Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMFR9QEPV0VV0KDNXEG3B2

Run Details

Duration:
8.9s
Cost:
$0.001781
Provider:
Anthropic

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Fae Grove was eerie at night. Rory shivered as she stepped between the ancient oaks, the gnarled trunks casting long shadows across the clearing. The air was heavy with the scent of wildflowers, the blooms gleaming faintly in the moonlight. She had come here for a reason, though she wasn't certain why. A voice had whispered in the back of her mind, a pull she couldn't ignore. Something about the Heartstone pendant resting against her chest, its crimson depths pulsing with an otherworldly warmth. The boundary stones loomed ahead, their rough-hewn surfaces etched with symbols Rory couldn't decipher. She ran her fingers over the carvings, a tingling sensation running through her fingertips. A faint humming filled the air, and for a moment, she thought she glimpsed a shimmering figure beyond the stones. But when she blinked, it was gone. Rory frowned, her gaze sweeping the grove. The shadows seemed to shift and sway, as if some unseen force stirred the darkness. She strained her ears, but there was only silence, save for the distant hoot of an owl and the rustling of leaves in the breeze. Steeling herself, Rory stepped through the boundary stones. The air seemed to thicken around her, and a prickle of unease crawled up her spine. She paused, listening intently, but heard nothing except the pounding of her own heart. Onward she went, shoes crunching on the carpet of fallen leaves. The canopy of trees overhead blocked out the moon, casting the clearing in a deep, impenetrable gloom. Rory slowed her steps, one hand clutching the Heartstone pendant, the other tracing the contours of the standing stones as she moved deeper into the grove. A faint sound reached her ears, like a whisper just on the edge of hearing. Rory froze, her breath catching in her throat. She strained to listen, but the sound had faded, swallowed by the silence. Slowly, she turned, her gaze sweeping the area behind her. There — a flicker of movement in the shadows. Rory's heart pounded as she stared, willing her eyes to adjust to the darkness. She took a step backward, the rough stone pressing into her palm. The pendant felt warm against her skin, its glow intensifying. A chill swept over her, and Rory shuddered. She couldn't shake the feeling that she was being watched, that something was out there in the darkness, studying her. Swallowing hard, she turned and hurried forward, the leaves crunching beneath her feet. The grove seemed to close in around her, the trees looming ever higher. Rory's breathing grew ragged, her pulse pounding in her ears. She glanced over her shoulder, but the darkness was impenetrable. An owl hooted in the distance, the sound echoing through the clearing. Rory froze, her gaze fixed on a spot just beyond the boundary stones. There, in the shadows, she glimpsed a shape, a figure that seemed to shift and blur. Her heart hammered in her chest as she stared, transfixed. She blinked, and the figure was gone. Rory turned and ran, her legs pumping as she raced through the grove. The shadows seemed to reach for her, grasping and clawing. The pendant grew hot against her skin, its glow flaring to life. Rory clutched it tightly, its warmth a reassuring anchor in the darkness. She burst through the boundary stones, the grove vanishing behind her. Rory stumbled, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She whirled, half-expecting to see the figure lurking at the edge of the clearing. But the grove was silent, the shadows still. Rory stood there for a long moment, her gaze scanning the area. The pendant's glow had faded, leaving her in near-darkness. Slowly, she turned and made her way back towards the path, her steps quickening with each passing moment. As she walked, Rory couldn't shake the feeling that she was being followed. The hairs on the back of her neck prickled, and she fought the urge to look over her shoulder. The grove had been unnerving, but this was different — a tangible sense of danger that sent shivers down her spine. Rory emerged from the trees, the familiar sounds of the park greeting her. She paused, her gaze sweeping the area. Nothing seemed out of the ordinary, and yet she couldn't shake the unease that had settled over her. With a heavy sigh, Rory continued on, her steps quickening as she made her way towards the exit. The pendant felt cool against her skin, its earlier warmth faded. She couldn't help but glance down at it, the crimson depths staring back at her like an unblinking eye. As Rory stepped out of the park and onto the street, she couldn't help but feel a lingering sense of unease. The grove had unsettled her, and she couldn't shake the feeling that she had been watched — that something had been following her, lurking just out of sight. She shivered, pulling her jacket tighter around herself. The Heartstone pendant felt heavy against her chest, a constant reminder of the strange power that had drawn her to the grove. Rory couldn't help but wonder what else might be out there, waiting in the shadows.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
82.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount859
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount859
totalAiIsms32
found
0
word"gleaming"
count1
1
word"depths"
count2
2
word"otherworldly"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count3
4
word"loomed"
count1
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"pounding"
count2
8
word"gloom"
count1
9
word"tracing"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"flicker"
count1
12
word"chill"
count1
13
word"looming"
count1
14
word"pulse"
count1
15
word"echoing"
count1
16
word"transfixed"
count1
17
word"pumping"
count1
18
word"raced"
count1
19
word"scanning"
count1
20
word"tangible"
count1
21
word"sense of"
count2
22
word"sent shivers down"
count1
23
word"familiar"
count1
24
word"unsettled"
count1
25
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"gleaming"
1"depths"
2"otherworldly"
3"warmth"
4"loomed"
5"etched"
6"silence"
7"pounding"
8"gloom"
9"tracing"
10"whisper"
11"flicker"
12"chill"
13"looming"
14"pulse"
15"echoing"
16"transfixed"
17"pumping"
18"raced"
19"scanning"
20"tangible"
21"sense of"
22"sent shivers down"
23"familiar"
24"unsettled"
25"reminder"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
1
label"air was thick with"
count1
2
label"couldn't help but"
count2
highlights
0"heart hammered in her chest"
1"The air was heavy with"
2"couldn't help but feel"
3"couldn't help but wonder"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
29.48% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences63
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences63
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords862
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"With a heavy sigh, Rory continued on, her steps quickening as she made her way towards the exit."
39.79% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount862
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity2.2
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Fae1
Grove1
Heartstone3
Rory19
persons
0"Rory"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore0.398
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"figure that seemed to shift and blur"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount862
matches(empty)
60.85% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences63
matches
0"watched, that something"
1"watched — that something"
0.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs19
mean45.37
std4.92
cv0.109
sampleLengths
041
144
255
347
438
554
646
745
841
945
1046
1147
1241
1339
1453
1538
1648
1749
1845
77.42% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences63
matches
0"was gone"
1"being watched"
2"was gone"
3"being followed"
4"been watched "
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs160
matches(empty)
6.80% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences63
ratio0.048
matches
0"There — a flicker of movement in the shadows."
1"The grove had been unnerving, but this was different — a tangible sense of danger that sent shivers down her spine."
2"The grove had unsettled her, and she couldn't shake the feeling that she had been watched — that something had been following her, lurking just out of sight."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount862
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.01740139211136891
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.008120649651972157
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences63
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
82.73% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences63
mean13.68
std4.88
cv0.357
sampleLengths
07
118
216
312
415
517
614
714
820
97
107
1115
1225
138
1416
1514
1611
1717
1826
1915
208
2113
2210
239
2414
2512
2610
278
2820
2913
3013
3110
3210
3312
3413
3516
3610
377
3813
3910
4012
4112
4211
438
4414
458
4612
479
4818
4913
46.83% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.25396825396825395
totalSentences63
uniqueOpeners16
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences63
matches
0"Slowly, she turned, her gaze"
1"Slowly, she turned and made"
ratio0.032
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences63
matches
0"She had come here for"
1"She ran her fingers over"
2"She strained her ears, but"
3"She paused, listening intently, but"
4"She strained to listen, but"
5"She took a step backward,"
6"She couldn't shake the feeling"
7"She glanced over her shoulder,"
8"Her heart hammered in her"
9"She blinked, and the figure"
10"She burst through the boundary"
11"She whirled, half-expecting to see"
12"She paused, her gaze sweeping"
13"She couldn't help but glance"
14"She shivered, pulling her jacket"
ratio0.238
31.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences63
matches
0"The Fae Grove was eerie"
1"Rory shivered as she stepped"
2"The air was heavy with"
3"She had come here for"
4"A voice had whispered in"
5"Something about the Heartstone pendant"
6"The boundary stones loomed ahead,"
7"She ran her fingers over"
8"A faint humming filled the"
9"Rory frowned, her gaze sweeping"
10"The shadows seemed to shift"
11"She strained her ears, but"
12"The air seemed to thicken"
13"She paused, listening intently, but"
14"Onward she went, shoes crunching"
15"The canopy of trees overhead"
16"Rory slowed her steps, one"
17"A faint sound reached her"
18"Rory froze, her breath catching"
19"She strained to listen, but"
ratio0.857
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Rory's breathing grew ragged, her pulse pounding in her ears."
1"The grove had been unnerving, but this was different — a tangible sense of danger that sent shivers down her spine."
2"The Heartstone pendant felt heavy against her chest, a constant reminder of the strange power that had drawn her to the grove."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
73.0396%