| 75.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said tentatively [tentatively]" | | 1 | "She laughed again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |
| 78.18% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1146 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "barely above a whisper" | | 2 | "quickly" | | 3 | "hesitantly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1146 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "comforting" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "pounding" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "flicker" | | 6 | "furrowed" | | 7 | "unspoken" | | 8 | "pang" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "flickered" | | 11 | "unreadable" | | 12 | "tracing" | | 13 | "etching" | | 14 | "stark" | | 15 | "reminder" |
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| 33.33% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 3 | | found | | 0 | | label | "couldn't help but" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
| | 2 | | label | "flicker of emotion" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "couldn't help but feel" | | 1 | "The weight of those words" | | 2 | "A flicker of recognition" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 60 | | matches | | |
| 95.24% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 60 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1151 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.17% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 48 | | wordCount | 934 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 2.68 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Soho | 1 | | Rory | 25 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Eva | 20 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.162 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1151 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 29.68% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "escape, that she" | | 1 | "insist that she" | | 2 | "dawning that Eva" |
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| 89.20% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 31 | | mean | 37.13 | | std | 17.16 | | cv | 0.462 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 69 | | 1 | 50 | | 2 | 63 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 64 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 47 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 30 | | 11 | 40 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 29 | | 14 | 51 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 54 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 32 | | 20 | 30 | | 21 | 47 | | 22 | 27 | | 23 | 38 | | 24 | 34 | | 25 | 63 | | 26 | 64 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 44 | | 29 | 51 | | 30 | 44 |
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| 99.42% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 154 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 73 | | ratio | 0.068 | | matches | | 0 | "Across the room, nursing a glass of amber liquor, sat Eva — her oldest and dearest friend." | | 1 | "Gone was the vibrant, mischievous girl she had known — in her place was a woman worn down by the years, her eyes dulled and her mouth set in a thin, humorless line." | | 2 | "Rory felt a pang of guilt, remembering how they had parted ways — a heated argument, harsh words exchanged, and then nothing but silence." | | 3 | "Rory listened, her heart breaking as Eva recounted the litany of hardships that had befallen her — the loss of her job, the descent into addiction, the desperate attempts to claw her way back." | | 4 | "And in that moment, as their eyes met, a silent understanding passed between them — a shared acknowledgment of the weight of time and the irreversible changes that had torn them apart." |
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| 81.23% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 179 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 11 | | adverbRatio | 0.061452513966480445 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00558659217877095 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 73 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 73 | | mean | 15.77 | | std | 7.29 | | cv | 0.463 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 33 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 24 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 25 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 22 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 33 |
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| 65.75% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.410958904109589 | | totalSentences | 73 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 55.56% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, with a heavy sigh," |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "It couldn't be." | | 1 | "She gestured to the half-empty" | | 2 | "she said, a hint of" | | 3 | "she said tentatively" | | 4 | "She took another sip, the" | | 5 | "She reached out, her hand" | | 6 | "She laughed again, the sound" | | 7 | "she started, her words halting" | | 8 | "She had been so wrapped" | | 9 | "she whispered, her voice thick" | | 10 | "she said, her gaze distant" |
| | ratio | 0.183 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 43 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain had been falling" | | 1 | "The interior of the Raven's" | | 2 | "Rory's breath caught in her" | | 3 | "It couldn't be." | | 4 | "Rory had to blink several" | | 5 | "Rory hesitated for only a" | | 6 | "Rory's voice came out barely" | | 7 | "The other woman turned, and" | | 8 | "A flicker of recognition flashed" | | 9 | "Rory's brow furrowed with concern" | | 10 | "Eva let out a hollow," | | 11 | "She gestured to the half-empty" | | 12 | "Rory hesitated, torn between her" | | 13 | "Rory began, her voice soft" | | 14 | "Eva took a long sip" | | 15 | "The weight of those words" | | 16 | "Rory felt a pang of" | | 17 | "Rory murmured, the words feeling" | | 18 | "Eva's gaze flickered to Rory," | | 19 | "she said, a hint of" |
| | ratio | 0.717 | |
| 83.33% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "By the time Rory pushed" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 71.43% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory hesitated for only a moment before weaving through the scattered tables and patrons, her steps quickening with each passing second." | | 1 | "Rory felt a familiar ache in her chest, the kind that came with the realization that the person in front of her was no longer the vibrant, carefree friend she h…" | | 2 | "Rory listened, her heart breaking as Eva recounted the litany of hardships that had befallen her — the loss of her job, the descent into addiction, the desperat…" | | 3 | "And in that moment, as their eyes met, a silent understanding passed between them — a shared acknowledgment of the weight of time and the irreversible changes t…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory's voice came out, uncertainty lacing every syllable" | | 1 | "Rory began, her voice soft," | | 2 | "Eva took, the amber liquid burning a path down her throat" | | 3 | "she said, a hint of bitterness in her tone" | | 4 | "Rory pleaded, her blue eyes searching Eva's face" | | 5 | "Rory pleaded, her voice soft but insistent" | | 6 | "she started, her words halting and laced with pain" | | 7 | "she whispered, her voice thick with emotion" | | 8 | "she said, her gaze distant and unfocused" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Rory pleaded (plead)" | | 2 | "She laughed again (laugh)" | | 3 | "Rory pleaded (plead)" | | 4 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.286 | | leniency | 0.571 | | rawRatio | 0.625 | | effectiveRatio | 0.357 | |