Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMFN5M5P77XGXPFJCYAK2S

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27.5s
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Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The dim lights of The Raven's Nest flickered on as Rory Carter pushed open the heavy wooden door, stepping into the familiar embrace of Silas' bar. She took a deep breath, inhaling the comforting scents of aged whiskey and worn leather. It had been far too long since she'd last found solace within these walls. Glancing around, Rory spotted Silas behind the bar, his grey-streaked auburn hair catching the light as he polished glasses with meticulous care. His eyes meet hers, and a flicker of recognition sparked within their hazel depths. Setting aside his cloth, Silas moved to greet her, his stride measured despite the slight limp in his left leg. "Rory, lass, it's been far too long," he said, his voice warm with genuine affection. "How've you been keeping?" "I'm doing alright, Silas," Rory replied, mustering a smile. "Just trying to stay afloat, you know?" As they settled into a secluded booth, Rory couldn't help but feel the weight of the unsaid. She'd left London so abruptly, without a proper goodbye to those who mattered most. Eva's words echoed in her mind, a painful reminder of their strained friendship. "I heard about what happened with Evan," Silas said gently, as if reading her thoughts. "I'm sorry, Rory." She nodded, her throat tightening. "It's... complicated. I just needed to get away, start fresh." Silas studied her, his keen gaze missing nothing. "You're thinner than I remember. And those shadows under your eyes... Are you taking care of yourself?" Rory shifted uncomfortably, her fingers tracing the condensation on her glass. "I'm managing. The job at the restaurant keeps me busy." A heavy silence fell between them, punctuated by the distant murmur of the bar's patrons. Silas leaned forward, his signet ring glinting as he rested his elbows on the table. "Rory, I know I'm not your father, but I've always considered you like a daughter. I just want what's best for you." A lump formed in her throat as she met his sincere gaze. "I know, Silas. And I appreciate that more than you can imagine." As the night wore on, they shared stories and laughter, reminiscing about old times. But beneath the surface, Rory could sense the undercurrent of unspoken words, the regret that hung heavy between them. It was late when the bar's door swung open, admitting a gust of damp London air. Rory glanced up, her breath catching as her eyes fell upon a figure from her past. "Laila?" the man said, his voice rich with disbelief. "Is that really you?" Rory felt the blood drain from her face as she rose to her feet. "Vincent... I don't believe it." Time seemed to stand still as they stared at each other, the years melting away. Vincent had changed, his once-clean-shaven face now framed by a rugged beard, his hair longer and tousled. "What are you doing here?" Rory asked, her voice barely above a whisper. She could feel Silas' eyes on her, his curiosity piqued. Vincent took a step closer, his gaze never leaving hers. "I'm meeting someone. But I'd much rather catch up with you." Rory's heart pounded in her chest, a storm of emotions swirling within her. She glanced back at Silas, who gave her a subtle nod of encouragement. "I'm free for a bit," she said, her words feeling thick and clumsy. "We could... grab a coffee or something?" Vincent's smile was warm, genuine. "I'd like that, Laila. It's been too long." As Rory stepped out into the chill of the night, arm in arm with a ghost from her past, she couldn't help but wonder if the wounds of time could ever truly heal.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
94.74% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Silas said gently [gently]"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.421
leniency0.842
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.105
67.21% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount610
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
3
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"really"
2"barely above a whisper"
3"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount610
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"comforting"
count1
3
word"solace"
count1
4
word"flicker"
count1
5
word"depths"
count1
6
word"measured"
count1
7
word"affection"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count1
10
word"reminder"
count1
11
word"tracing"
count1
12
word"silence"
count1
13
word"glinting"
count1
14
word"unspoken"
count1
15
word"whisper"
count1
16
word"could feel"
count1
17
word"chill"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"familiar"
2"comforting"
3"solace"
4"flicker"
5"depths"
6"measured"
7"affection"
8"weight"
9"echoed"
10"reminder"
11"tracing"
12"silence"
13"glinting"
14"unspoken"
15"whisper"
16"could feel"
17"chill"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches5
maxInWindow5
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
1
label"lump in throat"
count1
2
label"couldn't help but"
count2
3
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"heart pounded in her chest"
1"A lump formed in her throat"
2"couldn't help but feel"
3"couldn't help but wonder"
4"a flicker of recognition"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences34
matches
0"h with disbelief"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences34
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences47
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords610
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
28.32% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount452
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.43
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Rory11
Carter1
Silas6
London2
Vincent3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Carter"
4"Silas"
5"Vincent"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.283
windowScore0.667
66.67% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences30
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if reading her thoughts"
36.07% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.639
wordCount610
matches
0"not your father, but I've always considered you like a daughter"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
81.84% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs23
mean26.52
std11.58
cv0.436
sampleLengths
055
156
219
316
444
518
615
725
821
930
1022
1124
1233
1332
1413
1519
1632
1723
1821
1926
2020
2113
2233
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences34
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs80
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences47
ratio0
matches(empty)
83.53% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount136
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.058823529411764705
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.007352941176470588
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences47
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences47
mean12.98
std5.77
cv0.445
sampleLengths
026
115
214
322
414
520
615
74
89
97
1017
1114
1213
1315
143
155
1610
178
1817
1911
2010
2115
2215
2322
2412
2512
2614
2719
2816
2916
309
314
3214
335
3415
3517
3613
3710
3810
3911
4013
4113
4213
437
445
458
4633
75.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.46808510638297873
totalSentences47
uniqueOpeners22
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences34
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences34
matches
0"She took a deep breath,"
1"It had been far too"
2"His eyes meet hers, and"
3"he said, his voice warm"
4"She'd left London so abruptly,"
5"She nodded, her throat tightening."
6"It was late when the"
7"She could feel"
8"She glanced back at Silas,"
9"she said, her words feeling"
ratio0.294
48.24% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount28
totalSentences34
matches
0"The dim lights of The"
1"She took a deep breath,"
2"It had been far too"
3"His eyes meet hers, and"
4"he said, his voice warm"
5"Rory replied, mustering a smile"
6"She'd left London so abruptly,"
7"Eva's words echoed in her"
8"Silas said gently, as if"
9"She nodded, her throat tightening."
10"Silas studied her, his keen"
11"Rory shifted uncomfortably, her fingers"
12"A heavy silence fell between"
13"Silas leaned forward, his signet"
14"A lump formed in her"
15"It was late when the"
16"Rory glanced up, her breath"
17"the man said, his voice"
18"Rory felt the blood drain"
19"Time seemed to stand still"
ratio0.824
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences34
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"But beneath the surface, Rory could sense the undercurrent of unspoken words, the regret that hung heavy between them."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Silas said gently, as if reading her thoughts"
1"the man said, his voice rich with disbelief"
2"Rory asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
3"She could, his curiosity piqued"
4"she said, her words feeling thick and clumsy"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.316
leniency0.632
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
72.7498%