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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMGN73VHPN1EV5VJWY3SHJ
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Model:
WizardLM 2 8x22b
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
22.8s
Cost:
$0.001631
Provider:
Novita
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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AI
The green neon glow of the sign above the entrance to The Raven's Nest cast a sickly pall over the cobblestone alley, a
beacon
for those seeking the
solace
of dim lights and the secrecy of hushed conversations. Inside,
the air was thick with
the scent of aged wood and spilt beer, a
testament
to the countless evenings that had seeped into the
very
grain of the place. Aurora Carter, known to her friends simply as Rory, pushed open the heavy wooden door, the familiar creak a balm to her frayed nerves. She had delivered countless orders of Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress delicacies to the bar, but tonight, she lingered on the threshold, her bright blue eyes scanning the room. It was more than the usual weariness that stayed her step; it was the pull of memories, the
echo
of laughter that once filled these walls. The bar was a
tapestry
of shadows and whispers, the patrons huddled in their respective worlds. Rory's gaze drifted over the worn wooden stools, the polished bar top reflecting the low amber light, and the black-and-white photographs that adorned the walls, each a silent
sentinel
to the past. It was then she saw him, the subtle change in the atmosphere alerting her to his presence before her eyes confirmed it. Silas Blackwood stood behind the bar, his grey-streaked auburn hair catching the light as he poured a pint with practiced ease. The years had
etched
themselves into the lines of his face, and his hazel eyes, once sharp and piercing, now held a weariness that spoke of long-buried secrets. A neatly trimmed beard framed his strong jaw, matching his hair, and the slight limp in his left leg was a new addition, a
testament
to some
unspoken
tale. Rory approached the bar, her heart pounding with a mixture of
anticipation
and
trepidation
. Silas looked up, his eyes meeting hers, and for a moment, time
seemed to
stand still. Recognition flared in his gaze, followed by a warmth that belied the years that had passed since they last spoke. "Rory Carter," Silas said, his voice a low rumble that carried the
weight
of their shared history. "As I live and breathe. It's been too long." Rory offered a tentative smile, the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist catching the light as she extended her hand. "Hello, Silas. It's good to see you." He dismissed her outstr
etched
hand with a wave and came around the bar to embrace her. The gesture was brief but genuine, and as Rory returned the hug, she felt the sturdy comfort of his presence, a rock
amidst
the ever-changing tides of her life. "What brings you to the Nest?" Silas asked, leaning against the bar as he studied her. "You're not here for a deli
very
, are you?" Rory shook her head, her straight shoulder-length black hair brushing against her cheeks. "No, not tonight. I... I just needed a place to think, to get away from the noise." Silas nodded, understanding in his eyes. "Well, you've come to the right place. The Nest has a way of quieting the mind, even if just for a while." He poured her a drink—a single malt, neat—and slid the glass across the bar. Rory took a sip, the smoky flavor grounding her further in the moment. They fell into an easy silence, the kind that only old friends can share, each lost in their own thoughts, their own regrets. "You've changed, Rory," Silas finally said, his voice soft but laced with an undercurrent of concern. "London agrees with you less than it used to." Rory looked down at her drink, tracing the condensation on the glass with her finger. "It's not London," she replied, her voice
barely above a whisper
. "It's... e
very
thing else. Life has a way of turning out differently than you expect." Silas chuckled mirthlessly, the sound carrying the
weight
of his own
unspoken
burdens. "Don't I know it. I never thought I'd end up behind the bar instead of out in the field. But here I am, swapping stories with ghosts and serving drinks to the living." The corners of Rory's mouth lifted in a wistful smile. "You always did have a flair for the dramatic, Silas." "Guilty as charged," he said, raising his glass in a mock toast. "But don't think I haven't noticed the shadows in your eyes, Rory. You can't hide from me. Not here." Rory took a deep breath, the walls of the bar seeming to close in around her. "I left Evan," she blurted out, the words tasting bitter on her tongue. "I had to get away. He... he wasn't the man I thought he was." Silas' expression hardened, his hazel eyes darkening with a protective fury that surprised Rory with its intensity. "Did he hurt you?" he asked, his voice low and dangerous. "Not in the way you think," Rory said
quickly
