| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 87.45% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1195 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "lightly" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "cautiously" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1195 | | totalAiIsms | 43 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "looming" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "down her spine" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "oppressive" | | 8 | "footsteps" | | 9 | "echoing" | | 10 | "sense of" | | 11 | "anticipation" | | 12 | "pounding" | | 13 | "scanning" | | 14 | "pulse" | | 15 | "raced" | | 16 | "cacophony" | | 17 | "dancing" | | 18 | "traced" | | 19 | "could feel" | | 20 | "racing" | | 21 | "loomed" | | 22 | "beacon" | | 23 | "reminder" | | 24 | "quickened" | | 25 | "familiar" | | 26 | "unravel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was thick with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "felt a shiver" | | 1 | "a sense of anticipation" |
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| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 8 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 87 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1198 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the wind, she told herself." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 1192 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.84 | | worstName | "Grove" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 10 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Eva | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Eva" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | glossingSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "warmth that seemed to sync with her heartbeat" | | 1 | "felt like they existed on the edge of r" | | 2 | "seemed unnaturally loud the crunch of leaves and twigs echoing in the stillness" | | 3 | "voices that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere" | | 4 | "figure that seemed to radiate power" | | 5 | "stare that seemed to see right through her" | | 6 | "felt like a lifetime" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1198 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 51.72% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "trusting that it" | | 1 | "knew that whatever" | | 2 | "knew that whatever" |
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| 4.52% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 22 | | mean | 54.45 | | std | 9.03 | | cv | 0.166 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 74 | | 1 | 65 | | 2 | 52 | | 3 | 59 | | 4 | 46 | | 5 | 62 | | 6 | 66 | | 7 | 56 | | 8 | 41 | | 9 | 52 | | 10 | 54 | | 11 | 62 | | 12 | 49 | | 13 | 57 | | 14 | 45 | | 15 | 49 | | 16 | 43 | | 17 | 46 | | 18 | 48 | | 19 | 53 | | 20 | 47 | | 21 | 72 |
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| 97.20% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "was supposed" | | 1 | "were gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 201 | | matches | | |
| 44.33% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 87 | | ratio | 0.034 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory had learned to trust Eva's instincts, even when they led her to places like this — places that felt like they existed on the edge of reality." | | 1 | "She heard it again — a rustling, closer this time." | | 2 | "She couldn't make out the words, but the tone was unmistakable — a malevolent murmur that sent chills down her spine." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1097 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.02643573381950775 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010027347310847767 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 87 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 84.25% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 87 | | mean | 13.77 | | std | 4.97 | | cv | 0.361 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 32.76% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.21839080459770116 | | totalSentences | 87 | | uniqueOpeners | 19 | |
| 76.63% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the wind, she told" | | 1 | "Just the wind playing tricks" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 17.70% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 44 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "She had come here at" | | 2 | "She took a deep breath," | | 3 | "She glanced at her watch," | | 4 | "She felt a shiver run" | | 5 | "She had a purpose here," | | 6 | "Her footsteps seemed unnaturally loud," | | 7 | "She paused, listening intently." | | 8 | "She forced herself to keep" | | 9 | "She followed its guidance, trusting" | | 10 | "She heard it again —" | | 11 | "She stopped, her breath catching" | | 12 | "She blinked, and they were" | | 13 | "Her heart raced, the fear" | | 14 | "She was not alone here." | | 15 | "she called out, her voice" | | 16 | "She took a step forward," | | 17 | "She couldn't make out the" | | 18 | "She clutched the pendant, its" | | 19 | "She approached cautiously, her eyes" |
| | ratio | 0.506 | |
| 28.97% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 75 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stood at the" | | 1 | "The air was thick with" | | 2 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 3 | "The deep crimson gem pulsed" | | 4 | "She had come here at" | | 5 | "Rory had learned to trust" | | 6 | "She took a deep breath," | | 7 | "The moment she crossed the" | | 8 | "The sounds of the city" | | 9 | "Time moved differently here, she" | | 10 | "An hour inside could be" | | 11 | "She glanced at her watch," | | 12 | "The wildflowers brushed against her" | | 13 | "The trees around her were" | | 14 | "She felt a shiver run" | | 15 | "She had a purpose here," | | 16 | "Her footsteps seemed unnaturally loud," | | 17 | "She paused, listening intently." | | 18 | "A rustling sound came from" | | 19 | "The shadows between the trees" |
| | ratio | 0.862 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 54.95% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The deep crimson gem pulsed faintly, a subtle warmth that seemed to sync with her heartbeat." | | 1 | "She glanced at her watch, noting the time before venturing deeper into the clearing." | | 2 | "There was something off about the quiet, a sense of anticipation that made her skin prickle." | | 3 | "She forced herself to keep moving, her eyes scanning the darkness for any sign of what she was supposed to find." | | 4 | "The sense of wrongness grew with every step, a creeping dread that gnawed at the edges of her mind." | | 5 | "She took a step forward, then another, her eyes darting around, searching for any sign of movement." | | 6 | "She couldn't make out the words, but the tone was unmistakable — a malevolent murmur that sent chills down her spine." | | 7 | "She could feel the figure behind her, its presence a dark shadow that loomed over her." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she demanded, her voice trembling" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she called out (call out)" | | 1 | "she demanded (demand)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |