| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.714 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 84.57% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1296 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "cautiously" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "deliberately" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 7.41% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1296 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "sense of" | | 1 | "navigated" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "etched" | | 6 | "gloom" | | 7 | "quickened" | | 8 | "sanctuary" | | 9 | "echoed" | | 10 | "rhythmic" | | 11 | "pounding" | | 12 | "footsteps" | | 13 | "depths" | | 14 | "oppressive" | | 15 | "solace" | | 16 | "down her spine" | | 17 | "loomed" | | 18 | "echo" | | 19 | "could feel" | | 20 | "chill" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sense of foreboding" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "a sense of unease" | | 1 | "sent a shiver down" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "a sense of unease" | | 1 | "e with terror" |
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| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 8 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "managed to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1297 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 32 | | wordCount | 1259 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.59 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 20 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 3 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Heartstone" |
| | globalScore | 0.706 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like it had been growing since the" | | 1 | "quite place" | | 2 | "sounded like whispers, hundreds of them, c" | | 3 | "chorus that seemed to be speaking in a language she couldn't understand" | | 4 | "as if savoring every moment of her growing horror" | | 5 | "sound that seemed to echo through the clearing and send shivers up Rory's spine" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.771 | | wordCount | 1297 | | matches | | 0 | "not her first trip to the Fae Grove, hidden deep within the park, but each visit filled her with a sense of unease" |
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| 72.77% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "realize that those" | | 1 | "realized that the" |
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| 65.04% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 31 | | mean | 41.84 | | std | 15.8 | | cv | 0.378 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 62 | | 1 | 73 | | 2 | 54 | | 3 | 61 | | 4 | 50 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 40 | | 7 | 54 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 59 | | 10 | 49 | | 11 | 55 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 44 | | 14 | 50 | | 15 | 42 | | 16 | 33 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 44 | | 19 | 46 | | 20 | 32 | | 21 | 48 | | 22 | 29 | | 23 | 46 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 53 | | 26 | 36 | | 27 | 34 | | 28 | 32 | | 29 | 44 | | 30 | 58 |
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| 94.94% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "been swallowed" | | 1 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 207 | | matches | | 0 | "was being" | | 1 | "was drawing" | | 2 | "was watching" |
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| 62.37% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 71 | | ratio | 0.028 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet when she peered into the gloom, searching for any sign of movement, something moved at the edge of her vision - a shape, a figure, perhaps, but it vanished when she turned her head to look directly at it." | | 1 | "She didn't wait to see who or what it was; she turned and ran, her backpack slamming against her spine with every pounding step." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 587 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 17 | | adverbRatio | 0.028960817717206135 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010221465076660987 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 71 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 71 | | mean | 18.27 | | std | 7.39 | | cv | 0.405 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 40 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 25 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 22 | | 44 | 22 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 30 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 61.50% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.39436619718309857 | | totalSentences | 71 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Only now, as she navigated" | | 1 | "Finally, she broke through the" | | 2 | "Perhaps it had been an" | | 3 | "Slowly, painfully, Rory pushed herself" |
| | ratio | 0.06 | |
| 76.72% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "She hoisted her backpack over" | | 1 | "Their branches seemed to gnarl" | | 2 | "She knew this because her" | | 3 | "Her steps faltered, and she" | | 4 | "It pulsed warmth against her" | | 5 | "She had no memory of" | | 6 | "She proceeded cautiously, following a" | | 7 | "Her heart began to pound," | | 8 | "It was the soft, rhythmic" | | 9 | "She didn't wait to see" | | 10 | "She reached for her phone," | | 11 | "She was alone, with no" | | 12 | "She didn't know how long" | | 13 | "It was soft, barely audible" | | 14 | "It sounded like whispers, hundreds" | | 15 | "she called out, her voice" | | 16 | "They crept up her legs," | | 17 | "She stumbled backward, her eyes" | | 18 | "It moved toward her slowly," | | 19 | "it whispered, its voice a" |
| | ratio | 0.358 | |
| 57.01% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "The taxi dropped Rory off" | | 1 | "She hoisted her backpack over" | | 2 | "Their branches seemed to gnarl" | | 3 | "This was not her first" | | 4 | "The standing stones marked the" | | 5 | "She knew this because her" | | 6 | "Her steps faltered, and she" | | 7 | "Something crunched in the underbrush" | | 8 | "Rory's hand involuntarily went to" | | 9 | "It pulsed warmth against her" | | 10 | "She had no memory of" | | 11 | "She proceeded cautiously, following a" | | 12 | "The night sounds grew muffled" | | 13 | "Her heart began to pound," | | 14 | "Another sound echoed through the" | | 15 | "It was the soft, rhythmic" | | 16 | "A branch snapped behind her," | | 17 | "She didn't wait to see" | | 18 | "The trees seemed to reach" | | 19 | "Wildflowers bloomed beneath her feet," |
| | ratio | 0.806 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 32.02% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Their branches seemed to gnarl and twist into grotesque shapes that danced in the dim light filtering through the canopy." | | 1 | "She had no memory of how she acquired it, but it had become her talisman, her connection to a past that seemed both alien and familiar." | | 2 | "The night sounds grew muffled as if the air had been swallowed by cotton wool, and Rory felt her skin prickle with the sudden sensation that she was being watch…" | | 3 | "The trees seemed to reach out to grab her as she fled through their grasping branches, her heart thudding in rhythm with her footsteps." | | 4 | "The whispers grew louder, rising and falling in a discordant chorus that seemed to be speaking in a language she couldn't understand." | | 5 | "She stumbled backward, her eyes wide with terror as she realized that the shadows beyond the standing stones were moving, swirling into a vortex of darkness tha…" | | 6 | "Rory's legs gave way beneath her, and she sank to the ground, her hands still scrabbling at her throat as if she could tear away the tendrils of shadow that thr…" | | 7 | "The pendant pulsed weakly against her skin, its warmth seeping into her bones and chasing away the lingering chill of the shadows." | | 8 | "She hailed a taxi with numb fingers, climbed inside without a word, and let herself be carried away from the darkness that had almost swallowed her whole." |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she called out, her voice shaking with a mixture of fear and anger" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she called out (call out)" | | 1 | "it whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "it whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.857 | |