| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.786 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.53% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1338 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1338 | | totalAiIsms | 59 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | | 27 | | | 28 | | | 29 | | | 30 | | | 31 | | | 32 | | | 33 | | | 34 | | | 35 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "etched" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "echoing" | | 3 | "racing" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "comforting" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "quickened" | | 9 | "flicker" | | 10 | "pulsed" | | 11 | "yearning" | | 12 | "could feel" | | 13 | "weight" | | 14 | "solace" | | 15 | "resonance" | | 16 | "pulse" | | 17 | "echo" | | 18 | "wavered" | | 19 | "sense of" | | 20 | "reverberated" | | 21 | "pounding" | | 22 | "palpable" | | 23 | "tension" | | 24 | "electric" | | 25 | "echoes" | | 26 | "anticipation" | | 27 | "flickered" | | 28 | "chilled" | | 29 | "resolve" | | 30 | "tangible" | | 31 | "clenching" | | 32 | "kaleidoscope" | | 33 | "surreal" | | 34 | "stomach" | | 35 | "silk" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "d with panic" | | 1 | "r with warmth" |
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| 61.69% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "tried to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 91 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1327 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 31 | | wordCount | 1275 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 0.63 | | worstName | "Grove" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 8 | | Aurora | 6 | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Pendant | 2 | | Evan | 3 | | Good | 1 | | Light | 1 | | Heart | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Heartstone" | | 4 | "Pendant" | | 5 | "Evan" | | 6 | "Heart" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Light" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "patterns that seemed to twist and writhe in the darkness" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.754 | | wordCount | 1327 | | matches | | 0 | "not of the Good or Light, but of the malevolent grip of her past" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.40% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 51.04 | | std | 22.2 | | cv | 0.435 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 83 | | 1 | 73 | | 2 | 87 | | 3 | 82 | | 4 | 75 | | 5 | 68 | | 6 | 54 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 31 | | 9 | 37 | | 10 | 61 | | 11 | 82 | | 12 | 29 | | 13 | 68 | | 14 | 52 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 41 | | 17 | 28 | | 18 | 61 | | 19 | 51 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 53 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 61 | | 24 | 33 | | 25 | 47 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 216 | | matches | | 0 | "were watching" | | 1 | "was calling" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 91 | | ratio | 0.143 | | matches | | 0 | "But tonight, beneath the haunting glow of the moon, the Fae Grove felt different—more alive, more watchful." | | 1 | "Nothing was there—at least, nothing she could see." | | 2 | "But here, amongst the standing stones, she could feel a connection to something larger than herself—a weight of history living and breathing alongside her." | | 3 | "Then came the whispers—soft as a breeze but carrying a distinct resonance that sent her pulse into a frantic rhythm." | | 4 | "It felt almost like—like someone was calling her name." | | 5 | "More movement—this time, just beyond the branches." | | 6 | "“You’re just being paranoid.” But the realization clawed at her insides—something was wrong." | | 7 | "The sense of time warped; minutes blended into hours, each second strained under the heavy anticipation of the unknown." | | 8 | "There, at the edge of her vision, something flickered—an ethereal form, human yet not." | | 9 | "And then she saw it again—an outline, more defined this time." | | 10 | "The figure took a step forward, revealing a signature that conjured memories—not of the Good or Light, but of the malevolent grip of her past." | | 11 | "The pendant pulsed more insistently, flooding her with warmth—a defiant echo of life." | | 12 | "She turned, breaking into a sprint as the Grove exploded with sound—the trees groaning, shadows stretching, desperation and urgency thrumming beneath her feet." |
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| 91.52% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 161 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 8 | | adverbRatio | 0.049689440993788817 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012422360248447204 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 91 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 91 | | mean | 14.58 | | std | 6.11 | | cv | 0.419 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 25 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 21 |
