Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMNCG50JTE2HR3Y19D3TSKS

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Duration:
36.4s
Cost:
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Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest hummed with the low murmur of conversation and the clink of glasses, the kind of noise that settled into the bones like a second heartbeat. The green neon sign outside cast a sickly glow through the rain-streaked windows, painting the patrons in shades of jade and shadow. Rory leaned against the bar, her fingers tracing the rim of a half-empty gin and tonic, the ice long melted into something watery and weak. She hadn’t meant to stay this long. The delivery to Covent Garden had taken less time than expected, and the thought of going back to the flat—empty, echoinghad sent her here instead, to the one place in London that still felt like a kind of home. The door swung open, letting in a gust of damp air and the distant wail of a siren. Rory didn’t look up. She was too busy watching the way the condensation slid down the glass, how it pooled in the grooves of her knuckles. Then the scent hit her—leather and bergamot, something familiar beneath the rain. Her stomach tightened. “Christ,” a voice said, low and rough with disuse. “Rory Carter. I’ll be damned.” She turned. Eva stood there, dripping onto the threshold, her dark curls plastered to her forehead. But it wasn’t the rain that made Rory’s breath catch. It was the way Eva held herself—shoulders squared, chin lifted, like she was bracing for a fight. The last time Rory had seen her, Eva had been all sharp edges and reckless laughter, the kind of girl who burned too bright and left scorch marks in her wake. Now, there was something hollowed out about her, like she’d been carved down to the bone. Her coat, once a vibrant red, was now a faded burgundy, the hem frayed. The silver hoops in her ears had tarnished. And her hands—Rory’s gaze snagged on them—were wrapped in bandages, the kind that spoke of stitches and antiseptic. Eva followed her stare and tucked her hands into her pockets. “Long time.” Rory swallowed. “Yeah. Long time.” The silence between them was a living thing, thick with all the things they weren’t saying. Eva had been the one to pull her out of Cardiff, to hand her the keys to the flat above this very bar and say, *You’ll be safe here.* And Rory had been safe, for a while. Until she wasn’t. Until she’d let herself get tangled up in something ugly, and Eva had disappeared without a word, leaving only a note on the kitchen counter: *Had to go. Don’t look for me.* Now here she was, standing in the doorway like a ghost. Silas appeared behind the bar, his hazel eyes sharp as he took in the scene. He didn’t say anything, just slid a glass of whiskey across the counter toward Eva. She caught it with her bandaged hand, her fingers trembling slightly. “Thanks, Si,” she said, voice rough. He nodded, his signet ring glinting in the dim light. “You look like hell.” Eva barked a laugh. “Feel like it too.” She downed the whiskey in one go, wincing as it burned its way down. Then she turned to Rory, her dark eyes searching. “You still living upstairs?” Rory nodded. “Yeah. Still delivering for Yu-Fei. Still… here.” Eva’s mouth twisted. “Still running, you mean.” The words hit like a slap. Rory set her glass down too hard, the gin sloshing over the rim. “What the hell is that supposed to mean?” “It means you’re still hiding.” Eva leaned forward, her voice dropping. “You think I don’t know what happened after I left? You think I didn’t hear about Evan?” Rory’s hands curled into fists. “You don’t know shit.” “I know he put you in the hospital.” Eva’s voice was quiet, deadly. “I know you had to change your name. I know you’ve been jumping at shadows ever since.” Rory wanted to deny it. Wanted to tell Eva she was wrong, that she wasn’t running, that she was fine. But the words stuck in her throat. Because Eva wasn’t wrong. Rory *had* been running. From Evan, from Cardiff, from the memory of the way his hands had felt around her wrists. From the way she’d let him convince her she was nothing without him. Eva must have seen the truth in her face because her expression softened, just a fraction. “I’m not judging you, Rory. Christ, I’m the last person who should be judging anyone.” She held up her bandaged hands. “Got myself into a bit of a mess. Had to disappear for a while.” “Doing what?” Eva hesitated. Then, quietly: “Things I’m not proud of.” Rory wanted to ask more, but the look on Eva’s face stopped her. There was a hardness there, a distance, like she’d built a wall between herself and the world. Rory recognized it because she’d done the same thing. Silas cleared his throat, breaking the tension. “You two want to take this somewhere else? You’re killing my vibe.” Eva smirked, some of the old fire flickering in her eyes. “Since when do you have a vibe, Si?” He grunted. “Since I opened this place. Now either order another drink or get out.” Eva slid her glass toward him. “Fill ‘er up.” Rory watched as Silas poured, the amber liquid catching the light. She should have felt something—relief, maybe, or anger. But all she felt was a dull, aching sadness. Because Eva was right. She *had* been running. And now, faced with the one person who knew her better than anyone, she didn’t know how to stop. Eva turned back to her, whiskey in hand. “So. You gonna invite me up, or what?” Rory hesitated. Then, slowly, she nodded. The stairs to the flat above the bar creaked under their weight, the sound familiar, comforting. Rory fumbled with her keys, her hands unsteady. Eva stood close behind her, close enough that Rory could feel the heat of her, could smell the rain in her hair. “You’ve redecorated,” Eva said as they stepped inside. Rory glanced around. The flat was small, cluttered with books and half-finished cups of tea. A single lamp cast a warm glow over the worn sofa, the only real sign of life in the place. “Not really. Just… lived in.” Eva ran her fingers over the spines of the books on the shelf. “Still reading all the same crap, I see.” Rory managed a smile. “Some things don’t change.” Eva turned to face her, her expression unreadable. “No. But we do.” Rory’s chest tightened. “Eva—” “Don’t.” Eva held up a hand. “I don’t want to talk about it. Not yet.” Rory swallowed the questions burning in her throat. Instead, she went to the kitchenette and put the kettle on. “Tea?” Eva nodded. “Yeah. Tea’s good.” They sat at the small table by the window, the steam from their mugs curling into the air between them. Outside, the rain had slowed to a drizzle, the neon glow of the Raven’s Nest sign reflecting off the wet pavement. Eva wrapped her bandaged hands around her mug. “I missed this place.” Rory studied her. “You could’ve come back anytime.” Eva’s laugh was bitter. “No. I couldn’t.” “Why not?” Eva didn’t answer. Instead, she reached across the table and brushed her fingers over the crescent-shaped scar on Rory’s wrist. “You kept it.” Rory pulled her hand away. “It’s not like I had a choice.” “No,” Eva said softly. “I guess you didn’t.” The kettle whistled, filling the silence. Rory got up to turn it off, her back to Eva. She could feel the weight of Eva’s gaze on her, heavy with things unsaid. When she turned back, Eva was watching her with an intensity that made her stomach flip. “I’m sorry,” Eva said, her voice barely above a whisper. “For leaving. For not being there when you needed me.” Rory’s throat tightened. “You didn’t know.” “I should’ve.” Eva’s hands clenched around her mug. “I should’ve been there.” Rory wanted to tell her it was okay, that she understood. But it wasn’t okay. And she didn’t understand. Not really. Instead, she reached across the table and took Eva’s bandaged hand in hers. “You’re here now.” Eva’s fingers tightened around hers. “Yeah. I am.” Outside, the rain began to fall again, tapping against the window like a reminder. Some things couldn’t be undone. Some wounds didn’t heal. But for the first time in a long time, Rory didn’t feel so alone.
total_cost0.01328

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Eva said softly [softly]"
1"Eva’s hands clenched around [around]"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.08
75.32% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1418
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count2
4
adverb"softly"
count1
5
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
3"really"
4"softly"
5"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
29.48% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1418
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"echoing"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count2
3
word"stomach"
count2
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"glinting"
count1
6
word"tension"
count1
7
word"weight"
count2
8
word"comforting"
count1
9
word"could feel"
count2
10
word"cast a warm glow"
count1
11
word"unreadable"
count1
12
word"intensity"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count1
14
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"echoing"
2"familiar"
3"stomach"
4"silence"
5"glinting"
6"tension"
7"weight"
8"comforting"
9"could feel"
10"cast a warm glow"
11"unreadable"
12"intensity"
13"whisper"
14"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences111
matches
0"was bitter"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences111
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences149
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords13
totalWords1411
ratio0.009
matches
0"You’ll be safe here."
1"Had to go. Don’t look for me."
2"had"
3"had"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions80
wordCount1142
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity3.24
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity6.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Covent1
Garden1
London1
Rory30
Eva37
Cardiff2
Evan1
Silas3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Evan"
5"Silas"
places
0"Covent"
1"Garden"
2"London"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore0
windowScore0
80.56% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a kind of home"
1"appeared behind the bar, his hazel eyes sharp as he took in the scene"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1411
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences149
matches
0"running, that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean24.75
std26.06
cv1.053
sampleLengths
0121
159
214
32
4128
513
65
788
811
941
106
1114
1235
139
147
1527
1628
179
1830
1965
2051
212
229
2339
2419
2519
2615
279
2855
2916
306
3146
328
3340
3421
358
3612
374
3815
3920
405
4141
4212
438
447
452
4623
4712
488
4931
95.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences111
matches
0"been carved"
1"were wrapped"
2"get tangled"
36.60% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs204
matches
0"was bracing"
1"weren’t saying"
2"was, standing"
3"wasn’t running"
4"was watching"
46.98% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences149
ratio0.034
matches
0"The delivery to Covent Garden had taken less time than expected, and the thought of going back to the flat—empty, echoing—had sent her here instead, to the one place in London that still felt like a kind of home."
1"Then the scent hit her—leather and bergamot, something familiar beneath the rain."
2"It was the way Eva held herself—shoulders squared, chin lifted, like she was bracing for a fight."
3"And her hands—Rory’s gaze snagged on them—were wrapped in bandages, the kind that spoke of stitches and antiseptic."
4"She should have felt something—relief, maybe, or anger."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1153
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.03816131830008673
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.009540329575021683
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences149
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences149
mean9.47
std7.14
cv0.754
sampleLengths
028
122
225
37
439
518
64
722
812
93
109
115
122
1314
1410
1517
1631
1716
1814
198
2018
2111
222
232
243
2516
2637
273
2828
294
3011
3115
3215
3311
346
3510
364
374
3818
399
404
412
427
433
444
456
4613
478
4811
4917
45.30% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.28859060402684567
totalSentences149
uniqueOpeners43
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences102
matches
0"Then the scent hit her—leather"
1"Then she turned to Rory,"
2"Then, slowly, she nodded."
3"Instead, she went to the"
4"Instead, she reached across the"
5"Instead, she reached across the"
ratio0.059
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences102
matches
0"She hadn’t meant to stay"
1"She was too busy watching"
2"Her stomach tightened."
3"It was the way Eva"
4"Her coat, once a vibrant"
5"He didn’t say anything, just"
6"She caught it with her"
7"she said, voice rough"
8"He nodded, his signet ring"
9"She downed the whiskey in"
10"She held up her bandaged"
11"She should have felt something—relief,"
12"She *had* been running."
13"They sat at the small"
14"She could feel the weight"
ratio0.147
97.25% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences102
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest hummed with"
1"The green neon sign outside"
2"Rory leaned against the bar,"
3"She hadn’t meant to stay"
4"The delivery to Covent Garden"
5"The door swung open, letting"
6"Rory didn’t look up."
7"She was too busy watching"
8"Her stomach tightened."
9"a voice said, low and"
10"Eva stood there, dripping onto"
11"It was the way Eva"
12"The last time Rory had"
13"Her coat, once a vibrant"
14"The silver hoops in her"
15"Eva followed her stare and"
16"The silence between them was"
17"Eva had been the one"
18"Silas appeared behind the bar,"
19"He didn’t say anything, just"
ratio0.725
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount4
totalSentences102
matches
0"Now, there was something hollowed"
1"Now here she was, standing"
2"Because Eva wasn’t wrong."
3"Because Eva was right."
ratio0.039
99.13% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest hummed with the low murmur of conversation and the clink of glasses, the kind of noise that settled into the bones like a second heartbeat."
1"But it wasn’t the rain that made Rory’s breath catch."
2"When she turned back, Eva was watching her with an intensity that made her stomach flip."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she said, voice rough"
1"Eva leaned, her voice dropping"
2"Eva said, her voice barely above a whisper"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.1
leniency0.2
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.5465%