| 46.15% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Silas finally said [finally]" | | 1 | "Rory said quickly [quickly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.346 | | leniency | 0.692 | | rawRatio | 0.222 | | effectiveRatio | 0.154 | |
| 86.92% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1147 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "barely above a whisper" | | 2 | "quickly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1147 | | totalAiIsms | 34 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | word | "practiced ease" | | count | 1 |
| | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | word | "carried the weight" | | count | 1 |
| | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | | 27 | | | 28 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "beacon" | | 1 | "solace" | | 2 | "testament" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "echo" | | 6 | "tapestry" | | 7 | "sentinel" | | 8 | "practiced ease" | | 9 | "etched" | | 10 | "unspoken" | | 11 | "pounding" | | 12 | "anticipation" | | 13 | "trepidation" | | 14 | "warmth" | | 15 | "carried the weight" | | 16 | "sturdy" | | 17 | "amidst" | | 18 | "silence" | | 19 | "tracing" | | 20 | "whisper" | | 21 | "weight" | | 22 | "charged" | | 23 | "intensity" | | 24 | "sense of" | | 25 | "potential" | | 26 | "fleeting" | | 27 | "comforting" | | 28 | "echoing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "the air was thick with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 46 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 46 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1144 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 857 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.63 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 2 | | Nest | 3 | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 14 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Cheung | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Blackwood | 1 | | Silas | 12 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Carter" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Yu-Fei" | | 5 | "Cheung" | | 6 | "Blackwood" | | 7 | "Silas" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.683 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1144 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 77.16% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 40.86 | | std | 17.16 | | cv | 0.42 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 68 | | 1 | 78 | | 2 | 70 | | 3 | 78 | | 4 | 50 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 45 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 30 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 50 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 40 | | 14 | 46 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 31 | | 17 | 43 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 35 | | 20 | 41 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 52 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 49 | | 27 | 61 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 120 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 53.57% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 64 | | ratio | 0.031 | | matches | | 0 | "It was more than the usual weariness that stayed her step; it was the pull of memories, the echo of laughter that once filled these walls." | | 1 | "He poured her a drink—a single malt, neat—and slid the glass across the bar." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 678 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 17 | | adverbRatio | 0.025073746312684365 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01032448377581121 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 64 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 64 | | mean | 17.88 | | std | 7.75 | | cv | 0.434 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 38 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 32 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 29 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 33 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 25 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 77.60% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.484375 | | totalSentences | 64 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 72.46% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | | 0 | "Eventually, Rory rose to leave," |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 98.26% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | | 0 | "She had delivered countless orders" | | 1 | "It was more than the" | | 2 | "It was then she saw" | | 3 | "He dismissed her outstretched hand" | | 4 | "He poured her a drink—a" | | 5 | "They fell into an easy" | | 6 | "she replied, her voice barely" | | 7 | "he said, raising his glass" | | 8 | "she blurted out, the words" | | 9 | "he asked, his voice low" | | 10 | "They spoke of lighter times," | | 11 | "She turned to Silas, gratitude" | | 12 | "She walked away with a" | | 13 | "He poured himself a drink" |
| | ratio | 0.304 | |
| 14.35% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 41 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | | 0 | "The green neon glow of" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter, known to her" | | 2 | "She had delivered countless orders" | | 3 | "It was more than the" | | 4 | "The bar was a tapestry" | | 5 | "Rory's gaze drifted over the" | | 6 | "It was then she saw" | | 7 | "Silas Blackwood stood behind the" | | 8 | "The years had etched themselves" | | 9 | "A neatly trimmed beard framed" | | 10 | "Rory approached the bar, her" | | 11 | "Silas looked up, his eyes" | | 12 | "Recognition flared in his gaze," | | 13 | "Silas said, his voice a" | | 14 | "Rory offered a tentative smile," | | 15 | "He dismissed her outstretched hand" | | 16 | "The gesture was brief but" | | 17 | "Silas asked, leaning against the" | | 18 | "Rory shook her head, her" | | 19 | "Silas nodded, understanding in his" |
| | ratio | 0.891 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 23.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Inside, the air was thick with the scent of aged wood and spilt beer, a testament to the countless evenings that had seeped into the very grain of the place." | | 1 | "It was more than the usual weariness that stayed her step; it was the pull of memories, the echo of laughter that once filled these walls." | | 2 | "Rory's gaze drifted over the worn wooden stools, the polished bar top reflecting the low amber light, and the black-and-white photographs that adorned the walls…" | | 3 | "The years had etched themselves into the lines of his face, and his hazel eyes, once sharp and piercing, now held a weariness that spoke of long-buried secrets." | | 4 | "Silas offered her a warm, genuine smile, the kind that spoke of enduring bonds and unconditional support." | | 5 | "In the quiet that followed her departure, Silas stood alone behind the bar, his thoughts drifting to the young woman who had once again walked into his life." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Silas finally said, his voice soft but laced with an undercurrent of concern" | | 1 | "she replied, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 2 | "she blurted out, the words tasting bitter on her tongue" | | 3 | "he asked, his voice low and dangerous" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she blurted out (blurt out)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.346 | | leniency | 0.692 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.077 | |