Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMH3C0APZMW69QHMGHB3E1

Run Details

Duration:
42.5s
Cost:
$0.001537
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rory's boots crunched on the gravel path as she entered the moonlit grove. The ancient standing stones cast long shadows across the clearing, the air heavy with the scent of wildflowers blooming out of season. She glanced down at the Heartstone pendant pulsing against her chest, its deep crimson glow and faint warmth guiding her steps. A chill breeze whispered through the oaks, sending a shiver down her spine. Something felt off, an unnatural stillness hanging over the grove. Rory paused, straining her ears for any sound beyond her own quickening breaths. She thought she heard a soft rustling, like footsteps treading carefully over dead leaves, but saw no movement in the darkness. "You're imagining things," Rory muttered to herself. "No one else knows about this place." She pressed on, following the path deeper into the dense woods. The Heartstone pulsed faster, its inner light growing brighter. It had led her to a Hel portal before, in the underground Fae nightclub beneath Silas' bar. Rory needed to find out who sent it to her and why. The shadows seemed to writhe and twist at the edges of her vision. A sudden snapping of twigs made Rory spin around, heart pounding. She half-expected to see Evan, her abusive ex, lurking behind a tree with that cruel smirk. But the grove remained still and silent. Rory shook her head. "Get it together. Evan's not here. He can't hurt you anymore." She took a deep breath and continued on, the path narrowing as the woods grew more dense. Thorns snagged at her jeans and the branches overhead wove together, blotting out the moonlight. Rory had to slow her pace, carefully picking her way through the thick undergrowth in near darkness. A sharp crack echoed through the night, followed by a low growl that made the hairs on Rory's neck stand on end. She whirled around, a strangled gasp escaping her throat. Glowing eyes gleamed in the shadows, too high off the ground to belong to any normal forest creature. Rory's hand flew to the Heartstone, its pulsing heat searing against her skin. This was wrong, all wrong. She shouldn't be here. Blind panic took over and she stumbled backwards, her hip slamming into the edge of a crumbling standing stone. Pain shot down her leg but Rory ignored it, her only thought to get away from the terrible eyes tracking her in the dark. She ran, heedless of direction, crashing through the undergrowth. Brittle branches whipped at her face, stinging tears from her eyes. Rory barely noticed as something sliced open her cheek, rivulets of warm blood mixing with cold sweat. Her lungs burned and muscles screamed but she didn't dare stop, too afraid of what might be on her heels. After what felt like hours but could have only been minutes, Rory burst out of the tree line onto a paved footpath. She collapsed to her knees, chest heaving as she struggled to catch her breath. Her stomach roiled and she retched into a patch of overgrown grass, vomiting up the half-digested remains of her Golden Empress takeout from earlier that evening. When the heaves subsided, Rory wiped a shaky hand across her mouth and looked around blearily. She recognized the park bench and decorative street lamp from her earlier walks. Somehow, she had made it back to the edge of Richmond Park, miles from the grove. Rory's fingers went to her pendant and found it cool to the touch, its crimson glow faded. The rustling on the wind could have been mistaken for laughter - or a mocking warning. Either way, she had gotten the message. Some secrets of the Fae wilds refused to be tamed.
created_at"2026-02-17T01:48:51.639963+00:00" 2/17/2026, 1:48:51 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.71% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount614
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count2
highlights
0"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
26.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount614
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"down her spine"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"pounding"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"searing"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"chill"
2"down her spine"
3"footsteps"
4"pulsed"
5"pounding"
6"echoed"
7"searing"
8"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences42
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences42
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences44
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords615
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
31.76% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount592
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.36
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone3
Hel1
Fae2
Rory14
Evan1
Golden1
Empress1
Richmond1
Park1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Evan"
places
0"Heartstone"
1"Hel"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
globalScore0.318
windowScore0.667
84.21% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences38
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like hours but could have only bee"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount615
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences44
matches(empty)
48.38% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs13
mean47.31
std15.11
cv0.319
sampleLengths
056
157
214
349
447
515
649
749
865
957
1062
1145
1250
96.91% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences42
matches
0"been mistaken"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs102
matches(empty)
77.92% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences44
ratio0.023
matches
0"The rustling on the wind could have been mistaken for laughter - or a mocking warning."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount161
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount2
adverbRatio0.012422360248447204
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.006211180124223602
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences44
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
95.73% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences44
mean13.98
std5.44
cv0.389
sampleLengths
013
122
221
313
410
513
621
77
87
911
109
1117
1212
1313
1411
1516
167
174
1811
1917
2015
2117
2222
239
2418
2513
265
274
2819
2924
309
3111
3217
3320
3422
3514
3626
3716
3813
3916
4017
4116
427
4310
83.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5
totalSentences44
uniqueOpeners22
79.37% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences42
matches
0"Somehow, she had made it"
ratio0.024
96.19% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences42
matches
0"She glanced down at the"
1"She thought she heard a"
2"She pressed on, following the"
3"It had led her to"
4"She half-expected to see Evan,"
5"She took a deep breath"
6"She whirled around, a strangled"
7"She shouldn't be here."
8"She ran, heedless of direction,"
9"Her lungs burned and muscles"
10"She collapsed to her knees,"
11"Her stomach roiled and she"
12"She recognized the park bench"
ratio0.31
43.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount35
totalSentences42
matches
0"Rory's boots crunched on the"
1"The ancient standing stones cast"
2"She glanced down at the"
3"A chill breeze whispered through"
4"Something felt off, an unnatural"
5"Rory paused, straining her ears"
6"She thought she heard a"
7"Rory muttered to herself"
8"She pressed on, following the"
9"The Heartstone pulsed faster, its"
10"It had led her to"
11"Rory needed to find out"
12"The shadows seemed to writhe"
13"A sudden snapping of twigs"
14"She half-expected to see Evan,"
15"Rory shook her head."
16"She took a deep breath"
17"Thorns snagged at her jeans"
18"Rory had to slow her"
19"A sharp crack echoed through"
ratio0.833
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences42
matches
0"Either way, she had gotten"
ratio0.024
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Blind panic took over and she stumbled backwards, her hip slamming into the edge of a crumbling standing stone."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.667
84.9185%