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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMETT26P10WY9KPR7DTGH1
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Model:
Hermes 3 405B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
1m 34s
Cost:
$0.002133
Provider:
DeepInfra
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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AI
The distinctive green neon sign above the entrance cast an eerie glow over the rain-slicked cobblestones. Rory ducked inside, her black hair plastered to her forehead. Silas
look
ed up from wiping down the bar, his hazel eyes widening in recognition. "Aurora? Aurora Carter?" She mustered a smile. "Hello, Silas. It's been a long time." "Too long," he said gruffly, setting down the rag. "What brings you to this part of town on a miserable night like this?" Rory slid onto a worn leather stool, shrugging out of her damp coat. "Chance, mostly. I moved into a flat nearby recently." She glanced around the dimly lit bar, taking in the old maps and black-and-white photographs covering the walls. "I see you haven't changed a thing." "Why mess with perfection?" Silas replied with a wry smile, his neatly trimmed beard matching his grey-streaked auburn hair. He poured her a whiskey without asking, sliding it across the polished wood. "Though I could say the same about you. You
look
just like I remember." Rory snorted
softly
, her bright blue eyes crinkling at the corners as she picked up the glass. "You always were a smooth talker, Si." She took a sip, savoring the familiar burn. "But we both know that's not true." He studied her thoughtfully, noting the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist peeking out from beneath her sleeve. "We've both got a few more miles on us, sure. But some things never change." "Maybe not for you," Rory murmured, her gaze distant. "Everything's different for me now." Silas leaned against the back counter, crossing his arms over his broad chest. His signet ring glinted in the low light. "How so?" She waved a hand vaguely. "I left Cardiff. Left...him. I'm starting over here." "I see," Silas said
slowly
, his brow
furrowing
. "That couldn't have been easy." Rory shook her head, her throat tight. "It wasn't. But it was necessary." She drained the rest of her whiskey in one swallow. "I couldn't stay there anymore, Si. Not after everything that happened." Silas limped out from behind the bar, his left knee stiff. He settled heavily onto the stool beside her. "You know you can talk to me, right? About anything." "I know," she whispered, blinking back tears. "But I'm not sure I'm ready to. Not yet." He covered her hand with his, squeezing
gently
. "Whenever you are, I'm here. I'll always be here for you, Aurora. No matter what." Rory managed a wobbly smile, turning her hand to clasp his. "Thank you, Silas. That means more than you know." They sat in companionable silence for a long moment, lost in their own thoughts. The
weight
of their shared history hung heavy between them - the years of friendship, the
unspoken
words, the paths not taken. "Remember when we used to dream about running away together?" Rory asked
suddenly
, a wistful note in her voice. "Selling everything we owned and just...disappearing?" Silas huffed a laugh. "I still have my bug-out bag packed. Old habits die hard, I guess." "We were so naive," she mused, a faraway
look
in her eyes. "Thinking we could just leave everything behind and start fresh somewhere new. No baggage, no regrets." "We were young," he agreed, his tone wry. "And maybe a little stupid." "Maybe," she conceded with a soft chuckle. "But it was a nice dream, wasn't it? The idea that we could just...escape. Be anyone we wanted to be." "It was," Silas said quietly, his gaze intent on her profile. "It still is, if you want it to be." Rory turned to
look
at him, her heart
suddenly
pounding. "What do you mean?" He held her gaze steadily, his expression serious. "I
mean that it's
never too late, Aurora. To start over, to be happy. You can still have the life you always wanted. The life you deserve." "I...I don't know if I can," she admitted, her voice trembling. "I've made so many mistakes, Si. Hurt so many people. I don't know if I deserve a second chance." "Everyone deserves a second chance," he said firmly, his grip tightening on her hand. "Especially you. You have a good heart, Aurora Carter. Don't ever forget that." Rory ducked her head, a tear sliding down her cheek. "I've missed you, Silas," she whispered. "I didn't realize how much until now." "I've missed you too," he said gruffly,
gently
tilting her chin up with his free hand. "More than you know." For a long moment, they just
look
ed at each other, the air heavy with
unspoken
emotion. Then Silas leaned in
slowly
, his intent clear. Rory's breath caught, her eyes fluttering closed as his lips brushed hers. The kiss was soft, almost chaste, but it rocked her to her core. When he pulled back, she could only stare at him, her heart in her throat. "Stay with me tonight," he murmured, his forehead pressed to hers. "Let me take care of you, just this once." And for the first time in a long time, Rory let herself need someone. Let herself be vulnerable. "Yes," she breathed, tangling her fingers in his hair. "God, yes." Silas stood, tugging her to her feet and into his arms. He held her tight, one hand cradling the back of her head as she buried her face in his chest. "Come on," he said
softly
, steering her towards the back of the bar. "I have a room upstairs." Rory followed him without question, her heart full to bursting. For tonight, at least, she wouldn't be alone. She wouldn't be afraid. And maybe, just maybe, it was the start of something new. Something real.
