Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMMZJJCWE81C7B7G5MRQ9JA

Run Details

Duration:
38.2s
Cost:
$0.013286

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest hummed with the low murmur of late-night patrons, the kind of place where the air smelled of aged whiskey and the faint metallic tang of old coins left too long in pockets. The green neon sign outside bled a sickly glow through the rain-streaked windows, casting long, wavering shadows across the scuffed wooden floor. Rory leaned against the bar, her fingers tracing the rim of a half-empty glass of gin, the ice long melted into something watery and weak. She hadn’t meant to stay this long. Just a quick drink after her shift at the Golden Empress, a moment to breathe before heading upstairs to her flat. But the Nest had a way of holding onto people, like a spider’s silk—soft at first, then unshakable. The door creaked open, letting in a gust of damp London air and the distant wail of a police siren. Rory didn’t look up. She was too busy watching the way the gin caught the light, turning her glass into a prism of pale gold. Then the door swung shut, and the bar’s ambient noise dipped, just for a second, like the room itself had taken a breath. “Well. Fuck me sideways.” The voice was deeper than she remembered, rougher, like gravel underfoot. Rory’s fingers stilled. She knew that voice. Knew it the way she knew the scar on her wrist—the one from the night she’d smashed a glass in her palm after Evan had called her stupid for the third time that week. The one she’d pressed into her skin just to feel something sharper than his words. She turned her head. Eva stood just inside the door, shaking rain from her dark curls, her coat dripping onto the floorboards. But it wasn’t the rain that made Rory’s chest tighten. It was the way Eva held herself—shoulders squared, chin lifted, like she was bracing for a fight. The last time Rory had seen her, Eva had been all soft edges and nervous laughter, the kind of girl who still believed in grand gestures and happy endings. Now, her eyes were sharp, her mouth set in a line that didn’t quite manage to be a smile. “Rory Carter,” Eva said, stepping forward. “Or should I say *Malphora*?” The name hit like a punch to the sternum. Rory’s breath came short. No one had called her that in years. Not since the last time she and Eva had been drunk on cheap wine in Eva’s cramped student flat, scribbling fake identities on napkins and laughing like it was all a game. *Malphora*. The name they’d given her when they’d played at being spies, back when the world had still felt full of possibilities. Eva slid onto the stool beside her, close enough that Rory could smell the rain on her skin, the faint citrus of her perfume. “You look like you’ve seen a ghost.” Rory forced a laugh, but it came out brittle. “Just surprised. It’s been a while.” “Five years.” Eva’s fingers drummed against the bar. “Give or take.” The bartender—a wiry man with a tattoo of a raven in flight across his forearm—glanced their way. Rory shook her head. She didn’t need another drink. She needed to not feel like the floor was tilting beneath her. Eva ordered a whiskey, neat. When it arrived, she downed half of it in one swallow. “So. London, huh? I heard you bailed on Cardiff. On *him*.” Rory’s grip tightened around her glass. She didn’t have to ask who *him* was. “Yeah. Well. Some things aren’t worth sticking around for.” Eva’s laugh was a dry, humorless thing. “Funny. That’s exactly what I said when I left Bristol.” Silence settled between them, thick as the smoke that curled from the ashtray on the bar. Rory studied Eva’s profile—the new hardness in her jaw, the way her lashes cast shadows under her eyes. She looked older. Not just in years, but in the way people did when they’d learned how to armor themselves against the world. “What happened to you?” Rory asked, before she could stop herself. Eva’s fingers stilled around her glass. For a second, Rory thought she wouldn’t answer. Then Eva exhaled, long and slow. “Life, I guess. Turns out being a starry-eyed journalism grad doesn’t pay the bills. So I got a job. A real one.” “Doing what?” Eva’s smile was razor-thin. “You know. The usual. Tracking down people who don’t want to be found. Digging up secrets.” She swirled the whiskey in her glass. “I work for a private firm now. High-end stuff. Corporate espionage, mostly.” Rory’s stomach twisted. “You’re a spy.” “No.” Eva’s voice was sharp. “I’m a *researcher*. There’s a difference.” “Is there?” Eva didn’t answer. Instead, she reached into her coat and pulled out a folded piece of paper. She slid it across the bar toward Rory. “I was going to look you up. Send this. But then I walked in here and—” She gestured vaguely between them. “Well. Here we are.” Rory unfolded the paper. It was a job listing. *Freelance investigator needed. Discreet, resourceful, with a background in research or intelligence. High pay, high risk.