Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMFT1Z05EZJZCJCV5DJ9YZ

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Duration:
19.7s
Cost:
$0.038215
Provider:
Azure

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter stood at the edge of the Fae Grove, the ancient oak standing stones looming like silent sentinels in the moonlight. The air was thick with the scent of wildflowers, their vibrant colors muted in the silvery glow. She adjusted the strap of her messenger bag, the weight of the Heartstone Pendant resting heavily against her chest. The deep crimson gem pulsed faintly, a subtle warmth seeping through the fabric of her shirt. She had come here at Eva's insistence, a cryptic message urging her to find something important in the Grove. Rory had learned to trust Eva's instincts, even when they led her to places like this — places that felt like they existed just a step out of sync with the rest of the world. She took a deep breath, the cool night air filling her lungs, and stepped past the boundary marked by the standing stones. The moment she crossed into the clearing, the atmosphere shifted. The usual sounds of Richmond Park — the distant hum of traffic, the rustle of leaves in the breeze — faded away, replaced by an eerie stillness. Rory's footsteps seemed unnaturally loud on the soft grass, each step echoing in the silence. She glanced around, her bright blue eyes scanning the shadows that clung to the edges of the clearing. Something felt off. She couldn't quite put her finger on it, but the hairs on the back of her neck stood on end. She tightened her grip on the strap of her bag and pressed on, her eyes drawn to the center of the Grove where a faint, otherworldly light shimmered. As she approached, the light resolved into a small pool of water, its surface perfectly still and reflecting the moonlight like a mirror. Rory knelt beside it, her reflection staring back at her with an intensity that made her uneasy. She reached into her bag and pulled out the Heartstone Pendant, holding it up to the light. The gem's inner glow seemed to pulse in time with her heartbeat, casting a faint crimson hue over her face. She was about to lower the pendant when she heard it — a soft, almost imperceptible whisper. Rory froze, her breath catching in her throat. The whisper came again, a sibilant murmur that seemed to come from all around her. She turned slowly, her eyes darting to the shadows at the edge of the clearing. There was nothing there, just the dark shapes of trees and the faint outline of the standing stones. "Hello?" she called out, her voice sounding small and uncertain in the stillness. There was no response, just the whispering that seemed to grow louder, more insistent. Rory stood up, her heart pounding in her chest. She took a step back, her foot slipping on the damp grass. She caught herself, her eyes never leaving the shadows. Something moved at the edge of her vision, a flicker of motion that made her spin around. There was nothing there, just the empty clearing and the silent trees. She swallowed hard, her mouth dry. The whispering grew louder, a cacophony of voices that seemed to press in on her from all sides. Rory backed away from the pool, her eyes wide with fear. She clutched the Heartstone Pendant, its warmth a small comfort in the growing darkness. She had to get out of here, had to find Eva and figure out what was going on. She turned and started to run, her footsteps pounding against the grass. The whispering followed her, growing louder and more frantic. She glanced over her shoulder, her breath coming in ragged gasps. The shadows seemed to move, to reach out for her with dark, grasping fingers. She stumbled, her foot catching on a root, and fell to the ground. The pendant slipped from her grasp, landing with a soft thud in the grass. Rory scrambled to her feet, her eyes searching frantically for the pendant. She spotted it a few feet away, its crimson glow a beacon in the darkness. She lunged for it, her fingers closing around the cool metal of the chain. As she stood up, she felt a cold hand close around her wrist. She screamed, the sound echoing through the clearing. She spun around, her eyes wide with terror. There was no one there, just the empty clearing and the silent trees. She looked down at her wrist, the small crescent-shaped scar from her childhood accident standing out starkly against her pale skin. The cold sensation lingered, a phantom grip that made her shiver. Rory clutched the pendant to her chest and ran, her breath coming in short, panicked bursts. The whispering grew louder, a chorus of voices that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere. She reached the edge of the clearing, the ancient oak standing stones looming ahead of her. She pushed through the boundary, the air around her seeming to shimmer and warp. As she crossed back into Richmond Park, the whispering stopped abruptly. The familiar sounds of the park returned, the distant hum of traffic and the rustle of leaves in the breeze. Rory stumbled to a halt, her chest heaving as she tried to catch her breath. She looked back at the Grove, the standing stones now just dark shapes against the night sky. She had to find Eva, had to figure out what was happening. She turned and started walking, her steps unsteady but determined. The Heartstone Pendant pulsed faintly against her chest, its warmth a reminder of the strange, otherworldly place she had just left. As she made her way through the park, the sense of wrongness lingered, a shadow that clung to her like a second skin. She couldn't shake the feeling that she was being watched, that something had followed her out of the Grove. She quickened her pace, her eyes scanning the darkness for any sign of movement. The night seemed to stretch on endlessly, the path ahead of her winding through the trees like a serpent. She kept moving, her mind racing with questions and fears. What had she seen in the Grove? What was the source of the whispering? And most importantly, what did Eva know about all of this? Rory's thoughts were interrupted by a sudden rustling in the bushes to her left. She froze, her heart pounding in her chest. She turned slowly, her eyes wide with fear. The bushes were still, the darkness impenetrable. She took a step back, her breath coming in short, panicked bursts. A figure emerged from the shadows, its form indistinct and shrouded in darkness. Rory's breath caught in her throat, her body tensing with fear. The figure moved closer, its features becoming clearer in the moonlight. It was a woman, her face pale and her eyes wide with terror. "Rory," the woman whispered, her voice trembling. "You have to get out of here. It's not safe." Rory's eyes widened in shock. "Eva?" she gasped, her voice barely a whisper. "What are you doing here?" Eva shook her head, her eyes darting around the darkness. "There's no time to explain. We have to go, now." Rory nodded, her mind racing with questions. She followed Eva, her steps quick and unsteady. The sense of wrongness grew stronger, a palpable presence that seemed to press in on her from all sides. She glanced over her shoulder, her heart pounding in her chest. The shadows seemed to move, to reach out for her with dark, grasping fingers. She quickened her pace, her breath coming in short, panicked bursts. She had to get out of here, had to find safety. She clutched the Heartstone Pendant to her chest, its warmth a small comfort in the growing darkness. As they made their way through the park, the sense of wrongness lingered, a shadow that clung to them like a second skin. Rory couldn't shake the feeling that they were being watched, that something had followed them out of the Grove. She quickened her pace, her eyes scanning the darkness for any sign of movement. The night seemed to stretch on endlessly, the path ahead of them winding through the trees like a serpent. They kept moving, their minds racing with questions and fears. What had they seen in the Grove? What was the source of the whispering? And most importantly, what did Eva know about all of this? As they reached the edge of the park, the sense of wrongness began to fade, the familiar sounds of the city returning. Rory took a deep breath, the cool night air filling her lungs. She looked at Eva, her eyes filled with questions. Eva shook her head, her expression grim. "We'll talk later," she said, her voice low. "For now, we need to get somewhere safe." Rory nodded, her mind racing with thoughts and fears. She followed Eva, her steps quick and determined. The Heartstone Pendant pulsed faintly against her chest, its warmth a reminder of the strange, otherworldly place they had just left. As they made their way through the city, the sense of wrongness lingered, a shadow that clung to them like a second skin. Rory couldn't shake the feeling that they were being watched, that something had followed them out of the Grove. She quickened her pace, her eyes scanning the darkness for any sign of movement. The night seemed to stretch on endlessly, the path ahead of them winding through the city like a serpent. They kept moving, their minds racing with questions and fears. What had they seen in the Grove? What was the source of the whispering? And most importantly, what did Eva know about all of this? As they reached the safety of Eva's flat, Rory took a deep breath, the cool night air filling her lungs. She looked at Eva, her eyes filled with questions. Eva shook her head, her expression grim. "We'll talk later," she said, her voice low. "For now, we need to get some rest." Rory nodded, her mind racing with thoughts and fears. She followed Eva inside, the Heartstone Pendant pulsing faintly against her chest. The sense of wrongness lingered, a shadow that clung to her like a second skin. She couldn't shake the feeling that they were being watched, that something had followed them out of the Grove. As she lay in bed that night, the events of the evening replayed in her mind. The whispering, the shadows, the sense of being watched — it all felt like a nightmare she couldn't wake up from. She clutched the Heartstone Pendant to her chest, its warmth a small comfort in the darkness. Sleep came slowly, her mind filled with questions and fears. What had she seen in the Grove? What was the source of the whispering? And most importantly, what did Eva know about all of this? As she drifted off to sleep, the sense of wrongness lingered, a shadow that clung to her like a second skin. She couldn't shake the feeling that they were being watched, that something had followed them out of the Grove. The night stretched on endlessly, the darkness filled with whispers and shadows.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
78.4599% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1857
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count3
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"slowly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
13.8395% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1857
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"palpable"
count1
1
word"cacophony"
count1
2
word"beacon"
count1
3
word"sentinels"
count1
4
word"flicker"
count1
5
word"shimmered"
count1
6
word"otherworldly"
count3
7
word"looming"
count2
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count2
10
word"echoing"
count2
highlights
0"palpable"
1"cacophony"
2"beacon"
3"sentinels"
4"flicker"
5"shimmered"
6"otherworldly"
7"looming"
8"weight"
9"footsteps"
10"echoing"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"The air was thick with"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences132
matches(empty)
92.8854% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount14
narrationSentences132
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"started to"
2"tried to"
3"began to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount5
totalSentences137
matches
0"watched, that something"
1"watched, that something"
2"watched, that something"
3"watched, that something"
4"watched, that something"
47.4715% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean50.3
std15.9
cv0.316
sampleLengths
074
176
270
351
477
573
657
753
855
961
1054
1161
1262
1363
1443
1556
1654
1749
1848
1917
2018
2120
2245
2353
2456
2554
2643
2723
2838
2956
3054
3136
3216
3355
3453
3535
3652
97.9798% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences132
matches
0"being watched"
1"were interrupted"
2"being watched"
3"being watched"
4"being watched"
5"being watched "
6"being watched"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs302
matches
0"was going"
1"was happening"
94.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1807
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount57
adverbRatio0.03154399557277255
lyAdverbCount25
lyAdverbRatio0.01383508577753182
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences137
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
99.3764% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences137
mean13.58
std5.41
cv0.398
sampleLengths
022
117
219
316
419
535
622
710
827
915
1018
113
1220
1328
1423
1517
1617
1720
1817
198
2015
2115
2218
2313
2414
259
2612
279
2817
2912
306
3118
3211
3314
3418
3512
369
3711
3814
3913
4014
4112
4215
4314
4413
458
468
4713
4821
4911
36.8613% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.13138686131386862
totalSentences137
uniqueOpeners18
75.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"the woman whispered, her voice trembling (whisper)"
1"gasped (gasp)"
84.4632%