Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMM23JNVK8P506RSSMCFM9

Run Details

Duration:
5.5s
Cost:
$0.000098

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest smelled of aged whiskey and damp wood, the kind of place where secrets lingered like the scent of old parchment. The neon green sign above the door pulsed faintly, casting a sickly green glow over the dimly lit room. Aurora Carter—Rory—stood at the bar, her fingers tracing the edge of a glass she hadn’t touched yet, her bright blue eyes scanning the crowd. She was wearing a dark green sweater, the sleeves rolled up to her elbows, and her black hair was pulled back into a loose braid, the way she always did when she was tired. She had been here for hours, watching the world go by, waiting for someone who hadn’t come. Then she saw him. Silas Blackwood leaned against the counter, his silver signet ring catching the light as he sipped from a glass of something amber and strong. His auburn hair, streaked with gray, was slightly tousled, and his hazel eyes held a quiet intensity that made Rory’s breath catch. She recognized the way he carried himself—quiet, deliberate, like he was always waiting for something. Like he was still in the game. She exhaled slowly, forcing herself to meet his gaze. He didn’t look at her first. Instead, he raised his glass in a slow, deliberate gesture, as if he were waiting for her to make the first move. “You’re here,” she said, her voice steadier than she felt. Silas set his glass down with a faint clink. “Of course I’m here. You’re at my bar.” Rory’s jaw tightened. “I know.” A beat of silence stretched between them, thick with unspoken words. The kind of silence that had been between them for years, the kind that had hardened into something else. She remembered the way he used to look at her—like she was the only person in the room who mattered. Now, it was just another face in the crowd. “You look different,” she said finally. Silas didn’t flinch. “And you look the same.” She laughed, sharp and bitter. “I don’t know what you mean.” He turned his head slightly, his gaze flickering over her face. “You’re thinner. Your hair’s different. You don’t look like the same person who left me in London.” Rory’s fingers curled around the glass, the ice cold against her skin. “I left because I had to.” “And now?” Now she was a delivery person at Yu-Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress, working her way through the night to pay off debts she didn’t want to acknowledge. Now she lived in a flat above Silas’ bar, barely able to afford the rent. Now she was Rory again, but Rory who had learned to survive on her own. Silas didn’t press. He just watched her, as if he were waiting for her to tell him something she hadn’t told herself in years. “You’re not the same,” she said instead. “You’re older. Your hair’s gray. You limp when you walk.” He smiled, a slow, knowing thing. “I’m still the same Silas.” She wanted to argue. She wanted to tell him how much she missed him, how much she missed the way he used to make her laugh. But the words stuck in her throat, heavy and unspoken. “Why are you here?” she asked. Silas turned away from the counter, his limp more pronounced as he moved. He pulled out a chair for her, the kind of gesture that used to make her heart race. Now it just made her feel like she was being set up for something. “Because I’m always here,” he said. “For you.” The words hung between them, heavy with implication. Rory wanted to snap at him, to tell him he was wrong, that she hadn’t needed him anymore. But the truth was, she had. She had needed him then, and she still needed him now, in a way she couldn’t quite name. She sat down, her fingers brushing against the armrest. “What do you want?” Silas didn’t answer right away. He poured himself another drink, the amber liquid catching the light as it swirled. “I want to know what happened to you.” Rory’s stomach twisted. “I don’t know what you mean.” “You left London. You left me. For someone who didn’t deserve you.” The words hit her like a punch to the gut. She had left Evan, yes, but she hadn’t left Silas. She had just thought she had. She had thought she could do it on her own. “You don’t know what I went through,” she said, her voice breaking. “You don’t know what it was like.” Silas set his glass down with a quiet clatter. “I know what it’s like to lose someone you love.” Rory stared at him, her mind racing. “You lost someone?” He nodded, his expression unreadable. “My wife. She died in Prague.” Rory’s breath caught. “Oh.” Silas didn’t look away. “I was there. I was supposed to be protecting her. And I failed.” The weight of it settled between them, heavy and unspoken. Rory had failed too. She had failed Evan, and she had failed Silas. She had failed herself. “You were supposed to be protecting me,” she said softly. Silas exhaled, a slow, weary breath. “I was. And I still am.” She wanted to tell him that she didn’t believe him. She wanted to tell him that she had moved on, that she had found her own way. But the words wouldn’t come. Instead, she said, “You’re not the same person who sent me away.” Silas smiled again, but it was different now. It was sad. “I’m still the same person who wants to help you.” The bar was quiet around them, the hum of conversation and laughter fading into the background. Rory looked around, her eyes scanning the faces she didn’t know, the people who had changed while she had stayed the same. She wanted to leave. She wanted to go home, to her flat above Silas’ bar, to her job at the restaurant, to the life she had built for herself. But she couldn’t move. “Why are you really here?” she asked. Silas turned to her, his gaze intense. “Because I’m not done with you yet.” The words settled over her, heavy and final. Rory wanted to argue. She wanted to tell him he was wrong. But she also wanted to believe him. “You’re not,” she said softly. Silas reached across the bar, his hand brushing against hers. The contact sent a jolt of electricity through her, familiar and strange at the same time. He pulled her chair closer, his voice low and steady. “You’re not the same person who left me,” he said again. “But you’re still me.” Rory looked at him, her heart pounding in her chest. She wanted to run. She wanted to scream. But she also wanted to stay. She reached up, her fingers brushing against his beard. “What do you want from me?” Silas smiled, his gaze softening. “Just to know that you’re okay.” And in that moment, Rory realized that she wasn’t. She had been okay once. She had been okay when she was young and full of dreams and possibilities. But now, she was just Rory, trying to keep her head above water in a world that had changed while she had stayed the same. She looked at Silas, at the man who had once been her mentor, her friend, her protector. And she realized that she had never really left him. She just had to find her way back.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount6
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
1"she said instead [instead]"
2"she said softly [softly]"
3"Instead, she said, [Instead,]"
4"she said softly [softly]"
5"he said again [again]"
44.0448% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1251
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count2
3
adverb"really"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"softly"
3"really"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.0320% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1251
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"unspoken"
count3
1
word"unreadable"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"unspoken"
1"unreadable"
2"weight"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences99
matches
0"was sad"
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences99
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount4
totalSentences125
matches
0"on, that she"
1"know that you’re"
2"realized that she"
3"realized that she"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean22.67
std19.88
cv0.877
sampleLengths
0117
14
268
337
410
517
65
759
86
98
1011
1128
1218
132
1456
1524
1617
1711
1836
196
2045
218
2250
2313
2427
259
2612
2736
2819
2919
3010
3111
324
3317
3427
3510
3612
3732
3812
3921
4038
4133
427
4314
4427
455
4636
4715
4824
4915
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences99
matches
0"was pulled"
1"been between"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs198
matches
0"was wearing"
1"were waiting"
2"were waiting"
87.1299% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1024
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"ice cold against her"
adverbCount49
adverbRatio0.0478515625
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.01171875
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences125
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences125
mean9.98
std6.36
cv0.638
sampleLengths
023
119
224
334
417
54
624
722
815
97
109
116
1222
1310
149
158
163
172
1811
1919
2020
219
226
233
245
255
266
2711
2817
2912
306
312
3226
3315
3415
353
3621
377
3810
396
405
414
4222
4310
446
4513
4618
4714
486
492
38.0000% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.2
totalSentences125
uniqueOpeners25
15.9091% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"she said, her voice steadier than she felt (say, feel)"
1"she said finally (say finally)"
2"she said instead (say instead)"
3"she said, her voice breaking (say, break)"
4"she said softly (say softly)"
5"she said softly (say softly)"
6"he said again (say again)"
79.1245%