| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.556 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 81.87% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1379 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "slowly" | | 4 | "gently" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 9.35% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1379 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "oppressive" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "stomach" | | 5 | "glistening" | | 6 | "throb" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "vibrated" | | 9 | "flicker" | | 10 | "searing" | | 11 | "pulsed" | | 12 | "whisper" | | 13 | "lurched" | | 14 | "shimmered" | | 15 | "could feel" | | 16 | "unraveling" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 133 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 133 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 137 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 18 | | markdownWords | 53 | | totalWords | 1370 | | ratio | 0.039 | | matches | | 0 | "Get in, get the damn thing, get out." | | 1 | "wrong" | | 2 | "wet" | | 3 | "feeling" | | 4 | "unnatural" | | 5 | "\"Little thief,\"" | | 6 | "\"Little thief with the stolen heart.\"" | | 7 | "\"Given. Taken. What is the difference?\"" | | 8 | "\"The heart calls. The heart knows. The heart" | | 9 | "shifted" | | 10 | "\"Give it back,\"" | | 11 | "\"Give it back, and we will let you leave.\"" | | 12 | "pulsing" | | 13 | "shuddered" | | 14 | "human" | | 15 | "unraveling" | | 16 | "teeth" | | 17 | "human" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 1324 | | uniqueNames | 3 | | maxNameDensity | 1.59 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.707 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 93.82% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like dew but felt like something t" | | 1 | "felt like something thicker when she br" | | 2 | "looked like strips of leather" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.73 | | wordCount | 1370 | | matches | | 0 | "not the wild, overgrown clearing she remembered, but something *wrong*" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 137 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 42 | | mean | 32.62 | | std | 28.01 | | cv | 0.859 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 68 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 90 | | 3 | 65 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 102 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 69 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 45 | | 12 | 36 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 57 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 42 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 72 | | 19 | 46 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 33 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 43 | | 25 | 76 | | 26 | 29 | | 27 | 50 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 61 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 43 | | 33 | 55 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 64 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 42 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 40 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 2 |
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| 94.71% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "been plucked" | | 1 | "being swallowed" | | 2 | "was gone" | | 3 | "was gone" |
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| 27.59% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 6 | | totalVerbs | 232 | | matches | | 0 | "was burning" | | 1 | "was scalding" | | 2 | "was pushing" | | 3 | "were creeping" | | 4 | "was *unraveling" | | 5 | "was fading" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 137 | | ratio | 0.058 | | matches | | 0 | "Then her boots hit soft earth, and the grove unfolded around her—not the wild, overgrown clearing she remembered, but something *wrong*." | | 1 | "The clearing opened up ahead, and that’s when she saw it—the altar." | | 2 | "Then—movement." | | 3 | "Its skin—if it was skin—was the color of birch bark, smooth and pale, stretched too tight over a frame that didn’t seem to have bones." | | 4 | "*\"Given. Taken. What is the difference?\"* It stretched out a hand—too many fingers, too long—and the air between them shimmered, warping like heat off pavement." | | 5 | "Its breath—if it had breath—smelled of rotting flowers and wet stone." | | 6 | "The thing screamed again, and this time, the sound was *human*—a raw, guttural wail of pain." | | 7 | "The slit of a mouth gaped wide, and for a terrible second, Rory thought she saw *teeth*—rows of them, needle-thin and glistening." |
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| 86.40% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1335 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "lay heavy against Rory’s" |
| | adverbCount | 65 | | adverbRatio | 0.04868913857677903 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010486891385767791 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 137 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 137 | | mean | 10 | | std | 6.93 | | cv | 0.693 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 34 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 31 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 36.13% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 19 | | diversityRatio | 0.24817518248175183 | | totalSentences | 137 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "Then her boots hit soft" | | 1 | "Just the trees, their branches" | | 2 | "Just a smooth expanse where" | | 3 | "Then it spoke." | | 4 | "Then the thing let out" | | 5 | "Then the smoke rushed in," |
| | ratio | 0.051 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 33 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "She shouldn’t have come." | | 2 | "Her breath fogged in front" | | 3 | "She wasn’t sure which was" | | 4 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 5 | "It hung low and swollen," | | 6 | "It was burning now, a" | | 7 | "She swallowed hard and forced" | | 8 | "It hadn’t been there before." | | 9 | "She was sure of it." | | 10 | "She didn’t touch it." | | 11 | "She took a step back," | | 12 | "It was scalding now, the" | | 13 | "She gritted her teeth and" | | 14 | "It wasn’t a human sound." | | 15 | "It was the creak of" | | 16 | "She turned slowly, the pendant" | | 17 | "Its limbs were long and" | | 18 | "Its skin—if it was skin—was" | | 19 | "It tilted its head, and" |
| | ratio | 0.28 | |
| 40.51% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 99 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant lay heavy against" | | 1 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "The night air was thick" | | 3 | "She shouldn’t have come." | | 4 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 5 | "The last time she’d been" | | 6 | "Her breath fogged in front" | | 7 | "Rory exhaled sharply through her" | | 8 | "The pendant had led her" | | 9 | "Whatever was on the other" | | 10 | "She wasn’t sure which was" | | 11 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 12 | "The world tilted." | | 13 | "The trees were too tall," | | 14 | "The wildflowers that should have" | | 15 | "It hung low and swollen," | | 16 | "Rory’s fingers twitched toward the" | | 17 | "It was burning now, a" | | 18 | "She swallowed hard and forced" | | 19 | "The clearing opened up ahead," |
| | ratio | 0.839 | |
| 42.37% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, the stones stood silent," |
| | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 86.17% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The last time she’d been here, the grove had been alive with golden light, the air humming with the kind of magic that made her skin prickle in a way that wasn’…" | | 1 | "The wildflowers that should have carpeted the ground were there, but their petals were too bright, too *wet*, glistening under a moon that hadn’t been in the sk…" | | 2 | "It was the creak of branches, the whisper of wind through dead leaves, the wet click of a throat that wasn’t meant to form words." | | 3 | "Its skin—if it was skin—was the color of birch bark, smooth and pale, stretched too tight over a frame that didn’t seem to have bones." | | 4 | "Rory stumbled back, the roots retreating, slithering back into the earth as if burned." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "it whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she snarled (snarl)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.444 | | leniency | 0.889 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.444 | |