Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMXYE17QTW5DYVDFQTJ6W5

Run Details

Duration:
21.5s
Cost:
$0.008008

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The night air was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older, something wild. Rory adjusted the strap of her messenger bag, the Heartstone Pendant tucked safely beneath her shirt, its faint warmth a steady pulse against her skin. She had come to the Fae Grove for answers—not that she expected them to be kind. The standing stones loomed ahead, their gnarled oaks black against the indigo sky. She had only been here once before, years ago, when Eva had dragged her along on one of her "adventures." Back then, the grove had been bathed in golden afternoon light, the wildflowers swaying in a breeze that carried the laughter of unseen things. Now, the air was still. Too still. Rory hesitated at the boundary, her fingers brushing the rough bark of the nearest stone. The moment she stepped past it, the world seemed to exhale. The temperature dropped, and the distant hum of London traffic faded into silence. She was alone. Or so she thought. The clearing stretched before her, a perfect circle of moonlit grass ringed by ancient trees. At its center stood a single silver birch, its bark pale as bone. That was where she needed to go. That was where the answers waited. She took a step forward, and the grass beneath her boots crunched—too loud, too sharp. The sound echoed, though the grove should have swallowed it whole. Her pulse quickened. She told herself it was just the cold, just the strangeness of the place. But the Heartstone was warming against her chest, its crimson glow seeping through the fabric of her shirt. Something moved at the edge of her vision. Rory turned, her breath shallow. Nothing. Just the trees, their branches twisting like skeletal fingers against the sky. She forced herself to keep walking, her boots sinking slightly into the damp earth. The birch tree drew closer, its silver bark almost luminous in the moonlight. Then she heard it—a whisper. Not words. Not quite. A sound like wind through dead leaves, though the air was still. It came from behind her. She spun, her heart hammering, but there was only the grove, the stones, the endless dark. "Hello?" Her voice sounded small, swallowed by the night. The whisper came again, closer this time. A rustle of fabric. A breath that wasn’t hers. Rory’s fingers tightened around the strap of her bag. She had come here for a reason. She wouldn’t run. Not yet. She reached the birch tree and pressed her palm against its bark. The wood was cold, unnaturally smooth. The Heartstone flared hot against her skin, its glow pulsing in time with her racing heart. Then the ground beneath her feet trembled. Not an earthquake. Not the wind. Something was moving beneath the earth, something vast and slow and hungry. The trees groaned, their roots shifting in the soil. Rory stumbled back, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps. The whispers were louder now, circling her like crows. She could feel them—cold fingers brushing the nape of her neck, the small of her back. She whirled, but there was nothing. Only the grove, the stones, the endless dark. And then, from the shadows between the trees, a pair of eyes opened. Not animal. Not human. Just two pale, glowing orbs, staring at her from the black. Rory’s blood turned to ice. The eyes blinked. And then they were gone. She didn’t wait to see if they would return. She ran. The standing stones loomed ahead, the boundary between the grove and the real world. She could see the faint glow of Richmond Park beyond them, the distant hum of traffic, the promise of safety. She lunged for the nearest stone, her fingers scraping against the bark— —and something grabbed her ankle. She screamed, kicking wildly, but the grip was iron. She looked down. The earth itself had risen up, roots and vines twisting around her leg, pulling her back into the grove. The whispers erupted into laughter, high and thin and wrong. The trees bent toward her, their branches reaching like arms. Rory clawed at the ground, her nails tearing as she fought to drag herself free. The Heartstone burned against her chest, its glow now a searing light. She ripped it from beneath her shirt and held it up, and for a moment, the grove recoiled. The roots loosened. She tore her leg free and scrambled to her feet, sprinting for the stones. The boundary was just ahead. She could make it. She had to make it. Behind her, the grove screamed. She didn’t look back. She threw herself past the standing stones, tumbling onto the damp grass of Richmond Park. The moment she crossed the boundary, the night fell silent. The air warmed. The distant hum of traffic returned. Rory lay there, gasping, her heart pounding in her ears. The Heartstone was cold against her skin, its glow extinguished. She had gotten what she came for. But the grove wasn’t done with her yet.
total_cost0.008008