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| 64.84% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.3956043956043956 | | totalSentences | 91 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Perhaps this was what she" | | 1 | "Then came the whispers—soft as" | | 2 | "Suddenly, a rustling broke through" | | 3 | "More movement—this time, just beyond" | | 4 | "Promptly, the whispers returned, this" |
| | ratio | 0.057 | |
| 88.18% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come to this" | | 1 | "She hesitated at the ancient" | | 2 | "She paused, her heart racing." | | 3 | "She could have turned back," | | 4 | "She glanced around, momentarily losing" | | 5 | "Her breath quickened as shadows" | | 6 | "She was here for a" | | 7 | "She reached for the Heartstone" | | 8 | "She wasn’t sure anymore." | | 9 | "It felt almost like—like someone" | | 10 | "she whispered, shaking her head" | | 11 | "She gripped the pendant tighter," | | 12 | "It reverberated through the Grove," | | 13 | "She whirled around, her heart" | | 14 | "Her voice betrayed her with" | | 15 | "She felt the cold brush" | | 16 | "she murmured, half to herself" | | 17 | "She stepped deeper into the" | | 18 | "It paused just out of" | | 19 | "She could feel its gaze" |
| | ratio | 0.33 | |
| 85.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 66 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "The moon hung low over" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter tightened her jacket" | | 2 | "She had come to this" | | 3 | "She hesitated at the ancient" | | 4 | "These monoliths marked the boundary" | | 5 | "Strings of wildflowers coiled around" | | 6 | "Aurora took a step forward," | | 7 | "The air shifted as if" | | 8 | "She paused, her heart racing." | | 9 | "Something felt off, as if" | | 10 | "She could have turned back," | | 11 | "The Heartstone Pendant nestled against" | | 12 | "A distant rustle broke the" | | 13 | "She glanced around, momentarily losing" | | 14 | "Her breath quickened as shadows" | | 15 | "Nothing was there—at least, nothing" | | 16 | "The Grove pulsed with a" | | 17 | "Aurora shook her head, chastising" | | 18 | "She was here for a" | | 19 | "The tales of her childhood" |
| | ratio | 0.75 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | technicalSentenceCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "She hesitated at the ancient oak standing stones, their gnarled surfaces etched with patterns that seemed to twist and writhe in the darkness." | | 1 | "Something felt off, as if the Grove were watching her, recognizing her intrusion." | | 2 | "The Heartstone Pendant nestled against her chest, its faint crimson glow pulsing gently, offering a peculiar warmth that was both comforting and unnerving." | | 3 | "Then came the whispers—soft as a breeze but carrying a distinct resonance that sent her pulse into a frantic rhythm." | | 4 | "No answer came, though the air thickened with a palpable tension that wrapped around her like ivy constricting a tree." | | 5 | "She stepped deeper into the clearing, her feet moving as if drawn by an unseen current." | | 6 | "She could feel its gaze on her, an envelope of inquisition that chilled her to her core." | | 7 | "No, she thought, clenching the pendant, its warmth comforting yet fiery, reminding her of who she was and who she had left behind." | | 8 | "The Grove shifted rhythmically, blurring together, a kaleidoscope of dark and light that spun her perceptions, slipping them into a surreal whirl." | | 9 | "It watched her with a patience that induced a shiver through her bones." | | 10 | "The figure took a step forward, revealing a signature that conjured memories—not of the Good or Light, but of the malevolent grip of her past." | | 11 | "The grove closed in, the whispers spiraling into a frenzy, urging her onward, but her spine straightened even as she felt the weight of his influence hovering l…" | | 12 | "And as the world around her began to spiral away, the Heartstone’s glow illuminated her path, guiding her through the encroaching shadows that dared to claim he…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "the wind seemed, the sound beckoning, familiar and unsettling all at once" | | 1 | "she murmured, half to herself" | | 2 | "she shouted, her voice stronger but edged with panic" | | 3 | "she cried, her voice shattering the cadence of whispers" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 3 | "she shouted (shout)" | | 4 | "it breathed (breathe)" | | 5 | "she cried (cry)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.857 | | effectiveRatio | 0.857 | |