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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMHJS4S97F1T4J473DVC5T
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Model:
Cohere Command R+ (Aug. 2024)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
35.2s
Cost:
$0.017388
Provider:
Cohere
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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The green neon sign of The Raven's Nest blinked intermittently, its light casting an eerie hue over the quiet Soho street. Aurora Carter, tucked into the collar of her jacket, paused beneath the flickering sign, hesitating for a moment before pushing open the heavy wooden door. The warmth and life beyond the entryway enticed her, offering an escape from the biting winter night. The dimly lit interior enveloped her, filled with the comforting sounds of clinking glasses and soft jazz music. Old maps and weathered photographs adorned the walls, giving the space a charm that belied its urban setting. Stepping out of the November chill, Aurora
quickly
scanned the room, her gaze
carefully
studying the patrons, not knowing who, or what, she expected to find. Her
eyes narrowed
at the sight of a familiar figure seated alone at the bar, his presence as solid and unmistakable as the solid oak bar top. It was Silas Blackwood, a man she hadn't seen in years, not since they were both younger and the world was a different place. Silas, his eyes closed, leaned against the bar, the neat lines of his gray-streaked auburn hair and matching beard softened by the warm glow of the low-hanging lamp. He wore a tailored black suit, his broad shoulders and commanding presence a striking contrast to the relaxed slouch of his posture. His right hand, adorned with a silver signet ring, cradled a glass of amber liquid, the ice clinking as his fingers tightened around it, a silent
testament
to some inner turmoil. Taking a breath, Aurora smoothed her straight black hair behind her ears, a nervous habit. She made her way towards Silas, her steps cautious on the well-worn wooden floor. It had been years—eight, to be precise—since they had last spoken. Eight years of experiences, heartaches, and growth, all bundled up between them, waiting to be acknowledged. As she drew closer, the cloying aroma of whiskey filled her senses, stirring memories. Once upon a time, Silas had been her mentor, a guide through the realms of espionage and life, but that was all in the past. A past she had chosen to leave behind when she fled to London. "Silas," she said, her voice low, her bright blue eyes taking in the changes the years had wrought. The once active man now carried himself with a slower, more measured gait. A slight limp betrayed his old knee injury, a constant reminder of the operation in Prague that had changed his life. At the sound of her voice, Silas's eyes
flickered
open, revealing a tired hazel gaze. His mouth twitched, hinting at a smile, but the expression never quite formed, as if some great effort
were required
to fully acknowledge her presence. "Aurora," he replied, his voice gravelly, a shadow of its former command. "It's been a while." Rory—as she
was known
to those closest to her—slid onto the barstool beside Silas, the heat from his body both comforting and unsettling. "'Tis indeed, but I couldn't stay away forever, now, could I?" Her attempt at levity sounded hollow, even to her own ears. They sat in silence for a moment, Rory's fingers absently tracing the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a remnant of a childhood accident. Silas stared down at his glass, as if the answer to some
unspoken
question lay within its depths. "What've you been doing, Rory?" Silas finally asked, his eyes still trained on the amber liquid. His use of her preferred nickname, a holdover from their time together, was like a key turning in an old lock. Rory hesitated, unsure how much to reveal. "I work at Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. Delivering dumplings to pay the bills, I suppose." She smiled, attempting to make light of her situation, but Silas wasn't one to be fooled by such antics. "No grand adventures? No saving the world?" His voice was wry, yet there was an underlying layer of sadness in his tone, as if he recognized the implications of her ordinary life. She shook her head, her eyes drifting to the bookshelf, wondering if it still concealed the secret room where they once planned covert operations. "No, nothing like that. Just delivering food and trying to stay warm in this dreary weather." "I hear you, lass." Silas finally met her gaze, his eyes softening. He raised his glass, the ice clinking against the rim as if in a silent toast. "To the simple life, and to the weather that makes it all worthwhile." Rory chuckled, raising an imaginary glass in return. "Sure, Si. To the simple life and the warmth it brings." She sipped at the air, savoring the imagined drink. A comfortable silence fell between them. The once formidable spy and his protégé, now content to sit in the quiet calm of this hidden bar. Silas broke the silence, his voice gentle, as if afraid of shattering the moment. "I always wondered, Rory, if you would come back." Her heart quickened at his words, at the implication that she still had a place in this world—a role to play. "Wondered, did you, now?" He nodded, his eyes searching her face, as if reading the story of her life in the lines and freckles. "Aye. Sometimes, I'd catch a glimpse of a girl with black hair and bright eyes, and I'd swear it was you, ready to take on the world." Rory's chest tightened at the memory of her younger self, eager and full of promise. "But I'm not her anymore, Si. I'm someone different." "Aye. We all change, Rory. It's the way of things." His voice
was filled
with acceptance and resignation. "I changed too. My life became this bar, and the network that comes with it." She regarded him with a mix of curiosity and concern. "You're content with that, Si? Content to be retired, to leave the field behind?" Silas took a slow sip of his drink, the bite of whiskey briefly contorting his face. "It's not the life I had planned, but it has its purpose. I keep my ear to the ground, facilitate connections...Perhaps not as exciting, but still worthwhile." Rory nodded, understanding
the weight of his words
. "I suppose we can't be who we once were, not
truly
. But we can grow into new roles, find new purposes." "Aye, we can. And we can carry the lessons we've learned, the people we've been, with us." Silas smiled, the creases around his eyes crinkling with warmth. "Old spies, still wise, just a bit older and wiser." Their conversation continued late into the night, each word a thread knitting together the years they had spent apart. As Rory made her way up to the flat above the bar, a place she once called home, the
weight
of the evening's revelations bore down on her. Time and regret had shaped them, but the bond between them, it seemed, endured.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
0.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
2
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"she said, her voice low, her bright blue eyes taking in the changes the years had wrought [bright]"
1
"he replied, his voice gravelly, a shadow of its former command [gravelly]"
74.1824%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1162
totalAiIsmAdverbs
3
found
0
adverb
"carefully"
count
1
1
adverb
"quickly"
count
1
2
adverb
"truly"
count
1
highlights
0
"carefully"
1
"quickly"
2
"truly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
56.9707%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1162
totalAiIsms
5
found
0
word
"testament"
count
1
1
word
"flickered"
count
1
2
word
"unspoken"
count
1
3
word
"weight"
count
2
highlights
0
"testament"
1
"flickered"
2
"unspoken"
3
"weight"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
1
label
"weight of words/silence"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes narrowed"
1
"the weight of his words"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
52
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
52
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
64
matches
(empty)
63.2055%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
28
mean
41.14
std
15.27
cv
0.371
sampleLengths
0
63
1
62
2
51
3
81
4
56
5
52
6
52
7
40
8
16
9
45
10
43
11
37
12
42
13
32
14
40
15
41
16
28
17
39
18
9
19
25
20
47
21
24
22
33
23
24
24
43
25
29
26
37
27
61
94.8718%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
3
totalSentences
52
matches
0
"were required"
1
"was known"
2
"was filled"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
136
matches
(empty)
94.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
909
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount
29
adverbRatio
0.0319031903190319
lyAdverbCount
10
lyAdverbRatio
0.011001100110011002
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
64
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
94.7100%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
64
mean
18
std
6.96
cv
0.387
sampleLengths
0
21
1
25
2
17
3
18
4
18
5
26
6
27
7
24
8
28
9
22
10
31
11
15
12
14
13
11
14
16
15
14
16
25
17
13
18
18
19
13
20
21
21
15
22
25
23
12
24
4
25
23
26
22
27
25
28
18
29
16
30
21
31
7
32
35
33
32
34
24
35
16
36
12
37
16
38
13
39
8
40
20
41
6
42
19
43
14
44
9
45
21
46
4
47
20
48
27
49
15
76.5625%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
1
diversityRatio
0.46875
totalSentences
64
uniqueOpeners
30
50.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
2
fancyCount
1
fancyTags
0
"she said, her voice low, her bright blue eyes taking in the changes the years had wrought (say, take have)"
82.6178%