Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMF3HGWGZYGCSZ32NGNP3R

Run Details

Duration:
23.8s
Cost:
$0.000512
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rory pulled her jacket tighter as she walked through Richmond Park, the night's chill seeping into her bones despite the summer season. She checked her watch again — 11:45 pm, right on time according to the cryptic instructions left for her at Silas' bar. Keep walking until you reach the ancient oaks, the note had said, and then wait. The Fae Grove isn't easy to find, but it'll find you. She scowled at the memory of the ominous message scrawled on torn parchment. Absurd mysticism, she thought, yet here you are. Her crescent-shaped scar throbbed faintly as it often did when she was anxious. A rustle of leaves made her heart rate spike, and she whirled to face the sound. "Hello?" Her voice echoed back, thin and reedy. The sprawling park remained silent, save for the distant hoot of an owl. Rory continued forward, her boots crunching against gravel. She soon reached a circle of towering oak trees, their gnarled branches extending like arms grasping for air. Rory hesitated before stepping between two gnarled trunks, her pearl-white teeth worrying her lower lip. A warm, resinous scent enveloped her — a stark contrast to the earlier cold. She looked around wildly, taking in the explosion of wildflowers in vibrant hues of sapphire, amethyst, and ruby. They bloomed underfoot and waist-high, Manuel's cradle, and Dame's violet — a year-round display that would be impossible in the mortal world. Rory had crossed into the Fae Grove. The standing stones pulsed with a faint inner light that illuminated the verdant clearing. Rory's hand strayed to the Heartstone pendant resting against her collarbone — a twin to the light emanating from the oaks. She wasn't alone. A crackle of energy arced between the stones, and she felt the fine hairs on her arms rise. The sky darkened above her, stars winking out one by one until only the gibbous moon remained, its pallid glow washing over the overgrown thicket. Rory's heart pounded in her chest like a rapid timpani as she whirled to face the loamy soil, wanting — no, needing — to flee. But it was too late now. The elaborate dance had begun, and she was ensnared in it. I wonder if I have the will to ask you, she thought, her fingers brushing the engraved writing at her neck. Every person has a price, and every heart has something to offer — even if that heart belonged to a thief. She was a larcenist after knowledge, not objects. A sultry voice purred from the shadows, "Oh, dearest dearest... what have we here?" Rory's shoulders relaxed infinitesimally but not her guard. "I require aid," she replied, her voice far steadier than she felt. "Mine and yours both." "A human woman walks into the Night of the Moons seeking help from the Lady of Death herself..." The Lady of Shadows materialized from behind an oak, her gown shimmering with motes of darkness and moonlight. Her black hair cascaded in intricate braids over her shoulders like rivers carved from ebony. Rory curtsied deeply, the soft grass cushioning her knees. "Indeed." "Well then, let us begin." The goddess waved one pale hand, and the standing stones ignited with scintillating heliotrope flames. "You'll find naught but truth in this grove." And so, Rory did. For hours, she knelt on the dewy earth, reciting incantations under her breath as the Fae and her kind listened. The words tasted of honey and cloves, numbing her tongue and lips. Energy hummed through her, guided by the all-powerful sorceress who employed scent and shadows to navigate the realm. Spells more convoluted than any eldritch equation wove themselves into a tapestry of magic. A protection against deceit. "Remember well your creation," the Lady whispered, her voice like silk brushing against Rory's skin, "For once you depart this hallowed ground, the incantation's fire shall flee from your grasp." Rory nodded, her throat tight with suppressed emotion. She had no place here amongst the wild and mystical inhabitants of the grove; she was Aurora Carter, born to the human realm. With that realization heavy on her heart, she stood on shaky limbs and glanced around the illuminated clearing one last time. And then she left, knowing she'd never return.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
33.33% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Her voice echoed back [back]"
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.167
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount698
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
28.37% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount698
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"throbbed"
count1
2
word"echoed"
count1
3
word"stark"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"dance"
count1
6
word"intricate"
count1
7
word"navigate"
count1
8
word"tapestry"
count1
9
word"silk"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"throbbed"
2"echoed"
3"stark"
4"pulsed"
5"dance"
6"intricate"
7"navigate"
8"tapestry"
9"silk"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
highlights
0"heart pounded in her chest"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences46
matches
0"was anxious"
80.75% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences46
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"wonder"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences50
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords705
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
63.66% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount637
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.73
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Keep1
Fae3
Grove2
Manuel1
Dame1
Heartstone1
Rory11
Lady2
Shadows1
Aurora1
Carter1
persons
0"Manuel"
1"Dame"
2"Rory"
3"Lady"
4"Aurora"
5"Carter"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
4"Heartstone"
globalScore0.637
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount705
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean32.05
std18.26
cv0.57
sampleLengths
070
134
216
329
433
561
635
73
843
942
1050
1114
1224
1318
1433
1510
1628
1772
1830
1931
2021
218
97.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences46
matches
0"was ensnared"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs109
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences50
ratio0.14
matches
0"She checked her watch again — 11:45 pm, right on time according to the cryptic instructions left for her at Silas' bar."
1"A warm, resinous scent enveloped her — a stark contrast to the earlier cold."
2"They bloomed underfoot and waist-high, Manuel's cradle, and Dame's violet — a year-round display that would be impossible in the mortal world."
3"Rory's hand strayed to the Heartstone pendant resting against her collarbone — a twin to the light emanating from the oaks."
4"Rory's heart pounded in her chest like a rapid timpani as she whirled to face the loamy soil, wanting — no, needing — to flee."
5"Every person has a price, and every heart has something to offer — even if that heart belonged to a thief."
6"She had no place here amongst the wild and mystical inhabitants of the grove; she was Aurora Carter, born to the human realm."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount89
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount3
adverbRatio0.033707865168539325
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences50
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences50
mean14.1
std6.61
cv0.469
sampleLengths
022
122
215
311
413
58
613
716
88
913
108
1118
1215
1314
1418
1522
167
1714
1821
193
2018
2125
2225
236
2411
2521
2621
278
2814
298
3012
314
3218
3318
3415
359
361
3720
388
394
4020
4112
4218
4314
444
4530
468
4723
4821
498
73.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.44
totalSentences50
uniqueOpeners22
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences46
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences46
matches
0"She checked her watch again"
1"She scowled at the memory"
2"Her crescent-shaped scar throbbed faintly"
3"Her voice echoed back, thin"
4"She soon reached a circle"
5"She looked around wildly, taking"
6"They bloomed underfoot and waist-high,"
7"She wasn't alone."
8"I wonder if I have"
9"She was a larcenist after"
10"she replied, her voice far"
11"Her black hair cascaded in"
12"She had no place here"
ratio0.283
36.09% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount39
totalSentences46
matches
0"Rory pulled her jacket tighter"
1"She checked her watch again"
2"The Fae Grove isn't easy"
3"She scowled at the memory"
4"Her crescent-shaped scar throbbed faintly"
5"A rustle of leaves made"
6"Her voice echoed back, thin"
7"The sprawling park remained silent,"
8"Rory continued forward, her boots"
9"She soon reached a circle"
10"Rory hesitated before stepping between"
11"A warm, resinous scent enveloped"
12"She looked around wildly, taking"
13"They bloomed underfoot and waist-high,"
14"Rory had crossed into the"
15"The standing stones pulsed with"
16"Rory's hand strayed to the"
17"She wasn't alone."
18"A crackle of energy arced"
19"The sky darkened above her,"
ratio0.848
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences46
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"They bloomed underfoot and waist-high, Manuel's cradle, and Dame's violet — a year-round display that would be impossible in the mortal world."
1"The standing stones pulsed with a faint inner light that illuminated the verdant clearing."
2"I wonder if I have the will to ask you, she thought, her fingers brushing the engraved writing at her neck."
3"Energy hummed through her, guided by the all-powerful sorceress who employed scent and shadows to navigate the realm."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she replied, her voice far steadier than she felt"
38.89% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"the Lady whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.222
leniency0.444
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.222
74.4844%