created_at
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2/17/2026, 1:48:28 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
0.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
17
adverbTagCount
7
adverbTags
0
"he said gruffly, setting down the rag [gruffly]"
1
"Silas said slowly, his brow furrowing [slowly]"
2
"she whispered, blinking back tears [back]"
3
"Silas said quietly, his gaze intent on her profile [quietly]"
4
"he said firmly, his grip tightening on her hand [firmly]"
5
"he said gruffly, gently tilting her chin up with his free hand [gruffly, gently]"
6
"he said softly, steering her towards the back of the bar [softly]"
15.3439%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
945
totalAiIsmAdverbs
8
found
0
adverb
"gently"
count
2
1
adverb
"slowly"
count
2
2
adverb
"softly"
count
2
3
adverb
"suddenly"
count
2
highlights
0
"gently"
1
"slowly"
2
"softly"
3
"suddenly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
57.6720%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
945
totalAiIsms
4
found
0
word
"unspoken"
count
2
1
word
"furrowing"
count
1
2
word
"weight"
count
1
highlights
0
"unspoken"
1
"furrowing"
2
"weight"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
56
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
56
filterMatches
0
"look"
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
87
matches
0
"mean that it's"
69.9526%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
37
mean
25.41
std
10.03
cv
0.395
sampleLengths
0
26
1
17
2
11
3
23
4
47
5
46
6
39
7
34
8
14
9
23
10
13
11
13
12
34
13
29
14
16
15
23
16
20
17
36
18
25
19
17
20
28
21
13
22
27
23
20
24
14
25
35
26
30
27
27
28
23
29
20
30
24
31
40
32
20
33
29
34
49
35
22
36
13
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
56
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
100
matches
(empty)
66.1886%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
562
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount
32
adverbRatio
0.05693950177935943
lyAdverbCount
20
lyAdverbRatio
0.03558718861209965
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
87
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
87
mean
10.8
std
5.27
cv
0.487
sampleLengths
0
16
1
10
2
14
3
3
4
4
5
7
6
9
7
14
8
13
9
27
10
7
11
19
12
13
13
14
14
17
15
15
16
7
17
19
18
15
19
9
20
5
21
13
22
8
23
2
24
5
25
8
26
8
27
5
28
7
29
16
30
11
31
11
32
8
33
10
34
7
35
9
36
8
37
15
38
11
39
9
40
14
41
22
42
19
43
6
44
4
45
13
46
12
47
16
48
8
49
5
71.6475%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
6
diversityRatio
0.47126436781609193
totalSentences
87
uniqueOpeners
41
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
17
fancyCount
15
fancyTags
0
"he said gruffly, setting down the rag (say gruffly, setting down)"
1
"Rory murmured, her gaze distant (murmur)"
2
"Silas said slowly, his brow furrowing (say slowly, furrow)"
3
"she whispered, blinking back tears (whisper, blink)"
4
"she mused, a faraway look in her eyes (muse)"
5
"he agreed, his tone wry (agree)"
6
"she conceded with a soft chuckle (concede)"
7
"Silas said quietly, his gaze intent on her profile (say quietly)"
8
"she admitted, her voice trembling (admit)"
9
"he said firmly, his grip tightening on her hand (say firmly, tighten)"
10
"she whispered (whisper)"
11
"he said gruffly, gently tilting her chin up with his free hand (say gruffly, gently tilt)"
12
"he murmured, his forehead pressed to hers (murmur, press)"
13
"she breathed, tangling her fingers in his hair (breathe, tangle)"
14
"he said softly, steering her towards the back of the bar (say softly, steer)"
75.3414%