Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMGC7JX0JD0YDV5HTVGCCQ

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Duration:
8.6s
Cost:
$0.023620
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter pushed open the heavy wooden door of The Raven's Nest, the familiar creak of its hinges a welcome sound. The dim lighting inside was a stark contrast to the garish neon of Soho's streets, and she paused for a moment to let her eyes adjust. The bar was just as she remembered: walls adorned with old maps and black-and-white photographs, the air thick with the scent of aged whiskey and polished wood. She glanced up at the distinctive green neon sign above the entrance, its glow casting an eerie light on the cobblestone street outside. "Rory!" Silas Blackwood's voice boomed from behind the bar, his hazel eyes twinkling with recognition. He limped over, his silver signet ring catching the light as he extended his hand. "It's been too long." "Silas," she replied, a genuine smile spreading across her face as she shook his hand. "You haven't changed a bit." "Flattery will get you everywhere," he chuckled, his neatly trimmed beard twitching with amusement. "What brings you back to the Nest?" "Just needed a familiar place," she said, her voice softening. "It's been a rough week." Silas nodded, his expression turning serious. "Well, you're always welcome here. Can I get you your usual?" "Please," she said, sliding onto a barstool. She watched as he expertly mixed her drink, his movements precise despite the slight limp in his left leg. He placed the glass in front of her with a flourish. "One whiskey sour, just the way you like it." "Thanks, Si," she said, taking a sip. The familiar burn of the whiskey was comforting, a reminder of simpler times. As she savored her drink, the door creaked open again, and a figure stepped inside. Aurora's heart skipped a beat as she recognized the tall, broad-shouldered man with sandy hair and piercing green eyes. It was Evan, her ex. The years had been kind to him; he looked more rugged, more mature, but the sight of him still sent a shiver down her spine. Evan's eyes scanned the room, and when they landed on her, he froze. For a moment, neither of them moved, the weight of unspoken words hanging heavy in the air. Then, with a deep breath, he walked over to the bar. "Rory," he said, his voice a mix of surprise and something else she couldn't quite place. "I didn't expect to see you here." "Evan," she replied, her tone guarded. "It's been a while." "Yeah," he said, rubbing the back of his neck awkwardly. "Mind if I sit?" She hesitated, then nodded. "Sure." Silas, sensing the tension, gave them a nod and retreated to the back room, leaving them alone at the bar. Evan took the seat next to her, his presence both familiar and foreign. "You look good," he said, his eyes lingering on her face. "Different, but good." "Thanks," she replied, taking another sip of her drink. "You too." They sat in silence for a moment, the noise of the bar around them a distant hum. Finally, Evan spoke. "I've thought about you a lot, Rory. About us." She looked at him, her bright blue eyes searching his face for any sign of the man she once loved. "Have you?" "Yeah," he said, his voice heavy with regret. "I know I messed up. I was a different person back then." "We both were," she said, her tone softening. "But that doesn't change what happened." "I know," he said, his shoulders sagging. "I just... I wanted to apologize. For everything." Aurora studied him, the sincerity in his eyes catching her off guard. She had spent years building walls around her heart, but in this moment, she felt a crack in the armor. "I appreciate that," she said finally. "But it's not that simple." "I know," he repeated, his voice barely above a whisper. "I just needed you to know." They lapsed into silence again, the weight of their shared history pressing down on them. Aurora traced the rim of her glass with her finger, her mind racing with memories of their time together. The good times, the laughter, the love. And the bad times, the fights, the fear, the pain. "Why now?" she asked, breaking the silence. "Why after all these years?" Evan sighed, running a hand through his hair. "I've been doing a lot of thinking. About my life, my choices. I realized I needed to make amends, to try and fix what I broke." "And you think an apology will fix everything?" she asked, her voice tinged with bitterness. "No," he admitted. "But it's a start." Aurora looked at him, really looked at him, and saw the man he had become. He was different, changed by time and experience, just as she was. But the scars of their past were still there, etched into their souls. "I don't know if I can forgive you," she said, her voice trembling. "But I can try." Evan nodded, his eyes glistening with unshed tears. "That's all I can ask for." They sat in silence, the noise of the bar fading into the background as they faced the weight of their past and the uncertainty of their future. For the first time in years, Aurora felt a glimmer of hope, a possibility of healing. It wouldn't be easy, and it wouldn't happen overnight, but maybe, just maybe, they could find a way to move forward. Silas reappeared, his presence a comforting anchor in the storm of emotions. He placed a fresh drink in front of Aurora and a beer in front of Evan, giving them a knowing look. "To new beginnings," he said, raising his glass. Aurora and Evan exchanged a glance, then lifted their glasses in a tentative toast. "To new beginnings," they echoed, the clink of their glasses a fragile promise of what could be. As they drank, the weight of time and unspoken regret began to lift, replaced by the faintest glimmer of hope. It was a start, and for now, that was enough.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.478
leniency0.957
rawRatio0.045
effectiveRatio0.043
90.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1000
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1000
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"familiar"
count4
1
word"stark"
count1
2
word"comforting"
count2
3
word"reminder"
count1
4
word"skipped a beat"
count1
5
word"down her spine"
count1
6
word"scanned"
count1
7
word"weight"
count4
8
word"unspoken"
count2
9
word"tension"
count1
10
word"silence"
count4
11
word"whisper"
count1
12
word"traced"
count1
13
word"racing"
count1
14
word"tinged"
count1
15
word"etched"
count1
16
word"glistening"
count1
17
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"stark"
2"comforting"
3"reminder"
4"skipped a beat"
5"down her spine"
6"scanned"
7"weight"
8"unspoken"
9"tension"
10"silence"
11"whisper"
12"traced"
13"racing"
14"tinged"
15"etched"
16"glistening"
17"echoed"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
2
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of unspoken words"
1"sent a shiver down"
2"a glimmer of hope"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences63
matches
0"y with regret"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences63
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences87
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1000
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Finally, Evan spoke."
99.17% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount787
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.02
worstName"Evan"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Blackwood1
Silas4
Evan8
Aurora8
persons
0"Carter"
1"Raven"
2"Blackwood"
3"Silas"
4"Evan"
5"Aurora"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.992
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite place"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1000
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean24.39
std18.14
cv0.744
sampleLengths
097
134
220
321
415
517
637
79
820
964
1041
1123
1210
1314
145
1533
1614
1711
1820
199
2022
2120
2214
2315
2432
2511
2616
2751
2812
2934
3015
317
3240
3317
3414
3564
3633
378
3814
3917
4030
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs129
matches
0"was comforting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences87
ratio0.011
matches
0"The years had been kind to him; he looked more rugged, more mature, but the sight of him still sent a shiver down her spine."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount790
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"tall, broad-shouldered man"
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.026582278481012658
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.008860759493670886
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences87
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences87
mean11.49
std6.49
cv0.565
sampleLengths
021
126
227
323
415
515
64
715
85
914
107
1110
125
136
1411
157
1619
1711
189
197
2013
2115
2219
235
2425
2513
2617
2711
2816
297
306
314
3210
334
344
351
3620
3713
3811
393
409
412
4217
433
449
4520
462
478
4812
498
60.54% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.39080459770114945
totalSentences87
uniqueOpeners34
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences62
matches
0"Then, with a deep breath,"
1"Finally, Evan spoke."
ratio0.032
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences62
matches
0"She glanced up at the"
1"He limped over, his silver"
2"she replied, a genuine smile"
3"he chuckled, his neatly trimmed"
4"she said, her voice softening"
5"she said, sliding onto a"
6"She watched as he expertly"
7"He placed the glass in"
8"she said, taking a sip"
9"It was Evan, her ex."
10"he said, his voice a"
11"she replied, her tone guarded"
12"he said, rubbing the back"
13"She hesitated, then nodded."
14"he said, his eyes lingering"
15"she replied, taking another sip"
16"They sat in silence for"
17"She looked at him, her"
18"he said, his voice heavy"
19"she said, her tone softening"
ratio0.565
24.52% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences62
matches
0"Aurora Carter pushed open the"
1"The dim lighting inside was"
2"The bar was just as"
3"She glanced up at the"
4"Silas Blackwood's voice boomed from"
5"He limped over, his silver"
6"she replied, a genuine smile"
7"he chuckled, his neatly trimmed"
8"she said, her voice softening"
9"Silas nodded, his expression turning"
10"she said, sliding onto a"
11"She watched as he expertly"
12"He placed the glass in"
13"she said, taking a sip"
14"The familiar burn of the"
15"Aurora's heart skipped a beat"
16"It was Evan, her ex."
17"The years had been kind"
18"Evan's eyes scanned the room,"
19"he said, his voice a"
ratio0.871
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount9
matches
0"Silas Blackwood's voice boomed, his hazel eyes twinkling with recognition"
1"she said, her voice softening"
2"she replied, her tone guarded"
3"he said, his eyes lingering on her face"
4"he said, his voice heavy with regret"
5"she said, her tone softening"
6"he said, his shoulders sagging"
7"he repeated, his voice barely above a whisper"
8"she said, her voice trembling"
84.78% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags20
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he chuckled (chuckle)"
1"he repeated (repeat)"
2"he admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.435
leniency0.87
rawRatio0.15
effectiveRatio0.13
79.5448%