* At the bottom, a phone number and an email address. She looked up. “What is this?” “An opportunity,” Eva said. “You always were good at thinking on your feet. Better than I ever was.” Rory’s throat went dry. She thought of the last five years—the deliveries she made for Yu-Fei, the nights spent in her flat above the bar, the way she’d told herself she was happy with quiet, with safe. But safe had a way of feeling like stagnation, and Rory had never been good at standing still. “Why me?” she asked. Eva’s gaze flickered toward the back of the bar, where a bookshelf stood against the wall. Rory knew what was behind it—the hidden room, the one Silas used for meetings that weren’t meant to be seen. Eva’s voice dropped. “Because I know you, Rory. And I know you’re still the same girl who used to stay up all night planning heists we’d never pull off. The one who always had a backup plan. A *third* backup plan.” She leaned in. “The world’s gotten messier since then. People like us? We’re the ones who clean it up.” Rory’s pulse hammered in her ears. She thought of Silas, of the way he’d taken her in when she’d shown up on his doorstep with nothing but a duffel bag and a bruise blooming on her cheek. He’d given her a job, a place to stay, a way to disappear. But disappearing had never been the same as living. Eva reached out, her fingers brushing Rory’s wrist—the one with the scar. “I’m not the only one who’s changed, am I?” Rory pulled her arm back. “People grow up.” “No,” Eva said softly. “Some of us just learn how to hide better.” The bar’s door opened again, and this time, Silas stepped through. He moved with the quiet precision of a man who’d spent a lifetime being watched, his limp barely noticeable unless you knew to look for it. His hazel eyes flicked between them, sharp and assessing. “Ladies,” he said, his voice a low rumble. “Everything alright?” Rory forced a smile. “Just catching up with an old friend.” Silas’ gaze lingered on Eva for a beat too long. Then he nodded, once, and moved behind the bar. “Don’t let me interrupt.” Eva drained the last of her whiskey. “I should go. Early meeting tomorrow.” She stood, then hesitated. “Think about the job, Rory. You’re not the only one who’s been looking for a way out.” Rory didn’t answer. She watched Eva walk to the door, her coat swirling around her like a cape. The bell above the door jingled as she stepped out into the rain. Silas slid a fresh gin across the bar. “You want to tell me what that was about?” Rory picked up the glass. The ice clinked against the sides. “Not particularly.” Silas studied her for a long moment. Then he sighed, the sound of a man who’d learned long ago not to push when he wouldn’t like the answers. “Fair enough.” He turned away, but not before Rory caught the flicker of something in his eyes—concern, maybe, or the ghost of an old warning. The paper Eva had left sat on the bar between them, its edges curling slightly from the damp. Rory reached out and tucked it into her pocket. She wasn’t the same girl she’d been five years ago. But maybe that was the problem. Maybe she was exactly the same—just better at pretending she wasn’t.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
77.7778% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva said softly [softly]"
86.2732% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1457
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
65.6829% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1457
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"flicker"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"wavering"
count1
4
word"silk"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"flicker"
2"flicked"
3"wavering"
4"silk"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences101
matches
0"was happy"
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences101
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"manage to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences128
matches
0"knew that voice"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean31.98
std27.98
cv0.875
sampleLengths
0128
168
24
367
44
593
611
775
831
915
1011
1138
1227
1323
1417
1557
1611
1742
182
1939
206
2111
222
2350
2435
256
2618
2755
284
2996
3059
3121
328
3313
3446
3510
3611
3723
3834
3931
4017
4113
4253
4327
4427
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences101
matches
0"being watched"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs189
matches
0"was bracing"
1"was tilting"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1161
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.03359173126614987
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.00516795865633075
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences128
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences128
mean11.24
std8.33
cv0.741
sampleLengths
035
122
225
37
421
518
620
74
821
923
104
1111
123
134
1434
1515
164
1718
1810
1917
2029
2119
226
235
249
254
268
2732
281
2921
3024
317
329
336
348
353
3617
374
385
3912
405
4111
4211
436
448
459
467
4710
4816
4918
59.6354% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.3671875
totalSentences128
uniqueOpeners47
91.6667% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Eva said, stepping forward (say, step)"
1"Eva said softly (say softly)"
93.0021%