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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMG0XKY52SRAWYGM0W7Y2G
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Model:
Claude 3 Haiku
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
18.6s
Cost:
$0.002265
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Meta
AI
The Raven's Nest
was cloaked
in its usual veil of smoky intimacy, the dim lighting and muted chatter creating an air of secrecy that had long ago become Silas Blackwood's refuge. As he wiped down the bar, the familiar motions of his hands belying the slow ache in his knee, he let his gaze drift to the entrance — an old habit, honed by years in the intelligence field, of monitoring who came and went. The bell above the door chimed, and Silas looked up, mildly curious. His eyebrows rose as a tall, slender figure stepped inside, the neon-green glow of the sign outside casting sharp angles across an all-too-familiar face. "Aurora Carter," he murmured, the name rolling off his tongue with a hint of surprise. It had been years since he'd last seen her, the once vibrant young woman who had lived above his bar, her laughter and quick wit a welcome distraction from the shadows that so often clung to him. Rory's gaze swept the room, and for a moment, Silas saw a glimmer of the girl he remembered — the one who had sought refuge here, her bright blue eyes alight with a quiet strength that belied her youth. But then the moment passed, and Silas watched as her features settled into a
carefully
neutral expression, the lines of her face more pronounced, her movements more guarded. "Silas," she acknowledged, inclining her head as she approached the bar. "It's been a while." "That it has," Silas replied, reaching for a glass and pouring a generous measure of Scotch. He slid it across the bartop, his eyes searching hers. "I have to say, I'm a bit surprised to see you back in London. Last I heard, you were—" "Avoiding it, I know," Rory interjected, her tone wry as she accepted the glass, her long fingers curling around the crystal. "Circumstances have changed." She took a sip, the amber liquid swirling as she tilted the glass, her gaze distant. Silas waited, letting the silence stretch between them. He had learned long ago that the best way to draw Rory out was to simply give her space, to let her find the words in her own time. And sure enough, after a beat, she continued. "I'm...I'm sorry, Silas. For disappearing like that. It wasn't fair to you, or to anyone else." She shook her head, a rueful smile tugging at the corner of her mouth. "I suppose I was running, in the end. Running from myself, from the life I thought I wanted." Silas nodded
slowly
, his expression understanding. "You always did have a talent for that," he said, his voice low. "Leaving when things got...difficult." Rory flinched, and Silas saw the flash of hurt in her eyes,
quickly
masked. "I know," she murmured, taking another sip of her drink. "I've regretted it more times than I can count." Silas watched her, the
weight
of years passing between them as he considered his next words. "So what brought you back?" he asked finally, his gaze searching her face. "Last I heard, you were working in Dublin, making a name for yourself." Rory's lips quirked in a rueful smile. "Dublin," she
echoed
, a hint of bitterness in her tone. "Yes, that...that didn't quite work out as planned." She paused, her fingers tightening around the glass. "I suppose you could say I'm looking for a new start. A chance to...to right some old wrongs." Silas arched a brow, but before he could respond, the bell above the door chimed again, and a group of patrons spilled in, their laughter and chatter cutting through the hush that had settled between them. Rory glanced over her shoulder, her posture stiffening
slightly
, and Silas saw the
flicker
of unease in her eyes. "Come on," he said quietly, gesturing towards the back of the bar. "Let's talk somewhere more private." Rory hesitated for only a moment before nodding, following him through the crowd and into the dimly lit back room, the door clicking shut behind them, muffling the noise from the main bar. Silas moved to the corner, retrieving a bottle of aged whiskey and pouring two generous measures, handing one to Rory. "So," he said, settling into one of the worn armchairs, "what happened in Dublin?" Rory sank into the chair across from him, cradling the glass in her hands. For a long moment, she was silent, her gaze fixed on the amber liquid. Then, with a soft sigh, she
began to
speak. "After I left London, I...I thought I had it all figured out, you know?" She shook her head, a wry smile tugging at her lips. "The perfect job, the perfect life. I was going to make a difference, to
prove that I
could be more than just the scared little girl who ran away." She paused, taking a sip of her drink. "But it didn't take long for the cracks to start showing." Silas listened, his expression grim, as Rory recounted the long hours, the endless bureaucracy, the growing sense of disillusionment that had
slowly
crept in. "I thought I was making a difference," she murmured, her voice
tinged
with bitterness. "But in the end, I was just another cog in the machine, and the work felt...hollow." She fell silent, her gaze dropping to her hands, and Silas could see
the weight of her words
in the slump of her shoulders, the tension in her frame. After a moment, he leaned forward, his voice low and steady. "So what changed? What brought you back?" Rory's eyes met his, and Silas
was struck
by the raw vulnerability he saw there, a
stark
contrast to the guarded, composed woman he had first encountered. "I...I
realized that I
had been running for so long, running from my past, from myself, that I'd forgotten who I was." She paused, taking a steadying breath. "And then I got a call from Eva. She...she needed help, Silas. And I couldn't just sit back and do nothing, not this time." Silas nodded, understanding dawning in his gaze. "So you came back to London. To help your friend." "Yes," Rory whispered, her fingers tightening around the glass. "And to...to try and make amends. For all the ways I've failed, both here and in Dublin." She met his gaze, her eyes brimming with a quiet resolve. "I'm done running, Silas. It's time I faced my demons, once and for all." Silas held her gaze, the
unspoken
weight
of years passing between them. Then,
slowly
, he raised his glass, a faint smile tugging at the corners of his mouth. "Welcome back, Rory."
