| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 79.67% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 738 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sharply" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 738 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "stomach" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "scanning" | | 8 | "pounding" | | 9 | "beacon" | | 10 | "loomed" | | 11 | "lurch" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 57 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 47 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 8 | | totalWords | 733 | | ratio | 0.011 | | matches | | 0 | "This isn’t happening," | | 1 | "wrong" | | 2 | "You’re not alone." | | 3 | "move" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.43% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 16 | | wordCount | 733 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.09 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 4 | | English | 1 | | Aurora | 8 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.954 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 21.79% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "quite bark at all, more like the raised veins of something far older" | | 1 | "quite English, not quite anything" | | 2 | "not quite anything" |
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| 63.57% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.364 | | wordCount | 733 | | matches | | 0 | "not the rustle of leaves, but a murmur" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 14 | | mean | 52.36 | | std | 28.2 | | cv | 0.539 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 113 | | 1 | 80 | | 2 | 58 | | 3 | 65 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 55 | | 6 | 74 | | 7 | 53 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 63 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 36 | | 12 | 59 | | 13 | 47 |
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| 99.11% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 124 | | matches | | 0 | "was holding" | | 1 | "was trying" | | 2 | "was shifting" | | 3 | "was drowning" | | 4 | "was rising" | | 5 | "were closing" | | 6 | "was slipping" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 57 | | ratio | 0.07 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the grove was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something that clung to the trees like a second skin, warm and familiar in a way that made her stomach twist." | | 1 | "The trees here were different—taller, their bark etched with patterns that weren’t quite bark at all, more like the raised veins of something far older." | | 2 | "A sound—a wet, dragging noise—cut through the silence." | | 3 | "She could see them now, just beyond the edge of her vision—shadows, moving in the dark, too many to count, too many to be real." |
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| 97.06% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 738 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 32 | | adverbRatio | 0.04336043360433604 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005420054200542005 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 57 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 57 | | mean | 12.86 | | std | 9.66 | | cv | 0.751 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 36 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 32.46% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.21052631578947367 | | totalSentences | 57 | | uniqueOpeners | 12 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 73.85% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come here for" | | 1 | "She exhaled sharply, the breath" | | 2 | "It pulsed faintly, warm against" | | 3 | "She moved deeper, her boots" | | 4 | "It came again, closer this" | | 5 | "Her pulse hammered in her" | | 6 | "She turned slowly, scanning the" | | 7 | "Her breath hitched." | | 8 | "It was heavier." | | 9 | "She pressed her back against" | | 10 | "She needed to leave." | | 11 | "She could see them now," | | 12 | "She stumbled back, her breath" | | 13 | "She stumbled, her foot catching" | | 14 | "It was *wrong*, and she" | | 15 | "*You’re not alone.*" | | 16 | "She was drowning, and the" | | 17 | "She couldn’t breathe." | | 18 | "She couldn’t *move*." |
| | ratio | 0.365 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the grove" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter adjusted the strap" | | 2 | "The moon hung low, a" | | 3 | "She had come here for" | | 4 | "She exhaled sharply, the breath" | | 5 | "The trees here were different—taller," | | 6 | "The wind carried whispers, not" | | 7 | "Aurora’s fingers tightened around the" | | 8 | "It pulsed faintly, warm against" | | 9 | "She moved deeper, her boots" | | 10 | "The grove stretched before her," | | 11 | "The air grew colder, sharper," | | 12 | "A sound—a wet, dragging noise—cut" | | 13 | "It came again, closer this" | | 14 | "Her pulse hammered in her" | | 15 | "She turned slowly, scanning the" | | 16 | "Her breath hitched." | | 17 | "This wasn’t right." | | 18 | "The grove wasn’t supposed to" | | 19 | "A twig snapped." |
| | ratio | 0.962 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the grove was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something that clung to the trees like a second skin, warm and familiar in a way…" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter adjusted the strap of her backpack, her bright blue eyes flicking over the standing stones that lined the boundary of Richmond Park." | | 2 | "The trees here were different—taller, their bark etched with patterns that weren’t quite bark at all, more like the raised veins of something far older." | | 3 | "The whispers grew louder, closer, a chorus of voices just beyond hearing, murmuring in a language that wasn’t quite English, not quite anything." | | 4 | "The ground beneath her feet felt unstable, as if it was shifting beneath her." | | 5 | "She stumbled, her foot catching on a root, and she fell, landing hard on her knees." | | 6 | "The standing stones shifted, their ancient faces twisting into something else, something that made her stomach lurch." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |