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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMJDHW1GBX7P1HMFM0NPBW
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Model:
Ministral 3B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
10.9s
Cost:
$0.000156
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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The Raven’s Nest hummed with the kind of quiet energy that only comes from a place where secrets linger like smoke in the air. The neon green sign above the door pulsed faintly, casting a sickly green glow over the dimly lit room. Aurora Carter—Rory, as she preferred—adjusted the strap of her backpack, the
weight
of it familiar but not quite the same. She had come here for the food, for the escape, but also for something else, something she couldn’t name yet. The bar smelled of aged whiskey and the faint metallic tang of old stories. She spotted him immediately. Silas Blackwood stood at the far end of the bar, his back to her, a glass of amber liquid in hand. His auburn hair, streaked with grey, was
slightly
tousled, as if he’d been running his hands through it for the last hour. He was taller than she remembered, his posture broader, the limp in his left leg more pronounced now. A silver signet ring glinted on his right hand, the only thing about him that didn’t
seem to
have softened with time. Aurora exhaled through her nose, her bright blue eyes
flicker
ing over the room. The bar was packed, but she made her way through the crowd, her black hair swaying just enough to catch the
flicker
ing light. She stopped when she reached him, her boots scuffing against the worn linoleum. “Silas,” she said, her voice steadier than she felt. “I didn’t expect to see you here.” He turned
slowly
, his hazel eyes locking onto hers. The man she’d known in her late twenties—sharp, quick-witted, always the one to cut through the nonsense—was still there, but something had shifted. The lines around his mouth were deeper, the edges of his beard more defined. He didn’t smile. “Aurora,” he said, his voice rough. “I didn’t expect to see you either.” She hesitated, the
weight
of the years pressing down on her like a physical thing. “You look different.” “So do you,” he countered, his gaze sweeping over her. “You’re thinner. Your hair’s darker. And you’re
carrying that damn
backpack everywhere.” She lifted her chin. “It’s not just that.” Silas leaned against the bar, his limp making a subtle shift with each step. “What’s that supposed to mean?” “That I’m not the same person I was when we last talked.” She swallowed. “I left London without saying goodbye. Without telling you I was coming. And then I never came back.” Silas’s fingers twitched around his glass. “You didn’t have to.” “But I did,” she pressed. “I should have.” A beat of silence. The kind that pressed between them like a physical force, thick and unyielding. Aurora’s scar on her left wrist—small as it was—pulsed faintly beneath her skin, a reminder of the accident that had changed everything when she was twelve. She hadn’t told Silas about that then, either. Not until later, when she’d needed to. “You were in Cardiff,” Silas said finally, his voice low. “Leaving Evan behind. That wasn’t a choice you made
lightly
.” Aurora’s throat tightened. “I was scared. And I was angry. But I was also running from something else. From myself.” Silas studied her for a long moment, his expression
unreadable
. “You came to London to work at Yu-Fei’s. That’s not running.” “It’s not running,” she agreed. “It’s just… I’m not sure where I belong anymore.” Silas exhaled through his nose, a sound that was almost a laugh. “You’ve always been good at that.” She turned away, her fingers brushing against the strap of her backpack. “I should go.” “Wait.” Silas’s voice cut through her, sharp and unexpected. “You’re not leaving.” Aurora looked back at him, her eyes burning with something she hadn’t felt in years. “I’m not sure I can stay.” Silas stood, his limp making a deliberate, almost theatrical shift. He crossed the space between them in two strides, his hand reaching out before she could react. His fingers closed around hers, warm and rough. “You’re not leaving me.” She pulled away, her pulse hammering in her throat. “I’m not leaving you. But I’m not here for you either.” Silas’s jaw tightened. “Then what are you here for?” Aurora swallowed hard. “I’m here because I’m tired of running.” He studied her for another long moment, his expression
unreadable
. Then,
slowly
, he nodded. “You always were the one who could see the truth.” She smiled faintly. “I’m not so sure about that anymore.” Silas’s gaze darkened. “Then maybe it’s time you learned.” The bar around them
seemed to
hold its breath, the hum of conversation and laughter swallowed by the quiet between them. Aurora looked at him—
really
looked at him—and for the first time in years, she felt something she hadn’t expected:
a flicker of hope
. But it
was gone
as
quickly
as it came, replaced by the
weight
of all the things she’d left behind. The things she’d never said. Silas dropped his hand, his expression hardening. “We should talk.” Aurora nodded, her stomach twisting. “About what?” He didn’t answer right away. Instead, he turned, his back to her, and gestured toward the back of the bar. “The secret room.” She hesitated. “Why?” Silas didn’t look at her. “Because I have something to show you.” Aurora followed him through the crowd, the
weight
of the backpack pressing into her shoulders. The back room
was tucked
behind a bookshelf, the door hidden by a stack of old maps and photographs. Silas pushed the shelf aside with a practiced flick of his wrist, the hinges groaning
softly
. The room was small, dimly lit by a single bulb hanging from the ceiling. Silas stepped inside, his limp making a subtle shift as he moved. Aurora followed, her breath catching in her throat. On the wall opposite her, a map of London
was pinned
to the corkboard. A single name
was circled
in red ink: *Cardiff*. Beside it, a stack of files was neatly arranged, their spines worn from years of handling. Silas reached out, his fingers brushing against the map. “This is where you were when you left.” Aurora’s stomach twisted. “What is this?” “A record,” Silas said, his voice low. “Of everything you’ve done since you left.” She turned to him, her eyes wide. “What do you mean?” Silas gestured to the files. “I’ve been tracking you. Not because I wanted to, but because I had to.” Aurora’s breath hitched. “You did?” Silas nodded. “You disappeared from London after you left Evan. No one knew where you were. No one knew what you were doing. And then, a year later, you showed up in Cardiff. Working at a university library. Then you left again, this time for London. But I found you there. Working at Yu-Fei’s.” Aurora’s hands
clenched into fists
. “You followed me.” Silas’s gaze was steady. “I followed you because I was worried. Because I knew you were running from something. And I didn’t know what to do about it.” Aurora’s mind raced. “You’ve been watching me this whole time?” Silas didn’t answer right away. Instead, he reached into his pocket and pulled out a small, leather-bound journal. He handed it to her, his fingers brushing against hers again. Aurora took it, her fingers trembling. The cover was worn, the pages yellowed with age. She flipped through them, her breath catching in her throat. “You’ve been keeping notes on me,” she said, her voice
barely above a whisper
. Silas nodded. “Since the day you left London. Every move you made. Every decision you made. I thought if I knew what you were doing, I could help you.” Aurora’s eyes burned. “You could have just asked.” Silas’s jaw tightened. “I didn’t want to. Because I knew you wouldn’t tell me.” Aurora looked up at him, her heart pounding. “Why?” Silas studied her for a long moment, his expression
unreadable
. “Because you’re afraid of what you’ll find out. Because you’re afraid of who you’ve become.” Aurora’s breath hitched. “I’m not afraid of that.” Silas’s gaze darkened. “Then why did you come here?” She swallowed hard. “Because I’m not the same person I was when we last talked. And I don’t know if I can keep running anymore.” Silas exhaled through his nose, his expression softening just a little. “Then maybe it’s time you stopped.” Aurora looked at the journal in her hands, at the pages filled with Silas’s careful notes. She looked at him, at the man she’d known in her twenties, and at the man he’d become. She looked at the
weight
of all the years she’d spent running, and the things she’d never said. She closed the journal, her fingers brushing against the pages. “I don’t know what to do.” Silas reached out, his hand closing around hers again. “You don’t have to know right now.” Aurora looked up at him, her eyes burning. “I’m not sure I can stay.” Silas’s expression darkened. “Then maybe you should leave.” She pulled away, her breath catching in her throat. “I’m not leaving you.” Silas studied her for a long moment, his gaze steady. Then,
slowly
, he nodded. “We should talk.” Aurora nodded, her stomach twisting. “About what?” Silas didn’t answer right away. Instead, he turned, his back to her, and gestured toward the door. “The truth.” Aurora followed him out into the bar, the
weight
of the backpack pressing into her shoulders. The crowd around them
seemed to
hold its breath, the hum of conversation and laughter swallowed by the quiet between them. Silas turned to her, his expression
unreadable
. “You’re not the same person you were when we last talked.” Aurora looked at him, her eyes burning. “I’m not sure I’m the same person I was when I left.” Silas studied her for a long moment, his gaze steady. Then,
slowly
, he nodded. “Then maybe it’s time you found out.” Aurora exhaled through her nose, her breath steadying. “I don’t know what to do.” Silas reached out, his hand closing around hers again. “You don’t have to know right now.” Aurora looked up at him, her eyes burning. “I’m not sure I can stay.” Silas’s expression darkened. “Then maybe you should leave.” She pulled away, her breath catching in her throat. “I’m not leaving you.” Silas studied her for a long moment, his gaze
unwavering
. Then, he turned, his back to her, and gestured toward the back of the bar. “The secret room.” Aurora followed him inside, the
weight
of the backpack pressing into her shoulders. The room was small, dimly lit, the air thick with the scent of old paper and something else—something she couldn’t quite place. Silas stepped forward, his limp making a subtle shift as he moved. He reached into his pocket and pulled out a small, silver flask. He handed it to her, his fingers brushing against hers again. Aurora took it, her breath catching in her throat. “What is this?” Silas didn’t answer right away. Instead, he gestured toward the map on the wall. “This is where you were when you left. And this”—he tapped the flask—“is what you need to remember.” Aurora looked at the flask, at the silver surface, and then at Silas. She looked at the
weight
of all the years she’d spent running, and the things she’d never said. She took a deep breath, her fingers trembling. She opened the flask, the contents warm against her tongue. She took a sip, the liquid burning her throat. Silas watched her, his expression steady. “You’re not the same person you were when we last talked.” Aurora swallowed, her breath steadying. “I’m not sure I’m the same person I was when I left.” Silas studied her for a long moment, his gaze
unwavering
. Then,
slowly
, he nodded. “Then maybe it’s time you found out.” Aurora looked at the flask in her hands, at the silver surface, and at the
weight
of all the years she’d spent running. She looked at Silas, at the man she’d known in her twenties, and at the man he’d become. She closed the flask, her fingers brushing against the surface. “I don’t know what to do.” Silas reached out, his hand closing around hers again. “You don’t have to know right now.” Aurora looked up at him, her eyes burning. “I’m not sure I can stay.” Silas’s expression darkened. “Then maybe you should leave.” She pulled away, her breath catching in her throat. “I’m not leaving you.” Silas studied her for a long moment, his gaze
unwavering
. Then, he turned, his back to her, and gestured toward the door. “The truth.” Aurora followed him out into the bar, the
weight
of the backpack pressing into her shoulders. The crowd around them
seemed to
hold its breath, the hum of conversation and laughter swallowed by the quiet between them. Silas turned to her, his expression
unreadable
. “You’re not the same person you were when we last talked.” Aurora exhaled through her nose, her breath steadying. “I’m not sure I’m the same person I was when I left.” Silas studied her, his gaze
unwavering
. “Then maybe it’s time you found out who you
really
are.” Aurora took a deep breath, her fingers tightening around the strap of her backpack. She looked at Silas, at the man who had been her friend, her mentor, her confidant. She looked at the
weight
of all the years she’d spent running, and the things she’d never said. She nodded
slowly
. “I think I do.” Silas’s expression softened, just a little. “Then let’s find out.”
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
50.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
8
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"Silas said finally, his voice low [finally]"
1
"she said, her voice barely above a whisper [barely]"
42.4269%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
2258
totalAiIsmAdverbs
13
found
0
adverb
"lightly"
count
1
1
adverb
"quickly"
count
1
2
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
3
adverb
"slowly"
count
6
4
adverb
"softly"
count
1
5
adverb
"barely above a whisper"
count
1
6
adverb
"really"
count
2
highlights
0
"lightly"
1
"quickly"
2
"slightly"
3
"slowly"
4
"softly"
5
"barely above a whisper"
6
"really"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
6.9973%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
2258
totalAiIsms
21
found
0
word
"flicker"
count
1
1
word
"unwavering"
count
4
2
word
"unreadable"
count
5
3
word
"weight"
count
11
highlights
0
"flicker"
1
"unwavering"
2
"unreadable"
3
"weight"
66.6667%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
2
found
0
label
"clenched jaw/fists"
count
1
1
label
"flicker of emotion"
count
1
highlights
0
"clenched into fists"
1
"a flicker of hope"
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
157
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
4
narrationSentences
157
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seem to"
1
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
237
matches
0
"carrying that damn"
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
103
mean
21.8
std
15.69
cv
0.72
sampleLengths
0
97
1
87
2
49
3
16
4
49
5
13
6
18
7
22
8
8
9
19
10
32
11
10
12
8
13
58
14
20
15
20
16
21
17
14
18
18
19
15
20
12
21
21
22
39
23
20
24
9
25
10
26
24
27
10
28
9
29
44
30
25
31
10
32
7
33
23
34
3
35
12
36
50
37
34
38
39
39
17
40
6
41
14
42
11
43
19
44
5
45
54
46
8
47
28
48
10
49
29
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
4
totalSentences
157
matches
0
"was gone"
1
"was tucked"
2
"was pinned"
3
"was circled"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
270
matches
(empty)
88.2254%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1588
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"small, leather-bound journal."
adverbCount
74
adverbRatio
0.04659949622166247
lyAdverbCount
23
lyAdverbRatio
0.014483627204030227
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
237
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
237
mean
9.47
std
6.42
cv
0.678
sampleLengths
0
24
1
19
2
20
3
20
4
14
5
4
6
21
7
22
8
18
9
22
10
13
11
23
12
13
13
9
14
7
15
9
16
23
17
14
18
3
19
6
20
7
21
15
22
3
23
10
24
12
25
4
26
4
27
14
28
5
29
14
30
18
31
6
32
4
33
5
34
3
35
4
36
13
37
26
38
8
39
7
40
10
41
10
42
3
43
17
44
10
45
11
46
5
47
9
48
12
49
6
44.0928%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
14
diversityRatio
0.11814345991561181
totalSentences
237
uniqueOpeners
28
18.7500%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
8
fancyCount
5
fancyTags
0
"she said, her voice steadier than she felt (say, feel)"
1
"he countered, his gaze sweeping over her (counter)"
2
"she pressed (press)"
3
"Silas said finally, his voice low (say finally)"
4
"she agreed (agree)"
77.4800%