| 88.89% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she pressed lightly [lightly]" | | 1 | "camaraderie lingered like [like]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.621 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.111 | |
| 72.35% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1266 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "lightly" | | 4 | "gently" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1266 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "sentinel" | | 2 | "scanning" | | 3 | "comforting" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "ceaseless" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "facade" | | 9 | "newfound" | | 10 | "echoes" | | 11 | "charm" | | 12 | "testament" | | 13 | "dance" | | 14 | "echoing" | | 15 | "unspoken" | | 16 | "silence" | | 17 | "reminder" | | 18 | "tension" | | 19 | "traced" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 62 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1260 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 27 | | wordCount | 1077 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.56 | | worstName | "Silas" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 2 | | Nest | 2 | | Soho | 1 | | Silas | 6 | | Blackwood | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 6 | | Pierce | 1 | | Daniel | 6 | | Despite | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Silas" | | 3 | "Blackwood" | | 4 | "Carter" | | 5 | "Rory" | | 6 | "Pierce" | | 7 | "Daniel" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.794 | | wordCount | 1260 | | matches | | 0 | "not just an old friend but also the altered, raw presence time carved beside her own ch" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 35 | | std | 18.44 | | cv | 0.527 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 79 | | 1 | 65 | | 2 | 77 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 37 | | 5 | 58 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 71 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 37 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 33 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 46 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 27 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 29 | | 22 | 32 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 34 | | 25 | 33 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 42 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 38 | | 32 | 48 | | 33 | 51 | | 34 | 42 | | 35 | 60 |
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| 88.29% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "was interrupted" | | 1 | "was unexpected" | | 2 | "were, slumped" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 167 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 73 | | ratio | 0.068 | | matches | | 0 | "He looked older—gaunter, with a newfound solemnity in the planes of his face." | | 1 | "“Still art dealing?” she pressed lightly, her curiosity a testament to the artful dance they’d played in their youth—each question, every word a step toward an old dance reinterpreted." | | 2 | "“Or the simplicity of not knowing?” His voice was soft, almost introspective—the theoretical tension of regret stretched between them." | | 3 | "He seemed, somehow, to be part of the unfolding dialogue—an arbiter of this re-discovery and the unforeseen reconciliation in its many layers." | | 4 | "Their glasses clinked together softly, a toast to what had been and what might yet be—two old friends anchored in a bar steeped in history, at the fulcrum of past and future, with Silas as their quiet witness." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 262 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 6 | | adverbRatio | 0.022900763358778626 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.003816793893129771 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 73 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 73 | | mean | 17.26 | | std | 7.56 | | cv | 0.438 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 35 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 25 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 25 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 29 | | 44 | 22 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 95.43% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.589041095890411 | | totalSentences | 73 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, as Silas moved to" | | 1 | "Eventually, as the hour grew" |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 23.28% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "Its distinctive green neon sign," | | 1 | "She was here to collect" | | 2 | "he greeted her in a" | | 3 | "She nodded, tucking a stray" | | 4 | "Her voice was light, a" | | 5 | "He looked older—gaunter, with a" | | 6 | "His hair, once a rebellious" | | 7 | "His presence in this bar" | | 8 | "He looked up, eyes narrowing" | | 9 | "she asked, sliding onto the" | | 10 | "His voice was richer than" | | 11 | "she replied, a gentle jest" | | 12 | "She drummed her fingers absently" | | 13 | "His eyes hardened slightly, a" | | 14 | "She looked at him squarely," | | 15 | "she said, raising her glass" | | 16 | "he said, and although his" | | 17 | "she pressed lightly, her curiosity" | | 18 | "he nodded, sipping his drink," | | 19 | "Theirs was a world where" |
| | ratio | 0.492 | |
| 25.57% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 53 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "The Raven's Nest exuded the" | | 1 | "Its distinctive green neon sign," | | 2 | "Aurora Carter entered with the" | | 3 | "Rory, to those who knew" | | 4 | "She was here to collect" | | 5 | "The familiar tug of obligation" | | 6 | "Silas stood behind the counter," | | 7 | "A veteran postured in repose," | | 8 | "The silver signet ring on" | | 9 | "he greeted her in a" | | 10 | "She nodded, tucking a stray" | | 11 | "Her voice was light, a" | | 12 | "The name unfurled in her" | | 13 | "He looked older—gaunter, with a" | | 14 | "His hair, once a rebellious" | | 15 | "His presence in this bar" | | 16 | "The name escaped her lips" | | 17 | "He looked up, eyes narrowing" | | 18 | "Recognition bloomed slowly, like dawn" | | 19 | "she asked, sliding onto the" |
| | ratio | 0.869 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 86.47% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Inside, the bar hummed with the low murmur of conversation, punctuated by the quiet clink of glasses, as if the old maps and photographs on the walls had absorb…" | | 1 | "Silas stood behind the counter, his lean form moving with a grace incongruous with the limp that tugged at his left knee." | | 2 | "As the evening drew on, Rory and Daniel talked and drank under the watchful eye of the bar’s patrons, spinning tales that threaded through their past and into t…" |
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| 97.22% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she replied, a gentle jest coloring her observation" |
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| 12.07% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she pressed lightly (press)" | | 1 | "she admitted (admit)" | | 2 | "camaraderie lingered like (linger)" | | 3 | "she agreed (agree)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.379 | | leniency | 0.759 | | rawRatio | 0.364 | | effectiveRatio | 0.276 | |