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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMXKCXR8RNBPD31PSC6V31
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Model:
Ministral 3B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
3.5s
Cost:
$0.000074
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Meta
AI
The Raven’s Nest hummed with the kind of quiet energy that only comes from people who’ve known better days and are still here, still drinking. The neon green sign above the door pulsed like a slow heartbeat, casting a sickly green glow over the dimly lit room. The walls
were lined
with old maps and black-and-white photographs—some of them faded, others still sharp enough to make the air thick with the scent of old ink and something else, something sharper, like burnt coffee and the faint metallic tang of old secrets. Aurora Carter—Rory, as she
was called
back then—sat at the bar, her fingers tracing the rim of her pint glass. She wasn’t the same girl who used to come here, the one who’d laugh too loud, who’d spill her beer on Silas’s counter and demand he wipe it off with his sleeve. Now, she moved with a quiet precision, her black hair still straight but now streaked with the faintest silver at the temples, her bright blue eyes sharp beneath the
weight
of years spent looking over her shoulder. She had the same scar on her left wrist, a small crescent from a childhood accident, but it looked different now, like a reminder of a life that had once been hers to shape. Silas Blackwood—Si, as he preferred—was leaning against the counter, his hands clasped behind his back, his grey-streaked auburn hair catching the dim light. He had a slight limp, a habit from his old days in the service, but it was subtle, almost imperceptible now. The silver signet ring on his right hand gleamed faintly, a relic of a time when he’d been someone else’s problem. He didn’t look up as Rory slid onto the stool beside him, but his voice was low, measured, as it always was. “You look different,” he said. Rory didn’t flinch. She took a sip of her beer, the cool liquid burning just enough to make her
think
. “You look the same.” “Same?” Silas exhaled through his nose, a sound that was almost a laugh. “You’ve been running for years, Rory. Not just from Evan, but from yourself.” She set her glass down with a deliberate clink. “I don’t run anymore.” “You don’t have to.” His voice was quiet, but it carried the
weight
of a man who’d seen too much. “You could’ve stayed in Cardiff. You could’ve finished your degree. You could’ve—” “You don’t know what I could’ve done,” Rory cut in, her fingers tightening around the glass. “And you don’t know what I did.” Silas didn’t answer that. Instead, he turned his head
slightly
, as if studying her, and the bar
seemed to
hold its breath. The air between them was thick with the kind of tension that didn’t need words to speak. The photographs on the wall—some of them of Rory, younger, laughing, others of Silas, older, more serious—flashed in her mind like old film strips. She remembered the way he’d used to tell stories, how he’d make you believe in the impossible just by looking at him. But now, he was just another face in the crowd, another man who’d seen too much. “You’re working at Golden Empress,” Silas said at last. Rory nodded. “Part-time. Delivery guy.” “Cheung’s place.” “Yeah.” Silas didn’t press. He knew the answer. He’d seen her work there before, the way she’d move through the kitchen like she belonged there, even if she didn’t. The way she’d smile at the staff, the way she’d take orders without argument. It was the same Rory, but different. She’d lost something, and it wasn’t just the man she’d left behind. “You’re still here,” Silas said. Rory shrugged. “I have to be.” “You could’ve gone anywhere.” “I’ve been everywhere.” Silas studied her for a long moment, his gaze flickering over the scar on her wrist, the way her fingers still
trembled
when she thought no one
was looking
. “You’re not the same girl who came in here looking for a fight,” he said at last. She didn’t deny it. “I’m not.” “But you’re still here.” She took another sip of her beer, the taste bitter and familiar. “I’m still here because I have to be.” Silas didn’t say anything else. He just watched her, his expression
unreadable
, and the bar
seemed to
hold its breath. The
weight
of the years between them pressed down, a silent question hanging in the air. Rory knew what he
was thinking
. She knew what she’d done. And for the first time in years, she didn’t have an answer. Outside, the city of London pulsed with life, but inside the Raven’s Nest, the past and the present collided in a quiet, burning silence.
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
66.6667%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
5
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"Rory cut in, her fingers tightening around the glass [around]"
87.3418%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
790
totalAiIsmAdverbs
1
found
0
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
highlights
0
"slightly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
36.7089%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
790
totalAiIsms
5
found
0
word
"trembled"
count
1
1
word
"unreadable"
count
1
2
word
"weight"
count
3
highlights
0
"trembled"
1
"unreadable"
2
"weight"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
45
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
2
narrationSentences
45
filterMatches
0
"think"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
59
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
25
mean
31.2
std
34.86
cv
1.117
sampleLengths
0
91
1
123
2
87
3
5
4
24
5
26
6
13
7
32
8
23
9
101
10
9
11
5
12
2
13
1
14
61
15
5
16
6
17
4
18
3
19
46
20
6
21
4
22
20
23
59
24
24
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
45
matches
0
"were lined"
1
"was called"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
2
totalVerbs
110
matches
0
"was looking"
1
"was thinking"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
683
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
25
adverbRatio
0.036603221083455345
lyAdverbCount
5
lyAdverbRatio
0.007320644216691069
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
59
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
59
mean
13.22
std
9.94
cv
0.752
sampleLengths
0
25
1
22
2
44
3
20
4
32
5
37
6
34
7
23
8
21
9
21
10
22
11
5
12
3
13
17
14
4
15
13
16
13
17
9
18
4
19
20
20
12
21
16
22
7
23
4
24
18
25
17
26
24
27
22
28
16
29
9
30
2
31
3
32
2
33
1
34
3
35
4
36
21
37
14
38
7
39
12
40
5
41
2
42
4
43
4
44
3
45
29
46
17
47
4
48
2
49
4
40.6780%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
6
diversityRatio
0.3050847457627119
totalSentences
59
uniqueOpeners
18
100.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
5
fancyCount
1
fancyTags
0
"Rory cut in, her fingers tightening around the glass (tighten around)"
90.0821%