Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMPADVXM9B3EPPZFFWAT0Y3

Run Details

Duration:
26.7s
Cost:
$0.001192

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest exuded a familiar warmth, a soft hum of conversation weaving through the low glow of the green neon sign that cast ghostly shadows across the bar's meanderings. A timeworn clock behind the counter ticked with an unhurried rhythm, reminding any who cared to listen that life rolled on, even in the embrace of a dimly lit refuge. Aurora Carter, known simply as Rory to her friends, tucked a strand of her shoulder-length black hair behind her ear and surveyed the room through her bright blue eyes. It had been a long day filled with the monotonous jingle of delivery routes, and she sought solace in the comforting chaos of Silas Blackwood's bar. When she slipped back into this sanctuary, it felt like donning an old jacket; familiar yet restrained. The smell of aged wood mingled with the slight bite of stale beer, stirring memories of her first visits to the Nest—before the world outside had conspired to strew heavy burdens in her path. She settled onto a barstool, allowing herself a moment of respite. Silas stood behind the bar, his grey-streaked auburn hair catching the dim light as he polished glasses with deliberate care. He moved with the quiet authority of someone who had commanded rooms filled with far worse than impertinent patrons. For nearly a year, he had been more than just a mentor; he was an anchor in the surging waves of Rory’s turbulent life. As she settled in, his eyes flickered to her, full of warmth and unspoken understanding. “Long day?” he asked, placing a pint glass in front of her. “More like a long month,” Rory replied, a wry smile creeping up her lips. “You know how it is.” “Yeah, but you look like you’ve gone a few rounds with life,” he said, his voice a gravelly whisper, edged with concern. “What’s on your mind?” Rory shrugged, lifting the glass to her lips. The frothy golden liquid was instantly refreshing, but it didn’t quite wash away the heaviness in her chest. It was then that the door swung open with a creak, and the buzz of the outside world seeped in. A gust of cool air brought with it a figure who stood unnaturally still for a moment, as if absorbing the scene inside before wading into its depths. Rory’s breath stilled as she turned to look, recognition slicing through her like a sharp edge of memory. Cameron. The name hung unbidden on her tongue, a whisper long buried, a ghost she thought she had banished. The years had painted him with harsher strokes—a few more wrinkles creasing the corners of his smile, thicker than she remembered, but still radiating that same magnetic charm. He hadn’t changed all that much, yet everything felt different. The innocent laughter of their youth played like a vintage record she was no longer sure she wanted to hear. He opened his mouth, paused as if caught in a web spun long ago, then approached her table. “Rory,” he breathed, his tone quiet, the kind that fluttered with the weight of unspoken words. “I didn’t expect to see you here.” “Neither did I,” she replied, her voice surprisingly steady. “What brings you back to London?” “Just passing through,” he said, leaning against the bar with an ease that betrayed familiarity. “Business.” “Sounds mysterious.” The banter felt both obligatory and strained, a dance of wistfulness wrapping around them—two partners who had lost the rhythm. “Things change, you know,” he said softly, eyes narrowing as he took in the surroundings. “This place hasn’t.” “Not much has. Except…” Rory trailed off, tilting her head toward the old photographs lining the walls. “It’s a little foggier than I remember.” Cameron regarded the images, shadows of moments captured in time, faces that held their stories within framed borders. “Some things should stay that way,” he murmured, his gaze fixing on her with an intensity that sparked the air around them. “You look good. Different, but good.” “Thanks,” Rory replied, her heart skipping a beat as she felt the warmth in his eyes. “And you? You look like you’ve seen the world.” “Or run away from it,” he laughed, though it held a trace of bitterness that cut through the levity. “How’s life treating you?” Underneath his question lay a poorly concealed weight, the kind only they understood. They had shared dreams once, ambitions bright and untarnished, but as the years unfurled, the roads they walked splintered, and for Rory, the journey had quickly turned dark. She hesitated, her thoughts tangled around the scar that snaked across her wrist—a childhood accident turned reminder of battered choices. “Busy,” she settled on. “Working at Golden Empress. Deliveries in London. It’s…different.” “No law school?” His face registered surprise but softened with concern. “Was it the right choice?” “Maybe it was never my choice. I was chasing something that wasn’t really there,” she admitted, the confession creeping out like air escaping a tire. “After everything with Evan, I just needed to breathe.” The words hung there, unguarded and raw. His expression shifted, the lines of his boyish charm marred by a clarity born of experience. “I heard about him. That it—” “Didn’t end well?” Rory interjected, feeling a quiver in her resolve. “You could say that. I had to leave Cardiff. And I had to leave him behind.” There was weight in the air, a palpable tension thickening between them as silence gathered, wrapping them in a cocoon woven from shared regret. Cameron broke it first, voice low, touched by a gentleness that stirred emotions she almost dared to keep at bay. “Rory, I—” “Why didn’t you reach out?” The question slipped from her lips, sharper than she’d intended, a thing wrapped in bitterness and longing. “Not when I needed you most.” “I didn’t know how,” he admitted, his honesty bare and open like the wounds they carried. “I was in a different place. A darker place, really. And I thought—” “Thought what? That someone else would save me?” Her voice rose, the anguish twisting inside her. A wave of discontent surged forth, pushing against the memories of late-night conversations, laughter that rang like bells before life had sullied their moments. “No!” he exclaimed, an edge of desperation creeping into his voice. “God, Rory, I thought you were better off, that you didn’t need me. You were always stronger. And… then I left.” “Is that the excuse you needed?” she challenged, tossing her hair back defiantly. “You don’t just walk away. Not from people who care.” “You think I don’t regret it?” His eyes burned with the truth unspoken—the warmth of a friendship marred by distance and silence. “Every day, I think about you. About us.” The crack in their conversation widened, the ghosts of their past swirling around them, heavy and relentless. Rory instinctively traced the scar on her wrist, grounding herself in the reality of the here and now even as old memories unfurled like faded photographs. “What do we even do with all this time lost?” “Maybe we pick up the pieces,” he said slowly, his voice threading through the shadows that formed between them, fragile but full of promise. “Maybe we start over.” Rory caught her breath, a maelstrom of emotions swelling within. She saw that he carried his own scars, the handsome semblance of the boy she once knew hazed by battles fought in silence. They were no longer who they had been, yet some bond lingered just beneath the surface, rekindled in this unexpected reunion. “Let’s take it slow,” she murmured, her heart fluttering in unfurling hope. “Let’s be just who we are now.” Cameron smiled, the contours of his face warm with shared understanding. For the first time in years, Rory felt the air shift, her past woven anew with possibility. Perhaps there was laughter to be found, threading between words and shadows. The old clock ticked on, your heart racing with the ticks and tocks of time as Rory found herself tangled again with the rhythm of friendship, if only for an evening. In the soft light of The Raven's Nest, amidst echoed memories, they began to reclaim the past, word by word.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
50.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"he said, his voice a gravelly whisper, edged with concern [gravelly]"
1"she replied, her voice surprisingly steady [surprisingly]"
2"he said softly, eyes narrowing as he took in the surroundings [softly]"
3"he said slowly, his voice threading through the shadows that formed between them, fragile but full of promise [slowly]"
63.5303% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1371
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count2
highlights
0"quickly"
1"slowly"
2"softly"
3"really"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1371
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"palpable"
count1
1
word"sanctuary"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"fluttered"
count1
4
word"unspoken"
count3
5
word"magnetic"
count1
6
word"solace"
count1
7
word"weight"
count3
8
word"dance"
count1
9
word"amidst"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"palpable"
1"sanctuary"
2"flickered"
3"fluttered"
4"unspoken"
5"magnetic"
6"solace"
7"weight"
8"dance"
9"amidst"
10"echoed"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of unspoken words"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences65
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences65
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount5
totalSentences88
matches
0"listen that life"
1"stay that way"
2"say that. I"
3"“Is that the"
4"saw that he"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean35.87
std21.97
cv0.612
sampleLengths
089
177
289
312
419
526
674
718
81
976
1041
1115
1216
1322
1418
1524
1646
1725
1823
1961
2012
2116
2241
2322
2427
2546
2628
2729
2840
2932
3023
3130
3253
3328
3454
3519
3640
3751
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs185
matches(empty)
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1085
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.03778801843317972
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.014746543778801843
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences88
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences88
mean15.49
std7.83
cv0.505
sampleLengths
030
130
229
326
417
534
611
720
819
924
1015
1112
1214
135
1422
154
168
1718
1820
1928
2018
211
2218
2328
2410
2520
2618
2716
287
299
306
3115
321
3322
3415
353
3617
377
3818
3922
406
4116
429
4319
444
4513
4628
4720
484
498
87.1212% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.5568181818181818
totalSentences88
uniqueOpeners49
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount14
fancyTags
0"Rory replied, a wry smile creeping up her lips (reply, creep up)"
1"he said, his voice a gravelly whisper, edged with concern (say, gravelly whisper, edge)"
2"he breathed, his tone quiet, the kind that fluttered with the weight of unspoken words (breathe, flutter)"
3"he said, leaning against the bar with an ease that betrayed familiarity (say, betray)"
4"he said softly, eyes narrowing as he took in the surroundings (say softly, narrow take)"
5"he murmured, his gaze fixing on her with an intensity that sparked the air around them (murmur, fix spark)"
6"Rory replied, her heart skipping a beat as she felt the warmth in his eyes (reply, skip feel)"
7"he laughed, though it held a trace of bitterness that cut through the levity (laugh, hold)"
8"she settled on (settle on)"
9"she admitted, the confession creeping out like air escaping a tire (admit, creeping out like escape)"
10"he admitted, his honesty bare and open like the wounds they carried (admit, like carry)"
11"exclaimed (exclaim)"
12"he said slowly, his voice threading through the shadows that formed between them, fragile but full of promise (say slowly, thread form)"
13"she murmured, her heart fluttering in unfurling hope (murmur, flutter unfurl)"
82.3913%