Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMN9RVE82THZG9MSGEY7DN1

Run Details

Duration:
30.5s
Cost:
$0.011008

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The night air was thick with the scent of damp earth and wildflowers, the kind that bloomed only in the hidden places of the world. Rory adjusted the strap of her messenger bag, the Heartstone Pendant tucked safely beneath her shirt, its faint warmth a steady pulse against her skin. She had come to the Fae Grove for answers—answers about the pendant, about the strange dreams that had plagued her since she’d first touched it, about the way her life had unraveled in the weeks since Eva had vanished without a trace. The standing stones loomed ahead, ancient oaks twisted into shapes that defied reason, their bark blackened as if scorched by time itself. The boundary between worlds hummed at the edge of her senses, a low vibration that set her teeth on edge. She hesitated, her breath fogging in the cold air. The Grove was supposed to be safe. Isolde had sworn it. But something was wrong. The moment she stepped between the stones, the world tilted. The air grew heavier, the silence deeper. The wildflowers at her feet swayed, though there was no wind. Rory exhaled sharply, forcing herself to move forward. The clearing opened before her, bathed in the eerie glow of moonlight filtering through the canopy. The trees here were different—taller, their branches knotted into shapes that almost looked like faces. She swallowed hard. A sound cut through the stillness. A whisper. Not words. Not quite. A breath, maybe, or the rustle of leaves where there were no leaves to rustle. Rory spun, her pulse quickening. Nothing. Just the trees, their gnarled roots snaking across the ground like veins. She clenched her fists, nails digging into her palms. *Get a grip, Carter.* She knelt, pressing her fingers into the soft earth. The pendant warmed against her chest, its crimson glow flickering faintly beneath her shirt. She had to focus. The dreams—they were always the same. A voice, calling her name. A presence, just out of reach. And the pendant, pulsing like a second heartbeat. She had come here to find out why. Another sound. Closer this time. A snap of a twig. Rory froze. The Grove was empty. It had to be. She was alone. But the air had changed, thickened, as if something had just exhaled behind her. She turned slowly, her breath shallow. The trees were watching her. Not just the shapes in the bark—the way the branches shifted, just slightly, as if leaning in. The way the shadows pooled at the base of the trunks, darker than they should have been. The way the wildflowers trembled, though the air was still. A low, wet sound slithered through the clearing. Rory’s stomach twisted. She knew that sound. She had heard it before—in the dreams. The voice. The thing that wasn’t a voice. It was coming from the trees. She took a step back, her boot sinking into the damp earth. The pendant flared hot against her skin, its glow seeping through the fabric of her shirt. The crimson light pulsed, faster now, matching the frantic rhythm of her heart. The whispers grew louder, overlapping, a chorus of breathy, guttural sounds that didn’t belong to any language she knew. Something moved at the edge of her vision. A shape. Tall. Too tall. Standing between the trees, just beyond the reach of the moonlight. Rory’s breath hitched. It wasn’t there. It couldn’t be. She blinked, and it was gone. But the whispers remained. They were inside her head now. *Rory.* Her name, spoken in a voice that wasn’t a voice. A sound like nails dragging across glass, like bones clicking together. She clapped her hands over her ears, but it didn’t help. The sound wasn’t in the air. It was in her skull. *You came back.* The pendant burned. She gasped, tearing it from beneath her shirt. The crimson gemstone glowed fiercely, casting long, wavering shadows across the clearing. The whispers sharpened, became words. *You always come back.* Rory stumbled, her back hitting the rough bark of a tree. The shadows at its base writhed, twisting into something with too many limbs, too many joints. It wasn’t real. It couldn’t be real. She squeezed her eyes shut, but the image was burned into her retinas—the way the darkness pooled, the way it stretched, the way it *moved.* *You know what you are.* The voice was closer now. Right behind her. Rory whirled, her hand flying to her pocket, fingers closing around the switchblade she always carried. The pendant flared white-hot, searing her palm. She cried out, dropping it. The gemstone hit the earth with a dull thud, its glow dimming instantly. Silence. The whispers were gone. The clearing was still. Rory’s breath came in ragged gasps, her heart hammering against her ribs. She dropped to her knees, her hands trembling as she reached for the pendant. The chain was cool now, the gemstone dark. She turned it over in her fingers, searching for some sign of what had just happened. A twig snapped. Rory’s head jerked up. The thing from her dreams stood at the edge of the clearing. Tall. Too tall. Its limbs were too long, its joints bending in ways that made her stomach lurch. Its skin—if it was skin—was the color of old bruises, mottled and shifting, like smoke trapped beneath the surface. Its face was a void, a hollow space where features should have been, save for the faintest suggestion of a mouth, stretched too wide, too many teeth glinting in the dim light. It tilted its head. *There you are.* Rory scrambled backward, her boots slipping in the damp earth. The thing took a step forward, its movements jerky, unnatural. The air around it warped, the trees bending away as if repelled. *You’ve been running for so long.* She fumbled for the switchblade, her fingers slick with sweat. The blade flicked open with a sharp click. The thing paused, its hollow face turning toward the sound. *You think that will help you?* Rory didn’t answer. She lunged, slashing wildly. The blade passed through the thing as if it were made of mist. It didn’t even flinch. *You can’t hurt me, little moth.* The pendant flared again, its crimson light casting jagged shadows across the clearing. The thing hissed, recoiling. Rory didn’t hesitate. She grabbed the pendant, clutching it tight in her fist. The gemstone burned, but she didn’t let go. *You don’t even know what you’re holding.* The thing’s voice was a scream now, a sound that set her teeth on edge. It lunged, its too-long fingers reaching for her. Rory braced herself, the pendant’s glow searing her skin. And then— Silence. The thing was gone. The clearing was empty. Rory stood alone, her breath coming in ragged gasps, the pendant still clutched in her fist. The gemstone was dark now, its warmth faded. She stared at it, her hands shaking. She didn’t know what had just happened. But she knew one thing for certain. She wasn’t alone. Not anymore.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
74.5547% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1179
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
32.1459% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1179
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"lurch"
count1
1
word"searing"
count2
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"glinting"
count1
4
word"wavering"
count1
5
word"trembled"
count1
6
word"loomed"
count1
highlights
0"lurch"
1"searing"
2"flicked"
3"glinting"
4"wavering"
5"trembled"
6"loomed"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her fists"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences143
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences143
filterMatches
0"know"
1"think"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences143
matches
0"knew that sound"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean20.88
std22.99
cv1.101
sampleLengths
092
166
270
36
42
550
660
75
85
933
105
1144
128
1328
1460
158
1631
174
186
191
2043
213
2228
234
2459
255
268
2741
281
294
304
3150
323
334
3412
3569
364
373
3832
396
4028
416
4224
436
4438
457
4632
472
481
494
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences143
matches
0"was supposed"
1"was gone"
2"was burned"
3"were gone"
4"were made"
5"was gone"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs215
matches
0"were watching"
1"was coming"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1179
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.037319762510602206
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.007633587786259542
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences143
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences143
mean8.17
std6.39
cv0.781
sampleLengths
025
125
242
322
420
59
67
74
84
910
107
1111
128
1316
1415
153
166
172
182
192
2015
215
221
2312
249
254
269
2714
284
296
305
316
328
338
342
353
365
372
384
394
403
4114
426
435
4417
4517
4610
478
483
494
33.9161% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats23
diversityRatio0.17482517482517482
totalSentences143
uniqueOpeners25
100.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
90.6245%