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She had only [only]"
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.5
94.04% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount839
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
4.65% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount839
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"loomed"
count2
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"perfect"
count1
5
word"echoed"
count1
6
word"quickened"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count2
8
word"racing"
count1
9
word"trembled"
count1
10
word"could feel"
count1
11
word"searing"
count1
12
word"pounding"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"pulse"
2"loomed"
3"silence"
4"perfect"
5"echoed"
6"quickened"
7"whisper"
8"racing"
9"trembled"
10"could feel"
11"searing"
12"pounding"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences90
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences90
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords835
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount833
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.96
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone5
Pendant1
Fae1
Grove1
Eva1
London1
Richmond2
Park2
Rory8
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Pendant"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"London"
3"Richmond"
4"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount835
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean24.56
std18.7
cv0.762
sampleLengths
057
164
246
341
461
58
645
75
837
99
1016
1121
1234
137
1437
1539
1613
1715
185
193
205
2111
2246
235
2412
2539
2645
273
2828
295
3038
3120
327
338
97.47% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences90
matches
0"been bathed"
1"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs130
matches
0"was warming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences90
ratio0.067
matches
0"She had come to the Fae Grove for answers—not that she expected them to be kind."
1"She took a step forward, and the grass beneath her boots crunched—too loud, too sharp."
2"Then she heard it—a whisper."
3"She could feel them—cold fingers brushing the nape of her neck, the small of her back."
4"She lunged for the nearest stone, her fingers scraping against the bark—"
5"—and something grabbed her ankle."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount837
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.035842293906810034
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.008363201911589008
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean9.28
std6.32
cv0.682
sampleLengths
016
125
216
313
444
55
62
715
811
913
103
114
1215
1313
147
156
1615
1711
183
1914
2018
218
225
231
2412
2514
2613
275
282
292
3012
315
3216
339
347
354
365
379
387
393
402
4112
426
4316
447
453
463
4712
489
4910
30.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.23333333333333334
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners21
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences82
matches
0"Just the trees, their branches"
1"Then she heard it—a whisper."
2"Then the ground beneath her"
3"Only the grove, the stones,"
4"Just two pale, glowing orbs,"
ratio0.061
88.29% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences82
matches
0"She had come to the"
1"She had only been here"
2"She was alone."
3"She took a step forward,"
4"Her pulse quickened."
5"She told herself it was"
6"She forced herself to keep"
7"It came from behind her."
8"She spun, her heart hammering,"
9"Her voice sounded small, swallowed"
10"She had come here for"
11"She wouldn’t run."
12"She reached the birch tree"
13"She could feel them—cold fingers"
14"She whirled, but there was"
15"She didn’t wait to see"
16"She could see the faint"
17"She lunged for the nearest"
18"She screamed, kicking wildly, but"
19"She looked down."
ratio0.329
57.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences82
matches
0"The night air was thick"
1"Rory adjusted the strap of"
2"She had come to the"
3"The standing stones loomed ahead,"
4"She had only been here"
5"Rory hesitated at the boundary,"
6"The moment she stepped past"
7"The temperature dropped, and the"
8"She was alone."
9"The clearing stretched before her,"
10"That was where she needed"
11"That was where the answers"
12"She took a step forward,"
13"The sound echoed, though the"
14"Her pulse quickened."
15"She told herself it was"
16"Something moved at the edge"
17"Rory turned, her breath shallow."
18"She forced herself to keep"
19"The birch tree drew closer,"
ratio0.805
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences82
matches
0"Now, the air was still."
1"—and something grabbed her ankle."
ratio0.024
69.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She forced herself to keep walking, her boots sinking slightly into the damp earth."
1"The Heartstone flared hot against her skin, its glow pulsing in time with her racing heart."
2"The earth itself had risen up, roots and vines twisting around her leg, pulling her back into the grove."
3"Rory lay there, gasping, her heart pounding in her ears."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.7202%