| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 85.83% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1411 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 18.50% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1411 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "scanning" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "pulsed" | | 7 | "trembled" | | 8 | "flicker" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "pounding" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "flicker of emotion" | | count | 2 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 147 | | matches | | 0 | "a flicker of hope" | | 1 | "a flicker of hope" |
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| 16.52% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 13 | | narrationSentences | 147 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 147 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1402 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.06% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 1378 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.38 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 19 | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 7 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Heartstone" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.811 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 95.65% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 92 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "something like crushed petals and iron, befo" | | 1 | "felt like it was watching her" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.713 | | wordCount | 1402 | | matches | | 0 | "not words, but the sound of voices, low" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 147 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 56 | | mean | 25.04 | | std | 18.52 | | cv | 0.74 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 84 | | 1 | 64 | | 2 | 68 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 67 | | 7 | 31 | | 8 | 37 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 43 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 46 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 27 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 30 | | 20 | 34 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 35 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 30 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 32 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 49 | | 32 | 33 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 26 | | 35 | 34 | | 36 | 29 | | 37 | 23 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 31 | | 40 | 28 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 35 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 44 | | 47 | 32 | | 48 | 50 | | 49 | 27 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 147 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 228 | | matches | | 0 | "was stepping" | | 1 | "was watching" | | 2 | "was following" | | 3 | "were closing" | | 4 | "was rising" | | 5 | "was still waiting" | | 6 | "was waiting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 147 | | ratio | 0.054 | | matches | | 0 | "The world outside the grove—London’s neon glow, the distant hum of traffic—felt distant, like a dream she’d woken from too soon." | | 1 | "The wind carried something—whispers, not words, but the sound of voices, low and distant, as if from a place just beyond hearing." | | 2 | "The rustle came again—closer this time." | | 3 | "The light from the moon caught the edge of a figure standing just beyond the clearing—a shape, tall and gaunt, wrapped in tattered robes that moved as if made of living shadows." | | 4 | "But the air around it—it seemed to ripple, like water disturbed by an unseen hand." | | 5 | "The ground beneath her feet trembled one last time, and then—nothing." | | 6 | "Of the way the trees had moved, of the way the air had seemed to shift, of the way she had felt—alone, but not alone." | | 7 | "The street below was alive with movement—people walking, laughing, going about their business." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1165 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 41 | | adverbRatio | 0.0351931330472103 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006008583690987125 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 147 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 147 | | mean | 9.54 | | std | 6.87 | | cv | 0.72 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 31 | | 1 | 33 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 33 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 32 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 30.95% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 28 | | diversityRatio | 0.12244897959183673 | | totalSentences | 147 | | uniqueOpeners | 18 | |
| 47.96% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 139 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she heard it." | | 1 | "Then, from the darkness beyond" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 37 | | totalSentences | 139 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come here for" | | 1 | "She slowed, her boots sinking" | | 2 | "She turned her head slowly," | | 3 | "Her breath came in shallow" | | 4 | "She stepped forward, her boots" | | 5 | "She exhaled slowly, forcing herself" | | 6 | "She had come here for" | | 7 | "She had to find it." | | 8 | "It didn’t turn toward her." | | 9 | "It didn’t speak." | | 10 | "She had to move." | | 11 | "She had to find out" | | 12 | "She took a step forward." | | 13 | "It came from the trees," | | 14 | "She had to get out." | | 15 | "She had to find the" | | 16 | "It didn’t speak." | | 17 | "She stumbled, her breath coming" | | 18 | "She had to keep moving." | | 19 | "She had to find the" |
| | ratio | 0.266 | |
| 96.69% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 101 | | totalSentences | 139 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "She had come here for" | | 2 | "She slowed, her boots sinking" | | 3 | "The trees here were taller" | | 4 | "The world outside the grove—London’s" | | 5 | "The trees here breathed." | | 6 | "Aurora adjusted the silver chain" | | 7 | "The moment she touched it," | | 8 | "The wind carried something—whispers, not" | | 9 | "She turned her head slowly," | | 10 | "Her breath came in shallow" | | 11 | "The standing stones loomed closer," | | 12 | "She stepped forward, her boots" | | 13 | "The rustle came again—closer this" | | 14 | "A twig snapping." | | 15 | "A small, wet sound, like" | | 16 | "Aurora’s pulse hammered in her" | | 17 | "She exhaled slowly, forcing herself" | | 18 | "The Heartstone pulsed against her" | | 19 | "She had come here for" |
| | ratio | 0.727 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 139 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 32.02% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The trees here were taller than any she’d seen before, their branches twisting in ways that made the shadows stretch too long, too deep." | | 1 | "The wind carried something—whispers, not words, but the sound of voices, low and distant, as if from a place just beyond hearing." | | 2 | "The light from the moon caught the edge of a figure standing just beyond the clearing—a shape, tall and gaunt, wrapped in tattered robes that moved as if made o…" | | 3 | "From something deeper, something that made the earth itself seem to shift beneath her." | | 4 | "The standing stones loomed closer, their ancient carvings glowing faintly now, as if drawn to the pendant’s light." | | 5 | "The ground beneath her feet trembled again, deeper this time, as if something vast and ancient was rising from the earth itself." | | 6 | "She stumbled forward, her boots sinking into the earth, the ground giving way beneath her." | | 7 | "The standing stones loomed closer, their ancient carvings glowing faintly now, as if drawn to the pendant’s light." | | 8 | "Aurora woke with a gasp, her breath coming in ragged bursts, her heart pounding in her chest." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |