| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said gently [gently]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.654 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.059 | | effectiveRatio | 0.059 | |
| 70.53% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1018 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "barely above a whisper" | | 2 | "really" | | 3 | "gently" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1018 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "reminder" | | 2 | "sense of" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "unspoken" | | 6 | "furrowing" | | 7 | "solace" | | 8 | "sanctuary" | | 9 | "charged" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "pang" | | 12 | "echoing" | | 13 | "single tear" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "flicker of emotion" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "the weight of those words" | | 1 | "a glimmer of hope" |
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| 91.67% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 50 | | matches | | 0 | "felt a jolt" | | 1 | "g in surprise" |
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| 57.14% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 50 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1016 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 57.83% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 32 | | wordCount | 868 | | uniqueNames | 4 | | maxNameDensity | 1.84 | | worstName | "Silas" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.578 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1016 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 53.67% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "know that she" | | 1 | "thought that Rory's" |
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| 64.02% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 25 | | mean | 40.64 | | std | 15.2 | | cv | 0.374 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 54 | | 1 | 52 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 45 | | 5 | 57 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 42 | | 8 | 44 | | 9 | 31 | | 10 | 41 | | 11 | 44 | | 12 | 46 | | 13 | 33 | | 14 | 69 | | 15 | 35 | | 16 | 33 | | 17 | 52 | | 18 | 38 | | 19 | 66 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 36 | | 22 | 34 | | 23 | 65 | | 24 | 32 |
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| 98.25% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 148 | | matches | | |
| 46.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 59 | | ratio | 0.034 | | matches | | 0 | "The Raven's Nest was just as Silas remembered it—dimly lit, the air heavy with the scent of stale cigarette smoke and spilled liquor." | | 1 | "It was then that he saw her—Rory, her straight black hair falling around her face as she hunched over the bar, nursing a tumbler of amber liquid." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 870 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "vibrant, fearless young woman" |
| | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.03218390804597701 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014942528735632184 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 59 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 59 | | mean | 17.22 | | std | 7.66 | | cv | 0.445 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 31 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 26 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 33 | | 33 | 36 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 26 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 61.02% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.4067796610169492 | | totalSentences | 59 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 66.67% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | | 0 | "Finally, Rory took a deep" |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 60.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | | 0 | "He slid onto the worn" | | 1 | "he replied, his voice a" | | 2 | "It was then that he" | | 3 | "He debated whether to approach" | | 4 | "he said, his voice barely" | | 5 | "she breathed, the name escaping" | | 6 | "He studied her face, searching" | | 7 | "She ran a hand through" | | 8 | "she admitted, her brow furrowing" | | 9 | "he said, taking a sip" | | 10 | "she murmured, and Silas felt" | | 11 | "They lapsed into a charged" | | 12 | "she whispered, the words catching" | | 13 | "he said gently, reaching out" | | 14 | "she said, her voice barely" | | 15 | "He had once thought that" | | 16 | "he murmured, squeezing her hand" | | 17 | "she said, her voice barely" | | 18 | "he replied, his own voice" | | 19 | "They sat there, hand in" |
| | ratio | 0.4 | |
| 70.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | | 0 | "The Raven's Nest was just" | | 1 | "Silas made his way to" | | 2 | "He slid onto the worn" | | 3 | "Samantha, the bartender, asked, her" | | 4 | "he replied, his voice a" | | 5 | "It was then that he" | | 6 | "Silas felt a jolt of" | | 7 | "Samantha placed the glass in" | | 8 | "He debated whether to approach" | | 9 | "he said, his voice barely" | | 10 | "Rory's head snapped up, her" | | 11 | "she breathed, the name escaping" | | 12 | "Silas murmured, sliding onto the" | | 13 | "He studied her face, searching" | | 14 | "Rory replied, her voice thick" | | 15 | "She ran a hand through" | | 16 | "Silas said, the corner of" | | 17 | "The use of her old" | | 18 | "Rory's gaze dropped to the" | | 19 | "she admitted, her brow furrowing" |
| | ratio | 0.78 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 77.92% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "But some invisible force seemed to draw him forward, his feet carrying him across the room until he was standing beside her." | | 1 | "They lapsed into a charged silence, the noise of the bar fading into the background as they both wrestled with the memories and emotions that had been stirred u…" | | 2 | "They sat there, hand in hand, the world around them fading into insignificance as they reconnected, their shared history and the ghosts that haunted them both f…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "he replied, his voice a low rumble" | | 1 | "he said, his voice barely above a whisper" | | 2 | "she breathed, the name escaping her lips like a prayer" | | 3 | "Rory replied, her voice thick with emotion" | | 4 | "old nickname felt, as if no time had passed at all" | | 5 | "she admitted, her brow furrowing" | | 6 | "she whispered, the words catching in her throat" | | 7 | "she said, her voice barely audible over the din of the bar" | | 8 | "she said, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 9 | "he replied, his own voice thick with unshed tears" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 16 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "Silas murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "she admitted (admit)" | | 3 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 4 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "he murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.615 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.375 | | effectiveRatio | 0.375 | |