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2/17/2026, 1:47:52 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
77.7778%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
12
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"he said quietly, gesturing towards the back of the bar [quietly]"
1
"Rory whispered, her fingers tightening around the glass [around]"
45.5041%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1101
totalAiIsmAdverbs
6
found
0
adverb
"carefully"
count
1
1
adverb
"quickly"
count
1
2
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
3
adverb
"slowly"
count
3
highlights
0
"carefully"
1
"quickly"
2
"slightly"
3
"slowly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
27.3388%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1101
totalAiIsms
8
found
0
word
"tinged"
count
1
1
word
"flicker"
count
1
2
word
"unspoken"
count
1
3
word
"stark"
count
1
4
word
"weight"
count
3
5
word
"echoed"
count
1
highlights
0
"tinged"
1
"flicker"
2
"unspoken"
3
"stark"
4
"weight"
5
"echoed"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"weight of words/silence"
count
1
highlights
0
"the weight of her words"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
48
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
48
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"began to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
2
totalSentences
63
matches
0
"prove that I"
1
"realized that I"
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
26
mean
42.31
std
22.35
cv
0.528
sampleLengths
0
75
1
88
2
67
3
15
4
45
5
40
6
45
7
48
8
23
9
33
10
42
11
51
12
55
13
17
14
53
15
14
16
37
17
73
18
54
19
40
20
7
21
79
22
17
23
51
24
28
25
3
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
48
matches
0
"was cloaked"
1
"was struck"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
130
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
776
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
27
adverbRatio
0.03479381443298969
lyAdverbCount
12
lyAdverbRatio
0.015463917525773196
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
63
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
63
mean
17.46
std
9.7
cv
0.555
sampleLengths
0
31
1
44
2
12
3
24
4
15
5
37
6
39
7
28
8
11
9
4
10
16
11
10
12
19
13
21
14
19
15
8
16
29
17
8
18
30
19
18
20
6
21
13
22
4
23
14
24
10
25
9
26
16
27
13
28
13
29
7
30
10
31
16
32
18
33
36
34
19
35
12
36
5
37
33
38
20
39
14
40
14
41
14
42
9
43
25
44
37
45
11
46
24
47
14
48
16
49
29
68.2540%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
2
diversityRatio
0.42857142857142855
totalSentences
63
uniqueOpeners
27
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
12
fancyCount
10
fancyTags
0
"he murmured, the name rolling off his tongue with a hint of surprise (murmur, roll)"
1
"she acknowledged, inclining her head as she approached the bar (acknowledge, incline approach)"
2
"Silas replied, reaching for a glass and pouring a generous measure of Scotch (reply, reach pour)"
3
"Rory interjected, her tone wry as she accepted the glass, her long fingers curling around the crystal (interject, accept)"
4
"she murmured, taking another sip of her drink (murmur, take)"
5
"she echoed, a hint of bitterness in her tone (echo)"
6
"he said quietly, gesturing towards the back of the bar (say quietly, gesture)"
7
"he said, settling into one of the worn armchairs (say, settle)"
8
"she murmured, her voice tinged with bitterness (murmur, tinged)"
9
"Rory whispered, her fingers tightening around the glass (whisper, tighten around)"
83.4632%