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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMGJGXY0B5HMCBV1K4HYXB
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Model:
Hermes 3 70B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
40.3s
Cost:
$0.000707
Provider:
DeepInfra
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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The green neon sign above the entrance of The Raven's Nest
flickered
as Rory pushed open the heavy wooden door, stepping out of the cool evening air and into the dimly lit bar. The familiar scents of aged wood, leather, and a faint hint of tobacco wrapped around her like a comfortable embrace. She glanced around, taking in the old maps and black-and-white photographs that adorned the walls, before making her way to the bar where Silas
was polishing
a glass with a worn cloth. "Rory," Silas greeted her with a warm smile, the lines around his hazel eyes crinkling. "What brings you here on this fine evening?" "Oh, you know, just needed a break from the daily grind," Rory replied, sliding onto a stool and resting her elbows on the bar. "And maybe a pint of your finest ale." As Silas turned to fill a glass, the door swung open once more, and Rory's attention
was drawn
to the figure that stepped inside. Her bright blue
eyes widened
as she recognized the person who had just entered—Eva, her childhood friend whom she hadn't seen in years. Eva looked different from the last time they'd been together, more refined and polished. Her once-wild curly hair was now tamed into a sleek bob, and her attire had transformed from casual jeans and t-shirts to a tailored blouse and slacks. She scanned the room, and when her gaze fell upon Rory,
a flicker of recognition
sparked in her eyes. "Rory?" Eva breathed, her steps faltering
slightly
before she moved towards the bar with a mix of uncertainty and
anticipation
. Rory slid off the stool, feeling a surge of emotions coursing through her as she took in the sight of her old friend. "Eva," she said
softly
, a tentative smile playing on her lips. "It's been too long." They embraced, the years melting away as they held each other close. When they pulled back, Rory could see traces of the girl she'd once known so well hidden beneath the layers of time and change. "I heard you were living in London," Eva said, her voice laced with a hint of nostalgia. "I've been meaning to look you up, but..." "But life got in the way," Rory finished for her, nodding in understanding. "It happens to the best of us." Silas set the pint of ale down on the bar, his presence a silent reminder that they weren't alone in this reunion. Rory glanced at him, grateful for the distraction he provided as she struggled to find her footing with Eva. "Silas, this is my old friend Eva," Rory introduced, gesturing between them. "Eva, meet Silas, the owner of this fine establishment and my... well, my mentor of sorts." Silas extended his hand, giving Eva a firm handshake. "Welcome to The Raven's Nest, Eva. It's a pleasure to meet any friend of Rory's." "Thank you," Eva replied, her smile genuine. "I've heard wonderful things about this place from Rory." "We should catch up," Rory suggested, turning to Eva with a hopeful expression. "Do you have time for a drink?" Eva glanced at her
watch
, hesitating for only a moment before nodding. "Of course, I'd love that." They settled into a booth in the corner of the bar, their drinks resting on the worn table between them. As they sipped their beverages, Rory couldn't help but study Eva, searching for glimpses of the girl she'd once shared secrets and dreams with. "So, tell me everything," Rory prompted, leaning forward and resting her chin on her hand. "What have you been up to all these years?" Eva laughed
softly
, shaking her head as she
began to
recount her journey since they'd last seen each other. As she spoke, Rory listened intently, absorbing every detail and trying to reconcile the person before her with the memories she held dear. The conversation flowed easily at first, like a river finding its way through familiar paths. But as the night wore on, Rory
began to
notice the undercurrents of tension that existed between them—the things left unsaid, the regrets that lingered just beneath the surface. "There's something I've always wanted to ask you," Eva said, her voice lowering as she leaned in closer. "Why did you leave Cardiff? And don't tell me it was because of that asshole, Evan." Rory felt the
weight
of Eva's words settle upon her like a heavy blanket, suffocating her with the truth she'd been running from for so long. She took a deep breath, knowing that if she wanted to salvage any semblance of their friendship, she needed to be honest. "I left because I was scared," Rory admitted, her gaze falling to the table as she picked at the edge of her coaster. "I thought I was suffocating in Cardiff, and I needed to get away." Eva reached out, placing a hand over Rory's and stilling her nervous movements. "And now? Do you still feel like you're running?" Rory lifted her eyes, meeting Eva's gaze with a
newfound
clarity. "Sometimes," she whispered. "But I'm learning to stand my ground, too." A silence fell between them then, one that
was filled
with the
unspoken
words they'd both been carrying for years. Rory could see the disappointment in Eva's eyes, the hurt that had never fully healed from their abrupt parting. "I missed you," Eva said quietly, her fingers tightening around Rory's hand. "You have no idea how much I wished you would come back." Tears pricked at the corners of Rory's eyes as she squeezed Eva's hand in return. "I know," she said
softly
. "And I'm so sorry for leaving like that. I was just... lost." They sat there for a moment longer, the
weight
of their shared history pressing down upon them like a storm cloud ready to burst. But as Rory looked into Eva's eyes, she could see the first glimpses of understanding beginning to take root—a recognition that time and change had shaped them both in ways they could never have imagined. "Let's not dwell on the past," Rory suggested, a small smile tugging at her lips as she raised her glass. "Here's to catching up and making new memories." Eva returned the smile, raising her own glass to clink against Rory's. "To new memories," she
echoed
, before taking a sip of her drink. And as they drank, Rory felt the tendrils of their past
begin to
loosen, giving way to the promise of a future where they could forge a new path together—one that would be paved with the understanding that while they had changed, their bond remained unbroken. The rest of the evening passed in a blur of laughter and shared stories, with Rory and Eva falling back into the easy rhythm of their friendship as if no time had passed at all. When it was finally time to say goodbye, they embraced once more, vows to stay in touch ringing in their ears as they stepped out into the cool London night. Rory
watch
ed as Eva disappeared into the crowd, her heart heavy with the
weight
of their reunion. But as she turned back towards The Raven's Nest, Silas waiting just beyond the door, she
knew that she
had taken the first steps towards finding her place in this world—a world where change was inevitable, but where the connections that
truly
mattered would always remain.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
70.8333%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
16
adverbTagCount
3
adverbTags
0
"she said softly, a tentative smile playing on her lips [softly]"
1
"Eva said quietly, her fingers tightening around Rory's hand [quietly, around]"
2
"she said softly [softly]"
59.5469%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1236
totalAiIsmAdverbs
5
found
0
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
1
adverb
"softly"
count
3
2
adverb
"truly"
count
1
highlights
0
"slightly"
1
"softly"
2
"truly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
27.1845%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1236
totalAiIsms
9
found
0
word
"flickered"
count
1
1
word
"flicker"
count
1
2
word
"unspoken"
count
1
3
word
"newfound"
count
1
4
word
"anticipation"
count
1
5
word
"weight"
count
3
6
word
"echoed"
count
1
highlights
0
"flickered"
1
"flicker"
2
"unspoken"
3
"newfound"
4
"anticipation"
5
"weight"
6
"echoed"
66.6667%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
2
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
1
label
"flicker of emotion"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes widened"
1
"a flicker of recognition"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
53
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
3
narrationSentences
53
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
0
"began to"
1
"begin to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
71
matches
0
"knew that she"
82.9076%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
34
mean
36.12
std
15.9
cv
0.44
sampleLengths
0
85
1
23
2
32
3
47
4
60
5
20
6
38
7
36
8
25
9
20
10
41
11
28
12
24
13
16
14
20
15
17
16
44
17
24
18
42
19
44
20
34
21
48
22
36
23
22
24
22
25
39
26
24
27
32
28
59
29
28
30
24
31
46
32
65
33
63
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
53
matches
0
"was drawn"
1
"was filled"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
176
matches
0
"was polishing"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
989
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
35
adverbRatio
0.03538928210313448
lyAdverbCount
13
lyAdverbRatio
0.01314459049544995
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
71
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
71
mean
17.3
std
9.02
cv
0.522
sampleLengths
0
33
1
20
2
32
3
15
4
8
5
24
6
8
7
24
8
23
9
14
10
27
11
19
12
20
13
23
14
11
15
4
16
12
17
24
18
17
19
8
20
13
21
7
22
22
23
19
24
12
25
16
26
9
27
15
28
7
29
9
30
13
31
7
32
12
33
5
34
20
35
24
36
15
37
9
38
19
39
23
40
15
41
29
42
18
43
16
44
26
45
22
46
23
47
13
48
13
49
9
64.7887%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
4
diversityRatio
0.4225352112676056
totalSentences
71
uniqueOpeners
30
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
16
fancyCount
15
fancyTags
0
"Silas greeted her with a warm smile, the lines around his hazel eyes crinkling (greet crinkle)"
1
"Rory replied, sliding onto a stool and resting her elbows on the bar (reply, slide rest)"
2
"she said softly, a tentative smile playing on her lips (say softly, play)"
3
"Eva said, her voice laced with a hint of nostalgia (say, lace)"
4
"Rory finished for her, nodding in understanding (finish nod understand)"
5
"Rory introduced, gesturing between them (introduce, gesture)"
6
"Rory suggested, turning to Eva with a hopeful expression (suggest, turn)"
7
"Rory prompted, leaning forward and resting her chin on her hand (prompt, rest)"
8
"Eva said, her voice lowering as she leaned in closer (say, lower lean)"
9
"Rory admitted, her gaze falling to the table as she picked at the edge of her coaster (admit, fall pick)"
10
"she whispered (whisper)"
11
"Eva said quietly, her fingers tightening around Rory's hand (say quietly, tighten around)"
12
"she said softly (say softly)"
13
"Rory suggested, a small smile tugging at her lips as she raised her glass (suggest, tug raise)"
14
"she echoed, before taking a sip of her drink (echo, take)"
80.7016%