| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "The figure’s hand hovered just [just]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.208 | | leniency | 0.417 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.083 | |
| 76.21% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1261 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | adverb | "reluctantly" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "reluctantly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 4.84% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1261 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "familiar" | | 6 | "unspoken" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "searing" | | 9 | "reminder" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "pounding" | | 12 | "raced" | | 13 | "sentinel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 127 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 127 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 143 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 9 | | markdownWords | 25 | | totalWords | 1253 | | ratio | 0.02 | | matches | | 0 | "Find the Grove" | | 1 | "This is where you’re supposed to be." | | 2 | "alive" | | 3 | "Get a grip. It’s just the wind." | | 4 | "It’s watching me." | | 5 | "Run." | | 6 | "leaned" | | 7 | "pulled" | | 8 | "do" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 31 | | wordCount | 1119 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 1.61 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Grove | 10 | | Rory | 18 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.696 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 28.05% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "as if answering some unspoken question" | | 1 | "something like wet stone and iron" | | 2 | "shadows that seemed to breathe" | | 3 | "felt like it might break her skin" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1253 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 143 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 54 | | mean | 23.2 | | std | 19.79 | | cv | 0.853 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 1 | | 1 | 81 | | 2 | 78 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 47 | | 5 | 40 | | 6 | 53 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 37 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 57 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 52 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 35 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 41 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 40 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 56 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 30 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 40 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 31 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 25 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 23 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 33 | | 47 | 43 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 37 |
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| 94.21% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | | 0 | "supposed" | | 1 | "was supposed" | | 2 | "was supposed" | | 3 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 203 | | matches | | 0 | "was, stepping" | | 1 | "was falling" | | 2 | "was watching" |
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| 22.98% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 143 | | ratio | 0.042 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora—Rory, if anyone asked—pulled her coat tighter around her shoulders, the silver chain of the Heartstone pendant digging into her collarbone." | | 1 | "Not the absence of sound—there was the rustle of leaves, the distant hoot of an owl—but the way the world held its breath." | | 2 | "The standing stones marked the boundary, their carvings worn smooth by time—or something else." | | 3 | "Its face—if it could be called that—was a smooth, featureless mask, save for two slits where eyes might be." | | 4 | "And in the center of the clearing—" | | 5 | "She was falling again, but this time it wasn’t the ground that gave way—it was her own body, dissolving into the Grove, into the shadows, into the thing that wasn’t a thing but was watching her, waiting." |
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| 95.47% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1129 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 51 | | adverbRatio | 0.045172719220549155 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008857395925597875 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 143 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 143 | | mean | 8.76 | | std | 6.21 | | cv | 0.709 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 35.31% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 21 | | diversityRatio | 0.17482517482517482 | | totalSentences | 143 | | uniqueOpeners | 25 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the Grove, breathing in" | | 1 | "Just the trees, swaying slightly," | | 2 | "Then she saw it." | | 3 | "Then, slowly, it lifted its" | | 4 | "Then the ground gave way" | | 5 | "Just the Grove, just the" |
| | ratio | 0.054 | |
| 93.87% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d come at dusk, when" | | 1 | "She’d told herself it was" | | 2 | "She flexed her fingers, checking" | | 3 | "She ran her fingers over" | | 4 | "It was supposed to be" | | 5 | "She turned slowly, her pulse" | | 6 | "It’s just the wind.*" | | 7 | "She exhaled, forcing herself to" | | 8 | "Her breath fogged in front" | | 9 | "She should turn back." | | 10 | "She should run." | | 11 | "Its face—if it could be" | | 12 | "It tilted its head, and" | | 13 | "*It’s watching me.*" | | 14 | "It didn’t need to." | | 15 | "Its presence was a physical" | | 16 | "She stumbled, but forced herself" | | 17 | "It was taller than she’d" | | 18 | "She turned and bolted, her" | | 19 | "She didn’t look back." |
| | ratio | 0.315 | |
| 45.59% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 92 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the Grove" | | 1 | "Aurora—Rory, if anyone asked—pulled her" | | 2 | "She’d come at dusk, when" | | 3 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 4 | "She’d told herself it was" | | 5 | "The pendant had pulsed warm" | | 6 | "The first wrongness was the" | | 7 | "Rory’s boots crunched over dead" | | 8 | "She flexed her fingers, checking" | | 9 | "The warmth had faded, but" | | 10 | "*This is where you’re supposed" | | 11 | "The standing stones marked the" | | 12 | "She ran her fingers over" | | 13 | "The Grove wasn’t supposed to" | | 14 | "It was supposed to be" | | 15 | "A twig snapped." | | 16 | "The sound had come from" | | 17 | "She turned slowly, her pulse" | | 18 | "It’s just the wind.*" | | 19 | "She exhaled, forcing herself to" |
| | ratio | 0.829 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 59.80% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed ahead, their gnarled oaks whispering against the wind that didn’t exist outside this place." | | 1 | "The pendant’s glow pulsed again, brighter this time, as if answering some unspoken question." | | 2 | "Its presence was a physical weight, pressing down on her chest, making it hard to breathe." | | 3 | "It was taller than she’d realized, its limbs bending in ways that made her stomach clench." | | 4 | "She was falling again, but this time it wasn’t the ground that gave way—it was her own body, dissolving into the Grove, into the shadows, into the thing that wa…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The figure stepped, its shadow stretching unnaturally long" | | 1 | "The figure’s hand extended, its fingers long and delicate" | | 2 | "The figure’s hand hovered just, its touch a phantom brush against her skin" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.083 | | leniency | 0.167 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.083 | |