| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.455 | | leniency | 0.909 | | rawRatio | 0.067 | | effectiveRatio | 0.061 | |
| 65.87% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1172 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "barely above a whisper" | | 4 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 44.54% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1172 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "glinting" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "flicker" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "raced" | | 6 | "flicked" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "stomach" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "unreadable" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 102 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 121 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 8 | | markdownWords | 43 | | totalWords | 1166 | | ratio | 0.037 | | matches | | 0 | "You don’t have to run," | | 1 | "Not from him. Not from this." | | 2 | "Silas bought a bar in Soho. Can you believe it? The old spy, playing landlord." | | 3 | "kiddo" | | 4 | "I can’t go back there," | | 5 | "I won’t." | | 6 | "Call me when you get there," | | 7 | "No matter what." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 21 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 26 | | wordCount | 971 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.82 | | worstName | "Silas" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | London | 3 | | Cardiff | 2 | | Rory | 7 | | Soho | 1 | | Silas | 8 | | Evan | 1 | | Eva | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Evan" | | 5 | "Eva" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Cardiff" | | 2 | "Soho" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1166 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 121 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 50 | | mean | 23.32 | | std | 17.67 | | cv | 0.758 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 75 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 74 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 33 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 60 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 46 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 35 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 39 | | 16 | 51 | | 17 | 47 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 28 | | 21 | 42 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 31 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 39 | | 27 | 36 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 25 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 31 | | 39 | 23 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 45 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 25 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 26 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 86.36% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 176 | | matches | | 0 | "was, filling" | | 1 | "weren’t saying" | | 2 | "was watching" |
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| 1.18% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 121 | | ratio | 0.05 | | matches | | 0 | "The bar was quiet tonight—just a handful of regulars nursing their drinks, the low hum of conversation barely rising above the jazz record spinning on the old turntable." | | 1 | "She hadn’t seen him in—what?" | | 2 | "The regulars at the bar barely glanced up—this was his place, after all, and they knew better than to stare." | | 3 | "Now, she took in the familiar details—the maps on the walls, the black-and-white photos of faces she didn’t recognize, the way the light from the neon sign outside painted everything in shades of green." | | 4 | "She remembered that night—the way the platform had been slick with rain, the way she’d clutched her bag like it was the only thing keeping her from drowning." | | 5 | "The weight of it pressed down on her—the years, the silence, the way they’d both chosen to let each other go." |
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| 99.47% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 665 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.0406015037593985 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.016541353383458645 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 121 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 121 | | mean | 9.64 | | std | 7.36 | | cv | 0.764 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 30 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 31 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 59.23% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.38016528925619836 | | totalSentences | 121 | | uniqueOpeners | 46 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "Of course she had." | | 1 | "Just for a second." | | 2 | "Just enough to make her" | | 3 | "Then, slowly, he reached into" | | 4 | "Instead, he reached for the" | | 5 | "Then, slowly, he pushed it" |
| | ratio | 0.067 | |
| 55.56% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 37 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "She didn’t see him at" | | 1 | "It was the way the" | | 2 | "His coat was damp from" | | 3 | "He leaned slightly on his" | | 4 | "She hadn’t seen him in—what?" | | 5 | "He spotted her immediately." | | 6 | "His hazel eyes locked onto" | | 7 | "he said, his voice rougher" | | 8 | "She set it down, her" | | 9 | "*You don’t have to run,*" | | 10 | "he asked, nodding at her" | | 11 | "She crossed her arms, as" | | 12 | "She stopped, realizing her mistake" | | 13 | "She exhaled through her nose." | | 14 | "He leaned against the bar," | | 15 | "She had known." | | 16 | "she asked, because it was" | | 17 | "She poured it without looking" | | 18 | "He took it, his fingers" | | 19 | "She laughed, sharp and humorless." |
| | ratio | 0.411 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 64 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "The Raven’s Nest smelled of" | | 1 | "Rory wiped her hands on" | | 2 | "The bar was quiet tonight—just" | | 3 | "She didn’t see him at" | | 4 | "It was the way the" | | 5 | "A man stood in the" | | 6 | "His coat was damp from" | | 7 | "He leaned slightly on his" | | 8 | "Rory’s breath hitched." | | 9 | "She hadn’t seen him in—what?" | | 10 | "He spotted her immediately." | | 11 | "His hazel eyes locked onto" | | 12 | "A ghost of a smile" | | 13 | "he said, his voice rougher" | | 14 | "The glass in her hand" | | 15 | "She set it down, her" | | 16 | "The last time she’d seen" | | 17 | "*You don’t have to run,*" | | 18 | "Silas limped toward her, his" | | 19 | "The regulars at the bar" |
| | ratio | 0.711 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, she took in the" | | 1 | "*No matter what.*" | | 2 | "Now, he swirled the whiskey" |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "She crossed her arms, as if that could shield her from the weight of his gaze." | | 1 | "She flexed her fingers, as if she could hide the mark." |
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| 58.33% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "he said, his voice rougher than she remembered" | | 1 | "she asked, her voice barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.273 | | leniency | 0.545 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.061 | |