| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 92.46% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1327 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1327 | | totalAiIsms | 32 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "vibrated" | | 3 | "loomed" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "flicker" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "could feel" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "searing" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 130 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 130 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 133 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 22 | | markdownWords | 63 | | totalWords | 1320 | | ratio | 0.048 | | matches | | 0 | "no" | | 1 | "Meet me at the Grove at midnight. Alone." | | 2 | "You shouldn’t be here." | | 3 | "anything" | | 4 | "You’re being ridiculous." | | 5 | "wrong" | | 6 | "What the hell are you doing here?" | | 7 | "around" | | 8 | "You shouldn’t have come." | | 9 | "You’re not supposed to be here." | | 10 | "wrong" | | 11 | "moved" | | 12 | "You don’t belong here." | | 13 | "You don’t belong here." | | 14 | "whispered" | | 15 | "You don’t belong here." | | 16 | "You don’t belong here." | | 17 | "moved" | | 18 | "unfolded" | | 19 | "whispered" | | 20 | "You don’t belong here." | | 21 | "laughed" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 99.81% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 18 | | wordCount | 1295 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 1 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 13 | | Thames | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Thames" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.998 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 6.32% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 87 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "smelled like iron and something older, som" | | 1 | "looked like they’d been carved from ice" | | 2 | "something like recognition in its hollow eye" | | 3 | "something like pity in its hollow eyes" | | 4 | "looked like they’d been carved from ice" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.758 | | wordCount | 1320 | | matches | | 0 | "not with crickets or rustling leaves, but with something deeper, something" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 49 | | mean | 26.94 | | std | 24.88 | | cv | 0.924 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 64 | | 1 | 128 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 71 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 54 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 40 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 64 | | 13 | 41 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 34 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 51 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 49 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 46 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 35 | | 26 | 37 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 51 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 42 | | 32 | 28 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 38 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 25 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 53 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 39 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 44 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 48 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 8 |
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| 94.47% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 130 | | matches | | 0 | "been swallowed" | | 1 | "were rooted" | | 2 | "been carved" | | 3 | "been carved" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 223 | | matches | | |
| 13.96% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 133 | | ratio | 0.045 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora—Rory—had told herself it was just the cold, the way the wind off the Thames bit at her cheeks like a thousand tiny teeth." | | 1 | "She should have listened to the voice in her head—the one that had whispered *no* when she’d first slipped the thing into her pocket." | | 2 | "Not in a way she could name—no flash of light, no snap of sound—but like the air itself had thickened, like she’d been swallowed by something vast and patient." | | 3 | "And then—" | | 4 | "A flicker at the edge of her vision—something pale, something *wrong*—moving between the trees." | | 5 | "Its limbs were wrong—too many joints, too many fingers, its skin the color of damp parchment, stretched too tight over bones that looked like they’d been carved from ice." |
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| 92.69% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1303 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 63 | | adverbRatio | 0.04834996162701458 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004604758250191865 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 133 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 133 | | mean | 9.92 | | std | 6.9 | | cv | 0.695 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 26 | | 7 | 31 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 27 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 29 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 36.47% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 18 | | diversityRatio | 0.14285714285714285 | | totalSentences | 133 | | uniqueOpeners | 19 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 121 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she saw it." | | 1 | "Then she saw it." | | 2 | "Then the trees *moved*." | | 3 | "Then the ground trembled." | | 4 | "Then the trees *whispered*." | | 5 | "Then the ground trembled again," | | 6 | "Then the trees *whispered* again," |
| | ratio | 0.058 | |
| 67.93% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 46 | | totalSentences | 121 | | matches | | 0 | "It thrummed, a slow, rhythmic" | | 1 | "She should have listened to" | | 2 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 3 | "*You shouldn’t be here.*" | | 4 | "She wasn’t superstitious." | | 5 | "She wasn’t *anything* like her" | | 6 | "It was a place where" | | 7 | "She should turn back." | | 8 | "She stepped forward." | | 9 | "She swallowed hard, her tongue" | | 10 | "*You’re being ridiculous.*" | | 11 | "Her fingers twitched toward the" | | 12 | "It had too many limbs," | | 13 | "Her stomach twisted." | | 14 | "She wanted to scream." | | 15 | "She could feel the pendant’s" | | 16 | "She clenched her fist around" | | 17 | "It was *around* her, a" | | 18 | "She turned slowly, her gaze" | | 19 | "Its limbs were wrong—too many" |
| | ratio | 0.38 | |
| 71.57% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 94 | | totalSentences | 121 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant burned against her" | | 1 | "Aurora—Rory—had told herself it was" | | 2 | "It thrummed, a slow, rhythmic" | | 3 | "She should have listened to" | | 4 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 5 | "The air hummed, not with" | | 6 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 7 | "The warmth had intensified." | | 8 | "*You shouldn’t be here.*" | | 9 | "Rory exhaled sharply, the breath" | | 10 | "She wasn’t superstitious." | | 11 | "She wasn’t *anything* like her" | | 12 | "It was a place where" | | 13 | "The note had been a" | | 14 | "She should turn back." | | 15 | "She stepped forward." | | 16 | "The moment her boots crunched" | | 17 | "The trees leaned in closer." | | 18 | "The standing stones seemed to" | | 19 | "Something wet and slow, like" |
| | ratio | 0.777 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 121 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "It thrummed, a slow, rhythmic ache that vibrated up her sternum, as if something inside it had woken." | | 1 | "Alone.* No signature, no explanation, just the address scrawled in ink that smelled faintly of damp earth and something older, something that made her skin pric…" | | 2 | "The air hummed, not with crickets or rustling leaves, but with something deeper, something that made her teeth ache." | | 3 | "She wasn’t *anything* like her father, who’d spent his life chasing ghosts in courtrooms." | | 4 | "Her fingers twitched toward the pendant, as if it might shield her." | | 5 | "The air smelled like iron and something older, something that made her skin crawl." | | 6 | "Its limbs were wrong—too many joints, too many fingers, its skin the color of damp parchment, stretched too tight over bones that looked like they’d been carved…" | | 7 | "The trees themselves seemed to lean in, their roots writhing just beneath the soil, their leaves rustling in unison, as if something vast and ancient had decide…" | | 8 | "Something deeper, something that made the earth itself shudder beneath her feet." | | 9 | "The trees themselves seemed to speak, their voices slithering into her mind, a chorus of whispers that made her skin crawl." | | 10 | "It *unfolded*, its limbs stretching, its body elongating, its skin stretching too tight over bones that looked like they’d been carved from ice." | | 11 | "Then the trees *whispered* again, their voices slithering into her mind, a chorus of whispers that made her skin crawl." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |