| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.26% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1055 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 14.69% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1055 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "stomach" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "loomed" | | 4 | "shimmered" | | 5 | "perfect" | | 6 | "scanning" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "familiar" | | 11 | "looming" | | 12 | "sentinel" | | 13 | "throbbed" | | 14 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 117 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 117 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 118 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.73% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 18 | | markdownWords | 59 | | totalWords | 1051 | | ratio | 0.056 | | matches | | 0 | "Laila" | | 1 | "For when the Hel portals open. You’ll know." | | 2 | "Don’t go there," | | 3 | "But if you do, don’t stay after dark." | | 4 | "thin places" | | 5 | "\"The Heartstone is a key,\"" | | 6 | "\"But keys open doors. And some doors should stay shut.\"" | | 7 | "Rory." | | 8 | "inside" | | 9 | "gone" | | 10 | "You left me." | | 11 | "You ran." | | 12 | "You owe me." | | 13 | "inside" | | 14 | "moved" | | 15 | "laughed" | | 16 | "escape" | | 17 | "I’ll find you. I’ll always find you." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.20% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 32 | | wordCount | 1035 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.26 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 13 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Park | 2 | | Eva | 2 | | Cardiff | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Silence | 1 | | Evan | 2 | | Richmond | 2 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Empress" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Golden" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Cardiff" | | 3 | "Richmond" | | 4 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.872 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1051 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 43 | | mean | 24.44 | | std | 28.19 | | cv | 1.153 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 114 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 67 | | 3 | 66 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 97 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 70 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 41 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 33 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 54 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 56 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 60 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 59 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 58 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 34 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 7 |
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| 93.27% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "were filled" | | 1 | "was *gone" | | 2 | "was gone" | | 3 | "was cracked" |
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| 53.48% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 182 | | matches | | 0 | "was happening" | | 1 | "wasn’t leaving" | | 2 | "was coming" | | 3 | "was going" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 118 | | ratio | 0.051 | | matches | | 0 | "She hadn’t asked for the thing—hadn’t even known it existed until it arrived in a padded envelope at the Golden Empress, addressed to *Laila*, the name she’d used only once, years ago, in a moment of desperation." | | 1 | "The usual rustle of foxes, the distant hum of traffic—all of it had vanished, swallowed by the hush of the grove." | | 2 | "She reached into her bag, fingers brushing the worn leather of her father’s old journal—the one she’d stolen from his study before leaving Cardiff." | | 3 | "Then—" | | 4 | "She spun, but there was nothing—only the trees, the flowers, the yew looming like a sentinel." | | 5 | "The whispers followed, hissing her name, promising things—*I’ll find you." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1042 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "over frost-kissed grass," |
| | adverbCount | 32 | | adverbRatio | 0.030710172744721688 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01055662188099808 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 118 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 118 | | mean | 8.91 | | std | 6.59 | | cv | 0.74 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 37 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 26 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 36.44% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.2627118644067797 | | totalSentences | 118 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "Too late for that." | | 1 | "Then she heard the breathing." | | 2 | "Then the whispers came from" | | 3 | "Only the park remained, quiet," |
| | ratio | 0.04 | |
| 89.31% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 33 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "She hadn’t asked for the" | | 2 | "She hadn’t known." | | 3 | "She flexed her fingers, willing" | | 4 | "She was here because of" | | 5 | "She was here for answers." | | 6 | "She reached into her bag," | | 7 | "She flipped to a dog-eared" | | 8 | "She turned slowly, scanning the" | | 9 | "Her voice sounded thin, swallowed" | | 10 | "She turned back to the" | | 11 | "She gritted her teeth." | | 12 | "It came from the other" | | 13 | "She stepped back, her boot" | | 14 | "Her knees nearly buckled." | | 15 | "She knew that voice." | | 16 | "He was *gone*." | | 17 | "She’d made sure of it." | | 18 | "She fumbled with the clasp," | | 19 | "She spun, but there was" |
| | ratio | 0.327 | |
| 54.06% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 82 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "The night air was thick" | | 1 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "The silver chain was cool" | | 3 | "She hadn’t asked for the" | | 4 | "The note inside had been" | | 5 | "She hadn’t known." | | 6 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 7 | "Richmond Park was usually quiet" | | 8 | "The usual rustle of foxes," | | 9 | "Rory’s boots crunched over frost-kissed" | | 10 | "She flexed her fingers, willing" | | 11 | "She was here because of" | | 12 | "The boundary of the grove" | | 13 | "The air shifted, cooler, heavier," | | 14 | "Rory stumbled, pressing a hand" | | 15 | "The wildflowers here were too" | | 16 | "Rory exhaled, slow and steady." | | 17 | "She was here for answers." | | 18 | "That was all." | | 19 | "The pendant warmed against her" |
| | ratio | 0.812 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "Because it had started glowing" | | 1 | "Because Eva had texted her" | | 2 | "*But if you do, don’t" |
| | ratio | 0.03 | |
| 93.02% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The night air was thick with the scent of damp earth and wildflowers, their perfume cloying in a way that made Rory’s stomach clench." | | 1 | "The silver chain was cool against her skin, but the crimson gem itself pulsed faintly, as if breathing." | | 2 | "The crescent-shaped scar on her left arm throbbed, as if freshly made." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |