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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMGHBKVJ8Q27QVVQVQYX7Q
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Model:
Hermes 3 70B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Horror: alone in an eerie place at night
Duration:
42.1s
Cost:
$0.000701
Provider:
DeepInfra
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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The taxi dropped Rory off at the edge of Richmond Park, just before the sky turned navy with the last vestiges of twilight. She hoisted her backpack over one shoulder and stepped into the dense shadow cast by the ancient oak trees. Their branches
seemed to
gnarl and twist into grotesque shapes that danced in the dim light filtering through the canopy. This was not her first trip to the Fae Grove, hidden deep within the park, but each visit filled her with
a sense of unease
. The standing stones marked the boundary between the human world and a place where time and space
seemed to
bend at impossible angles. She knew this because her mother had brought her here once, when Rory was too young to question the reality of a mother's bedtime stories. Only now, as she
navigated
the uneven ground, did she
realize
that those stories might have held more truth than fantasy. Her steps faltered, and she halted beneath the outstr
etched
arms of an oak that looked like it had been growing since the dawn of time. Something crunched in the underbrush to her left. Rory's hand involuntarily went to the Heartstone Pendant hanging around her neck. It pulsed warmth against her palm, its deep crimson gemstone catching the moonlight and holding it captive in a web of internal fire. She had no memory of how she acquired it, but it had become her talisman, her connection to a past that seemed both alien and familiar. She proceeded
cautiously
, following a path only she could see, one
etched
in her mind by her mother's long-ago words. The night sounds grew muffled as if the air had
been swallowed
by cotton wool, and Rory felt her skin prickle with the sudden sensation that she
was being
watched. Don't be ridiculous, she chided herself, even as her fingers tightened around the pendant. There's nothing here but trees and shadows. Yet when she peered into the gloom, searching for any sign of movement, something moved at the edge of her vision - a shape, a figure, perhaps, but it vanished when she turned her head to look directly at it. Her heart
began to
pound, and she quickened her pace, desperate to reach the
sanctuary
of the grove. Another sound
echo
ed through the trees, this one closer and distinct enough to raise the hairs on the back of her neck. It was the soft, rhythmic crunching of leaves underfoot, and it
was drawing
nearer. Who would be out here at this time of night? The полиция? A branch snapped behind her, and Rory whirled around, her breath hitching in her throat. In the same instant, she saw a shadow detach itself from the darkness and move toward her with purposeful strides. She didn't wait to see who or what it was; she turned and ran, her backpack slamming against her spine with every pounding step. The trees
seemed to
reach out to grab her as she fled through their grasping branches, her heart thudding in rhythm with her
footsteps
. Finally, she broke through the ring of standing stones and stumbled into the clearing. Wildflowers b
loomed
beneath her feet, their colors muted in the moonlight. Rory spun in a circle, her chest heaving with exertion and fear. The Fae Grove was empty, but she couldn't shake the feeling that something
was watching
her from the trees' depths. She reached for her phone, intending to call for help, only to find that there was no signal this deep in the park. She was alone, with no means of contacting the outside world. As the minutes str
etched
into an hour, Rory
began to
relax her guard. The night sounds returned, and the
oppressive
feeling of being watched faded away. Perhaps it had been an animal, or even another person like herself, looking for
solace
in the grove. Rory sank to her knees in the middle of the clearing, her hands clutching the Heartstone Pendant as she sought the comfort of its warmth. She didn't know how long she stayed like that, lost in thought, but when she finally looked up, the moon had shifted in the sky. A sudden gust of wind
sent a shiver down
her spine, and Rory became aware of a sound she couldn't quite place. It was soft, barely audible over the rustling of leaves, but it made her skin crawl with every whispering breath. It sounded like whispers, hundreds of them, coming from all directions at once. Rory scrambled to her feet, her head swiveling back and forth as she searched for the source of the noise. "Who's there?" she called out, her voice shaking with a mixture of fear and anger. "Show yourself!" The whispers grew louder, rising and falling in a discordant chorus that
seemed to
be speaking in a language she couldn't understand. They crept up her legs, winding around her torso like tendrils of cold mist, and choked off her breath with icy fingers. Rory's hand went to her throat, tearing at the unseen strands that threatened to strangle her. She stumbled backward, her eyes wide with terror as she
realize
d that the shadows beyond the standing stones were moving, swirling into a vortex of darkness that devoured the moonlight. A figure emerged from the void, tall and gaunt, with pale skin str
etched
over bones like parchment. It moved toward her
slowly
,
deliberately
, as if savoring every moment of her growing horror. Rory backed away until she felt the rough surface of a standing stone pressing against her spine. There was nowhere left to run. The whispers swirled around her head, drowning out her scream as the figure
loomed
over her with eyes that glowed like embers in the darkness. "Well, well," it whispered, its voice a sibilant hiss that made Rory's blood run cold. "What have we here? A lost little girl, come to play in our grove?" Rory's legs gave way beneath her, and she sank to the ground, her hands still scrabbling at her throat as if she could tear away the tendrils of shadow that threatened to choke her. The figure smiled, revealing teeth like shards of ice in the moonlight. "What do you want?" Rory
managed to
gasp. The figure laughed, a sound that
seemed to
echo
through the clearing and send shivers up Rory's spine. "What does every creature on this earth want?" it whispered, leaning closer so that she could feel its breath on her cheek, cold and sharp like the edge of a blade. "We want to feed." And then it
was gone
, vanished into the night like a wisp of smoke, leaving Rory shivering and alone in the clearing. The whispers faded away, and the darkness receded as if it had never been. Rory collapsed onto the wildflowers, her body trembling with shock and exhaustion. The pendant pulsed weakly against her skin, its warmth seeping into her bones and chasing away the lingering chill of the shadows. She had no idea what had just happened or why, but she knew one thing for certain: she would never come back to this place again. Not while she still drew breath. Slowly, painfully, Rory pushed herself to her feet and stumbled out of the clearing, leaving the Fae Grove and its whispers far behind her. She didn't look back, not even when the moon reappeared from behind the clouds and bathed her in silvery light. The night was quiet now, peaceful, as if nothing had happened at all. Rory walked through the trees, her steps slow but steady, until she reached the edge of the park. She hailed a taxi with numb fingers, climbed inside without a word, and let herself be carried away from the darkness that had almost swallowed her whole.
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2/17/2026, 1:48:32 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
3
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
69.1596%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1297
totalAiIsmAdverbs
4
found
0
adverb
"cautiously"
count
1
1
adverb
"deliberately"
count
1
2
adverb
"slowly"
count
2
highlights
0
"cautiously"
1
"deliberately"
2
"slowly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
30.6091%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1297
totalAiIsms
9
found
0
word
"sanctuary"
count
1
1
word
"oppressive"
count
1
2
word
"loomed"
count
1
3
word
"solace"
count
1
4
word
"footsteps"
count
1
5
word
"echo"
count
1
6
word
"echoed"
count
1
7
word
"etched"
count
1
8
word
"navigated"
count
1
highlights
0
"sanctuary"
1
"oppressive"
2
"loomed"
3
"solace"
4
"footsteps"
5
"echo"
6
"echoed"
7
"etched"
8
"navigated"
66.6667%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
2
found
0
label
"sense of foreboding"
count
1
1
label
"sent a shiver through"
count
1
highlights
0
"a sense of unease"
1
"sent a shiver down"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
68
matches
(empty)
94.6292%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
8
narrationSentences
68
filterMatches
0
"realize"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"began to"
2
"managed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
2
totalSentences
71
matches
0
"realize that those"
1
"realized that the"
65.0357%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
31
mean
41.84
std
15.8
cv
0.378
sampleLengths
0
62
1
73
2
54
3
61
4
50
5
21
6
40
7
54
8
12
9
59
10
49
11
55
12
11
13
44
14
50
15
42
16
33
17
17
18
44
19
46
20
32
21
48
22
29
23
46
24
8
25
53
26
36
27
34
28
32
29
44
30
58
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
68
matches
0
"been swallowed"
1
"was gone"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
3
totalVerbs
207
matches
0
"was being"
1
"was drawing"
2
"was watching"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1261
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
46
adverbRatio
0.03647898493259318
lyAdverbCount
14
lyAdverbRatio
0.011102299762093577
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
71
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
71
mean
18.27
std
7.39
cv
0.405
sampleLengths
0
23
1
19
2
20
3
25
4
23
5
25
6
21
7
25
8
8
9
12
10
23
11
26
12
20
13
30
14
14
15
7
16
40
17
18
18
22
19
14
20
10
21
2
22
15
23
20
24
24
25
24
26
14
27
11
28
12
29
20
30
23
31
11
32
13
33
13
34
18
35
25
36
25
37
22
38
20
39
13
40
20
41
15
42
2
43
22
44
22
45
16
46
30
47
17
48
15
49
17
61.5023%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
3
diversityRatio
0.39436619718309857
totalSentences
71
uniqueOpeners
28
8.3333%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
3
fancyCount
2
fancyTags
0
"it whispered, its voice a sibilant hiss that made Rory's blood run cold (whisper, make)"
1
"whispered (whisper)"
82.1139%