, though the specter of her past still haunted her. "But he stole something from me—my sense of self, my confidence. I felt like I was disappearing." Silas reached across the bar and clasped her hand, his signet ring cool against her skin. "You're stronger than you know, Rory. You always have been. It's why you've always been the brightest of us, the one with the most potential." Tears pricked at the corners of Rory's eyes, but she refused to let them fall. "I don't feel strong, Silas. I feel lost." "Then let the Nest be your compass," Silas said, his voice firm yet gentle. "You're not alone. Not anymore." As the night wore on, the bar thinned out, leaving only the two of them
amidst
the relics of their shared past. They spoke of lighter times, of laughter and adventure, and for a fleeting moment, the years melted away, revealing the heart of their friendship, unchanged despite the passage of time. Eventually, Rory rose to leave, the
weight
of her revelations lighter than before. She turned to Silas, gratitude shining in her bright blue eyes. "Thank you, Si. For being here, for listening." Silas offered her a warm, genuine smile, the kind that spoke of enduring bonds and unconditional support. "Anytime, Rory. You know where to find me." With a final glance around the bar, Rory stepped out into the cool night air, the green neon sign of The Raven's Nest casting a comforting glow on her path forward. She walked away with a renewed sense of purpose, her steps steadier, her heart a little less heavy. In the quiet that followed her departure, Silas stood alone behind the bar, his thoughts drifting to the young woman who had once again walked into his life. He poured himself a drink and raised the glass in a silent toast to old friends and new beginnings, the clink of ice against glass
echo
ing in the hushed stillness of the Nest.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
22.2222%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
9
adverbTagCount
3
adverbTags
0
"Silas finally said, his voice soft but laced with an undercurrent of concern [finally]"
1
"she replied, her voice barely above a whisper [barely]"
2
"Rory said quickly, though the specter of her past still haunted her [quickly, still]"
74.0260%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1155
totalAiIsmAdverbs
3
found
0
adverb
"quickly"
count
1
1
adverb
"barely above a whisper"
count
1
2
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"quickly"
1
"barely above a whisper"
2
"very"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.0000%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1155
totalAiIsms
18
found
0
word
"tapestry"
count
1
1
word
"testament"
count
2
2
word
"beacon"
count
1
3
word
"sentinel"
count
1
4
word
"unspoken"
count
2
5
word
"solace"
count
1
6
word
"trepidation"
count
1
7
word
"anticipation"
count
1
8
word
"weight"
count
3
9
word
"amidst"
count
2
10
word
"echo"
count
1
11
word
"echoing"
count
1
12
word
"etched"
count
1
highlights
0
"tapestry"
1
"testament"
2
"beacon"
3
"sentinel"
4
"unspoken"
5
"solace"
6
"trepidation"
7
"anticipation"
8
"weight"
9
"amidst"
10
"echo"
11
"echoing"
12
"etched"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"air was thick with"
count
1
highlights
0
"the air was thick with"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
47
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
47
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
64
matches
(empty)
77.1603%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
28
mean
40.86
std
17.16
cv
0.42
sampleLengths
0
68
1
78
2
70
3
78
4
50
5
26
6
27
7
45
8
24
9
30
10
28
11
50
12
25
13
40
14
46
15
20
16
31
17
43
18
28
19
35
20
41
21
23
22
19
23
52
24
32
25
25
26
49
27
61
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
47
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
123
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
884
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
22
adverbRatio
0.024886877828054297
lyAdverbCount
10
lyAdverbRatio
0.011312217194570135
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
64
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
64
mean
17.88
std
7.75
cv
0.434
sampleLengths
0
38
1
30
2
24
3
28
4
26
5
16
6
32
7
22
8
21
9
28
10
29
11
14
12
16
13
20
14
17
15
9
16
20
17
7
18
16
19
29
20
16
21
8
22
13
23
17
24
6
25
22
26
14
27
13
28
23
29
16
30
9
31
15
32
11
33
14
34
13
35
33
36
10
37
10
38
12
39
19
40
16
41
13
42
14
43
17
44
11
45
18
46
17
47
16
48
25
49
15
77.6042%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
2
diversityRatio
0.484375
totalSentences
64
uniqueOpeners
31
8.3333%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
9
fancyCount
6
fancyTags
0
"Silas said, his voice a low rumble that carried the weight of their shared history (say, carry)"
1
"Silas finally said, his voice soft but laced with an undercurrent of concern (finally say, lace)"
2
"he said, raising his glass in a mock toast (say, raise)"
3
"she blurted out, the words tasting bitter on her tongue (blurt out)"
4
"Rory said quickly, though the specter of her past still haunted her (say quickly, still haunt)"
5
"Silas said, his voice firm yet gentle (say, firm)"
79.9615%