| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 85.78% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1055 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1055 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "reminder" | | 1 | "throb" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "quickened" | | 7 | "flickered" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "pulsed" | | 10 | "could feel" | | 11 | "stomach" | | 12 | "trembled" | | 13 | "shattered" | | 14 | "searing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 117 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 117 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 119 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 15 | | markdownWords | 28 | | totalWords | 1047 | | ratio | 0.027 | | matches | | 0 | "\"Find the grove. Trust the stone.\"" | | 1 | "wrong" | | 2 | "The grove." | | 3 | "This isn’t right." | | 4 | "old" | | 5 | "wanted" | | 6 | "inside" | | 7 | "flowed" | | 8 | "\"You shouldn’t have come.\"" | | 9 | "\"You’re already here.\"" | | 10 | "knew" | | 11 | "needed" | | 12 | "hungry" | | 13 | "remembered" | | 14 | "wanted" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 82.30% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 1034 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.35 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 14 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Heartstone" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.823 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 65.25% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "quite match the shapes around her" | | 1 | "not quite human" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1047 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 31.73 | | std | 30.36 | | cv | 0.957 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 132 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 106 | | 3 | 44 | | 4 | 63 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 34 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 54 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 58 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 35 | | 14 | 49 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 51 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 40 | | 22 | 63 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 33 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 58 | | 27 | 43 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 39 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 2 |
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| 90.27% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "was overgrown" | | 1 | "were made" | | 2 | "was gone" | | 3 | "being pulled" | | 4 | "was gone" |
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| 12.73% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 178 | | matches | | 0 | "was calling" | | 1 | "was burning" | | 2 | "were crumbling" | | 3 | "were wilting" | | 4 | "wasn’t leaving" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 119 | | ratio | 0.067 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter—Rory to herself, though no one called her that anymore—pulled her jacket tighter around her shoulders, the collar brushing the scar on her wrist, a faint reminder of the life she’d left behind." | | 1 | "The path between them was overgrown, the wildflowers here blooming in defiance of the season—pale bluebells and golden ragwort, their petals too bright, too *wrong*." | | 2 | "The air here was different—thicker, sweeter, like honey laced with something metallic." | | 3 | "Then—a whisper." | | 4 | "The flowers here were different—pale, almost translucent, their petals curling inward like fingers." | | 5 | "The pendant’s glow flared, casting her shadow across the stone, but her shadow was wrong—too tall, too elongated, its edges fraying like smoke." | | 6 | "The pendant’s glow filled the clearing, illuminating the wrongness of it all—the twisted trees, the pale flowers, the way the air itself seemed to twist and turn around her." | | 7 | "The figure moved closer, its form solidifying, its limbs too long, too slender, its face—" |
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| 88.69% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1042 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "different—thicker, sweeter, like" |
| | adverbCount | 48 | | adverbRatio | 0.046065259117082535 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005758157389635317 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 119 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 119 | | mean | 8.8 | | std | 7.44 | | cv | 0.846 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 34 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 31 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 35 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 28.99% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 25 | | diversityRatio | 0.19327731092436976 | | totalSentences | 119 | | uniqueOpeners | 23 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 80.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "She didn’t know why she’d" | | 1 | "She’d followed the directions anyway." | | 2 | "She shouldn’t have come." | | 3 | "She knew that." | | 4 | "She shouldn’t have come." | | 5 | "She stepped forward, her boots" | | 6 | "Their branches stretched too high," | | 7 | "She turned slowly, her fingers" | | 8 | "It slithered through the air," | | 9 | "She wasn’t alone." | | 10 | "She took another step forward," | | 11 | "She could feel it now," | | 12 | "She shouldn’t have come." | | 13 | "Its limbs were wrong, too" | | 14 | "It didn’t walk." | | 15 | "It *flowed*, its movements liquid" | | 16 | "She turned, but it was" | | 17 | "She was alone again." | | 18 | "She could feel it in" | | 19 | "She shouldn’t have come." |
| | ratio | 0.35 | |
| 25.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 87 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter—Rory to herself, though" | | 2 | "The pendant at her throat," | | 3 | "She didn’t know why she’d" | | 4 | "The benefactor who’d given it" | | 5 | "That was it" | | 6 | "She’d followed the directions anyway." | | 7 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 8 | "The path between them was" | | 9 | "Rory’s breath came out in" | | 10 | "She shouldn’t have come." | | 11 | "She knew that." | | 12 | "*The grove.* And the pendant" | | 13 | "The last of the streetlights" | | 14 | "The grove opened up ahead," | | 15 | "The air here was different—thicker," | | 16 | "Rory’s pulse quickened." | | 17 | "She shouldn’t have come." | | 18 | "She stepped forward, her boots" | | 19 | "The pendant’s glow flickered, brighter" |
| | ratio | 0.87 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The benefactor who’d given it to her in a back alley behind a pub in Cardiff had been vague, pressing a folded note into her palm before vanishing into the nigh…" | | 1 | "The standing stones loomed ahead, their gnarled oaks twisting upward like skeletal fingers, their bark blackened as if scorched by something unseen." | | 2 | "*The grove.* And the pendant had led her here, its warmth guiding her through the park’s familiar streets, turning left when she expected right, pulling her dee…" | | 3 | "The pendant’s glow flickered, brighter now, casting long shadows that didn’t quite match the shapes around her." | | 4 | "It *flowed*, its movements liquid and smooth, as if it were made of smoke given form." | | 5 | "The pendant’s glow flared, casting her shadow across the stone, but her shadow was wrong—too tall, too elongated, its edges fraying like smoke." | | 6 | "But the pendant was burning now, its warmth seeping into her veins, into her soul." | | 7 | "The pendant pulsed once more, its glow intensifying, casting long shadows that stretched and twisted, reaching for her." | | 8 | "The standing stones were crumbling, their bark peeling away like dead skin." | | 9 | "The flowers were wilting, their petals curling inward, their colors fading." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |