| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 93.32% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 749 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 749 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "sentinels" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "measured" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "scanning" | | 8 | "flicker" | | 9 | "resolve" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "cacophony" | | 12 | "trembled" | | 13 | "stomach" | | 14 | "lurch" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 8 | | markdownWords | 23 | | totalWords | 744 | | ratio | 0.031 | | matches | | 0 | "Just like old times," | | 1 | "Okay. Still Earth. Still real." | | 2 | "Hel portal," | | 3 | "Close." | | 4 | "You’re imagining things." | | 5 | "Human." | | 6 | "\"Little lost thing,\"" | | 7 | "\"You don’t belong here.\"" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.50% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 17 | | wordCount | 734 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.09 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 4 | | Pendant | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | London | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Rory | 8 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Rory" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.955 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed almost deliberate as if some ancient hand had carved them into sentinels" | | 1 | "quite touch the edges of the trees" | | 2 | "quite resolve into anything recognizable" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 744 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 25.66 | | std | 24.39 | | cv | 0.951 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 71 | | 1 | 80 | | 2 | 61 | | 3 | 64 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 43 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 51 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 33 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 34 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 41 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 34 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 43 | | 23 | 55 | | 24 | 43 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 3 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.83% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 128 | | matches | | 0 | "was holding" | | 1 | "wasn’t coming" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 86 | | ratio | 0.058 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come to the Fae Grove for answers—not that she expected them to be kind ones." | | 1 | "Then—movement." | | 2 | "But the air smelled different now—sharp, metallic, like ozone after a storm." | | 3 | "The whispers crescendoed, a cacophony of hisses and clicks, and then—" | | 4 | "Its face—if it could be called a face—was a shifting mass of shadows, features melting and reforming like wax." |
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| 94.85% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 741 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.04588394062078273 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008097165991902834 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 86 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 86 | | mean | 8.65 | | std | 6.64 | | cv | 0.767 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 45.35% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.3488372093023256 | | totalSentences | 86 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "*Just like old times,* she" | | 1 | "Instead, it settled in her" | | 2 | "Then came the first sound." | | 3 | "Just shadows, deep and impenetrable." | | 4 | "Of course there wasn’t." | | 5 | "Then, from behind her, a" |
| | ratio | 0.09 | |
| 94.63% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come to the" | | 1 | "She hesitated, fingers brushing the" | | 2 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 3 | "She pulled it free, watching" | | 4 | "She kept walking, following the" | | 5 | "She brushed them away, her" | | 6 | "*You’re imagining things.*" | | 7 | "She clapped her hands over" | | 8 | "It was inside her skull." | | 9 | "She barely caught herself before" | | 10 | "Her blood turned to ice." | | 11 | "She wasn’t alone." | | 12 | "She forced herself to stand," | | 13 | "Its limbs stretched unnaturally, its" | | 14 | "Its face—if it could be" | | 15 | "Its eyes were solid, black" | | 16 | "It tilted its head, the" | | 17 | "it said, its voice a" | | 18 | "She had come for answers." | | 19 | "She had not come to" |
| | ratio | 0.313 | |
| 57.01% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "The night air was thick" | | 1 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "She had come to the" | | 3 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 4 | "The boundary hummed with a" | | 5 | "She hesitated, fingers brushing the" | | 6 | "The moment she stepped between" | | 7 | "The distant hum of London" | | 8 | "The clearing stretched before her," | | 9 | "The wildflowers glowed faintly, their" | | 10 | "Rory exhaled, slow and measured." | | 11 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 12 | "The Heartstone’s warmth had intensified," | | 13 | "She pulled it free, watching" | | 14 | "*Hel portal,* she thought." | | 15 | "A whisper, so faint she" | | 16 | "The air was still, heavy," | | 17 | "Rory turned, scanning the tree" | | 18 | "She kept walking, following the" | | 19 | "The trees here were older," |
| | ratio | 0.806 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 37.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 34 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The night air was thick with the scent of damp earth and wildflowers, the kind that bloomed only in places where the veil between worlds grew thin." | | 1 | "The standing stones loomed ahead, their gnarled oaks twisted into shapes that seemed almost deliberate, as if some ancient hand had carved them into sentinels." | | 2 | "A flicker of pale, too-long limbs, a shape that didn’t quite resolve into anything recognizable." | | 3 | "The whispers returned, louder this time, overlapping, a chorus of voices speaking in a language that slithered through her mind like oil." | | 4 | "Its limbs stretched unnaturally, its joints bending in ways that made her stomach lurch." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "it said, its voice a wet, clicking rasp" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |