| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 82.95% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1173 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "cautiously" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "sharply" | | 3 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1173 | | totalAiIsms | 31 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "sentinels" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "sense of" | | 4 | "stark" | | 5 | "pounding" | | 6 | "scanning" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "perfect" | | 9 | "echoing" | | 10 | "raced" | | 11 | "could feel" | | 12 | "resonated" | | 13 | "whisper" | | 14 | "quickened" | | 15 | "grave" | | 16 | "echoed" | | 17 | "comforting" | | 18 | "predator" | | 19 | "pulse" | | 20 | "cacophony" | | 21 | "otherworldly" | | 22 | "echo" | | 23 | "newfound" | | 24 | "normalcy" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sense of foreboding" | | count | 1 |
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| 97.68% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "a sense of unease" | | 1 | "g in sympathy" |
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| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 8 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "tended to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1170 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 26 | | wordCount | 1137 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.62 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 3 | | Carter | 3 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 3 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Chosen | 1 | | London | 1 | | Rory | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 22.88% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "eye that seemed to follow Aurora Carter as she ventured deeper into Richmond Park" | | 1 | "quite name" | | 2 | "as if considering her question, and then it spoke, its voice a cacophony of whispers that seemed to come from all directions at once" | | 3 | "whispers that seemed to come from all directions at once" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1170 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 62.50% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "knew that whatever" | | 1 | "knew that nothing" |
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| 72.60% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 20 | | mean | 58.5 | | std | 23.64 | | cv | 0.404 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 74 | | 1 | 93 | | 2 | 88 | | 3 | 77 | | 4 | 70 | | 5 | 79 | | 6 | 70 | | 7 | 69 | | 8 | 71 | | 9 | 60 | | 10 | 71 | | 11 | 59 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 45 | | 14 | 63 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 47 | | 18 | 66 | | 19 | 11 |
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| 99.51% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | |
| 83.72% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 172 | | matches | | 0 | "was walking" | | 1 | "were screaming" | | 2 | "was almost intoxicating" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 64 | | ratio | 0.063 | | matches | | 0 | "But then she saw it—a faint glow up ahead, a light that seemed out of place in the wilds of the park." | | 1 | "She was not alone here; she could sense presences just beyond her field of vision, entities that watched with keen, ancient eyes." | | 2 | "The growling grew louder, and then it emerged from the shadows—a creature out of a nightmare, its form shifting and indistinct, its eyes glowing with a malevolent light." | | 3 | "She thought of her life in London, of the mundane existence she had carved out for herself, and she wondered how it had come to this—a confrontation with a being from another realm, a test she had not studied for." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1142 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.03677758318739054 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01138353765323993 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 64 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 98.94% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 64 | | mean | 18.28 | | std | 7.26 | | cv | 0.397 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 34 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 25 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 25 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 28 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 29 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 35.94% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.265625 | | totalSentences | 64 | | uniqueOpeners | 17 | |
| 56.50% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she stood her ground," |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 64.07% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled her jacket tighter" | | 1 | "She had laughed it off" | | 2 | "She had found the pendant" | | 3 | "It was beautiful, the gemstone" | | 4 | "It had led her here," | | 5 | "She had always trusted her" | | 6 | "She moved toward it, her" | | 7 | "She hesitated, the stories she" | | 8 | "She had to know what" | | 9 | "She could feel the energy" | | 10 | "She was not alone here;" | | 11 | "She quickened her pace, her" | | 12 | "She was Aurora Carter, she" | | 13 | "She would find her way" | | 14 | "Her mind raced with possibilities," | | 15 | "She knew better than to" | | 16 | "It circled her, its movements" | | 17 | "she demanded, her voice steady" | | 18 | "it said, its gaze fixed" | | 19 | "She thought of her life" |
| | ratio | 0.39 | |
| 10.85% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 53 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "The moon hung heavy in" | | 1 | "The trees stood like silent" | | 2 | "She pulled her jacket tighter" | | 3 | "Rory had come to the" | | 4 | "The codex had spoken of" | | 5 | "She had laughed it off" | | 6 | "She had found the pendant" | | 7 | "It was beautiful, the gemstone" | | 8 | "The silver chain was cool" | | 9 | "It had led her here," | | 10 | "The air grew thick, the" | | 11 | "The trees seemed to crowd" | | 12 | "Rory stopped, her bright blue" | | 13 | "She had always trusted her" | | 14 | "She moved toward it, her" | | 15 | "The standing stones came into" | | 16 | "Rory approached the boundary cautiously," | | 17 | "She hesitated, the stories she" | | 18 | "The Fae Grove, a pocket" | | 19 | "A place where time could" |
| | ratio | 0.898 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 75.47% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones came into view, ancient oaks that stood in a perfect circle, their surfaces carved with runes that predated written history." | | 1 | "She was not alone here; she could sense presences just beyond her field of vision, entities that watched with keen, ancient eyes." | | 2 | "Instead, she stood her ground, her hand closing around the Heartstone Pendant, drawing strength from its warmth." | | 3 | "The growling grew louder, and then it emerged from the shadows—a creature out of a nightmare, its form shifting and indistinct, its eyes glowing with a malevole…" | | 4 | "The creature tilted its head, as if considering her question, and then it spoke, its voice a cacophony of whispers that seemed to come from all directions at on…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she asked, her voice barely above a whisper" |
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| 25.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |