| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her voice sounded too [too]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |
| 81.57% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1085 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sharply" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1085 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "shimmered" | | 4 | "stomach" | | 5 | "chill" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "cacophony" | | 10 | "throb" | | 11 | "pounding" | | 12 | "could feel" | | 13 | "searing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 123 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 84.79% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 123 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 123 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 9 | | markdownWords | 23 | | totalWords | 1077 | | ratio | 0.021 | | matches | | 0 | "Meet me at the stones. It’s about the Hel portals. Something’s wrong." | | 1 | "Near a Hel portal." | | 2 | "hungry." | | 3 | "Crawling." | | 4 | "Hel." | | 5 | "Hungry." | | 6 | "run." | | 7 | "stupid" | | 8 | "Normal." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 84.94% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 44 | | wordCount | 1076 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.3 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 8 | | Pendant | 8 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Eva | 6 | | Hel | 3 | | Rory | 14 | | Silence | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Hel" | | 3 | "Silence" | | 4 | "Richmond" | | 5 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.849 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1077 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 123 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 26.93 | | std | 22.89 | | cv | 0.85 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 84 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 54 | | 3 | 74 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 54 | | 6 | 38 | | 7 | 38 | | 8 | 52 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 59 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 31 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 39 | | 15 | 36 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 37 | | 19 | 40 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 61 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 50 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 49 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 41 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 30 | | 35 | 31 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 46 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 10 |
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| 91.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 123 | | matches | | 0 | "were made" | | 1 | "being flayed" | | 2 | "been beaten" | | 3 | "was gone" | | 4 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 193 | | matches | | 0 | "was being" | | 1 | "was falling" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 123 | | ratio | 0.065 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come to the Fae Grove for a reason—Eva’s last message had been frantic, pleading, the words scrawled in haste: *Meet me at the stones." | | 1 | "She checked her phone—no signal, of course." | | 2 | "A sound cut through the quiet—a whisper, so soft it might have been the wind." | | 3 | "But now—" | | 4 | "Then she saw it—a figure, standing just beyond the edge of the moonlight." | | 5 | "The faceless thing shrieked—a sound like metal scraping bone—and gave chase." | | 6 | "For a heartbeat, there was nothing but pain—white-hot, searing, as if her skin were being flayed from her bones." | | 7 | "And then—" |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1085 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 39 | | adverbRatio | 0.035944700460829496 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008294930875576038 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 123 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 123 | | mean | 8.76 | | std | 6.29 | | cv | 0.718 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 37.80% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.2601626016260163 | | totalSentences | 123 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she saw it." | | 1 | "Then she saw it—a figure," | | 2 | "Just smooth, featureless skin, stretched" | | 3 | "Then she was falling, tumbling" | | 4 | "Somewhere, in the dark between" |
| | ratio | 0.05 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come to the" | | 1 | "It’s about the Hel portals." | | 2 | "She stepped through, and the" | | 3 | "She checked her phone—no signal," | | 4 | "Her voice sounded too loud," | | 5 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 6 | "She pulled it out, watching" | | 7 | "It wasn’t words." | | 8 | "It was something else." | | 9 | "She turned slowly, her pulse" | | 10 | "She took a step back," | | 11 | "They coiled around her, pressing" | | 12 | "It pulsed with a sickly," | | 13 | "She had thought Eva was" | | 14 | "Its limbs were too long," | | 15 | "It tilted its head, and" | | 16 | "Its movements were jerky, unnatural," | | 17 | "She scrambled to her feet," | | 18 | "She had to get out." | | 19 | "She had one chance." |
| | ratio | 0.277 | |
| 49.11% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 83 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "The night air was thick" | | 1 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "She had come to the" | | 3 | "It’s about the Hel portals." | | 4 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 5 | "The boundary of the grove" | | 6 | "She stepped through, and the" | | 7 | "The wildflowers, vibrant even in" | | 8 | "Rory exhaled sharply, her breath" | | 9 | "She checked her phone—no signal," | | 10 | "The screen’s glow cast long" | | 11 | "Her voice sounded too loud," | | 12 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 13 | "The Heartstone Pendant grew warmer," | | 14 | "She pulled it out, watching" | | 15 | "A sound cut through the" | | 16 | "The whisper came again, a" | | 17 | "It wasn’t words." | | 18 | "It was something else." | | 19 | "She turned slowly, her pulse" |
| | ratio | 0.822 | |
| 49.50% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "Because it had no face." |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 30.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed ahead, ancient oaks twisted into shapes that defied reason, their gnarled roots coiling into the earth like the fingers of something …" | | 1 | "The boundary of the grove shimmered at the edges of her vision, a heat-haze distortion that made her stomach clench." | | 2 | "The screen’s glow cast long shadows that stretched and twisted in ways that made her skin prickle." | | 3 | "But the air hummed with wrongness, a vibration that set her teeth on edge." | | 4 | "Just smooth, featureless skin, stretched taut over something that wasn’t quite a skull." | | 5 | "The whispers were inside her head now, slithering through her thoughts, drowning out everything but the pounding of her heart." | | 6 | "The faceless thing loomed ahead, its body rippling, distorting, as if it were made of something that wasn’t quite solid." | | 7 | "She gasped, rolling onto her back, her body aching as if she’d been beaten." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |