | | 4 | "She reached out with her senses, seeking the heart of the grove, seeking the magic that bound this place between worlds." | | 5 | "Rory's gaze did not waver, her resolve hardening with each passing second." | | 6 | "The grove's malevolent energy waned, replaced by a sense of tranquility that was as sudden as it was profound." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she declared (declare)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |