| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 75.87% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1036 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gently" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "slowly" | | 4 | "tightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1036 | | totalAiIsms | 30 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "facade" | | 2 | "throb" | | 3 | "sense of" | | 4 | "foreboding" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "scanning" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "trembled" | | 10 | "footsteps" | | 11 | "could feel" | | 12 | "weight" | | 13 | "down her spine" | | 14 | "pounding" | | 15 | "chilled" | | 16 | "raced" | | 17 | "beacon" | | 18 | "wavering" | | 19 | "cacophony" | | 20 | "looming" | | 21 | "sentinels" | | 22 | "amiss" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sense of foreboding" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 55 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 55 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1035 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 72.71% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 1035 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.55 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 1 | | Carter | 2 | | Isolde | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 3 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 2 | | Earth | 1 | | Rory | 16 | | London | 1 | | Hel | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Pendant" | | 4 | "Rory" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.727 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 13.64% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "silence that seemed to demand respect, to remind her that she was an intruder in this sacred place" | | 1 | "wail that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once" | | 2 | "force that seemed to respond to her desperation" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1035 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | |
| 30.80% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 20 | | mean | 51.75 | | std | 13.34 | | cv | 0.258 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 81 | | 1 | 76 | | 2 | 70 | | 3 | 52 | | 4 | 63 | | 5 | 62 | | 6 | 45 | | 7 | 65 | | 8 | 42 | | 9 | 51 | | 10 | 41 | | 11 | 47 | | 12 | 55 | | 13 | 50 | | 14 | 36 | | 15 | 36 | | 16 | 34 | | 17 | 39 | | 18 | 48 | | 19 | 42 |
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| 86.12% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "been given" | | 1 | "was said" | | 2 | "was broken" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 161 | | matches | | 0 | "was beginning" | | 1 | "was holding" |
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| 90.91% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 55 | | ratio | 0.018 | | matches | | 0 | "The silence was broken by a sound that chilled her to the bone—a low, mournful wail that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1036 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 26 | | adverbRatio | 0.025096525096525095 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006756756756756757 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 55 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 61.61% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 55 | | mean | 18.82 | | std | 5.72 | | cv | 0.304 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 30 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 26 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 25 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 27 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 26 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 24 |
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| 39.09% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.23636363636363636 | | totalSentences | 55 | | uniqueOpeners | 13 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come to the" | | 1 | "It had been given to" | | 2 | "She had come alone, a" | | 3 | "She told herself it was" | | 4 | "She could feel the weight" | | 5 | "She had faced the unknown" | | 6 | "She took a deep breath," | | 7 | "Its form was indistinct, a" | | 8 | "She could feel the power" | | 9 | "Her lips parted, and the" | | 10 | "She knew she had to" | | 11 | "She could feel its energy" | | 12 | "She burst through the underbrush," | | 13 | "She collapsed to her knees," |
| | ratio | 0.255 | |
| 14.55% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 49 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "The night air was crisp" | | 1 | "The wildflowers, a riot of" | | 2 | "Rory's hand instinctively reached for" | | 3 | "She had come to the" | | 4 | "The grove was a place" | | 5 | "The silver chain of the" | | 6 | "It had been given to" | | 7 | "The pendant was said to" | | 8 | "Rory's breath misted in the" | | 9 | "The trees here were ancient," | | 10 | "The moon cast a silver" | | 11 | "She had come alone, a" | | 12 | "The silence of the grove" | | 13 | "The hairs on the back" | | 14 | "A rustle to her left" | | 15 | "The underbrush was thick, a" | | 16 | "She told herself it was" | | 17 | "The pendant's glow seemed to" | | 18 | "Rory's hand trembled slightly as" | | 19 | "She could feel the weight" |
| | ratio | 0.891 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "The night air was crisp against Aurora Carter's skin as she stepped beyond the shelter of the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of Isolde's g…" | | 1 | "The wildflowers, a riot of color even in the moonlight, seemed to whisper secrets as they swayed gently in the breeze that carried the scent of earth and old ma…" | | 2 | "It had been given to her by an unknown benefactor, a guide in her journey through the tangled web of the supernatural that lurked beneath the mundane facade of …" | | 3 | "The moon cast a silver glow over everything, turning the grove into a monochrome landscape that shifted and danced with the wind." | | 4 | "The underbrush was thick, a tangle of shadows that could hide any number of creatures." | | 5 | "She could feel the weight of unseen eyes upon her, a creeping sensation that slithered down her spine." | | 6 | "The grove was still, the wildflowers no longer swaying, as if the world itself was holding its breath." | | 7 | "She took a deep breath, steeling herself against the fear that threatened to overwhelm her." | | 8 | "She could feel the power radiating off it, a sense of ancient malevolence that made her blood run cold." | | 9 | "The figure stopped, its form solidifying into something resembling a woman, though her eyes were empty voids, and her skin was the pallor of moonlight." | | 10 | "She could feel its energy coursing through her, a wild, untamed force that seemed to respond to her desperation." | | 11 | "The grove was silent once more, the wildflowers motionless, as if nothing had ever been amiss." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |