| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.455 | | leniency | 0.909 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 86.15% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 722 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 722 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "shimmered" | | 4 | "perfect" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "throbbed" | | 7 | "flicker" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "gleaming" | | 10 | "silk" | | 11 | "cascading" | | 12 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 24 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 10 | | markdownWords | 26 | | totalWords | 714 | | ratio | 0.036 | | matches | | 0 | "time moves funny there, Rory. Don’t linger." | | 1 | "Just your brain filling silence." | | 2 | "fluid." | | 3 | "serrated." | | 4 | "called." | | 5 | "Help me. Find me." | | 6 | "his" | | 7 | "that" | | 8 | "there." | | 9 | "\"Next time, don’t run.\"" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 42.31% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 25 | | wordCount | 650 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 2.15 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Rory | 14 | | Eva | 2 | | Ice | 1 | | Watching | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.423 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 714 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 23.8 | | std | 18.55 | | cv | 0.779 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 59 | | 1 | 55 | | 2 | 59 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 50 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 38 | | 7 | 30 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 50 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 46 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 41 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 31 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 29 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 37 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 27 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 116 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 86 | | ratio | 0.105 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park tasted different after midnight—thicker, heavier, like the atmosphere itself had grown teeth." | | 1 | "Eva had warned her about this place—*time moves funny there, Rory." | | 2 | "The sound didn’t belong—not here, not now." | | 3 | "Then—movement." | | 4 | "The air smelled wrong—cloying sweetness undercut by something metallic, like old blood." | | 5 | "The girl perched in the branches was beautiful in the way of sharp things—all edges and gleaming intent." | | 6 | "A rustle in the undergrowth—then another, and another." | | 7 | "Something snagged her jacket—she wrenched free, heart slamming against her ribs." | | 8 | "But as Rory turned away, a whisper trailed after her—soft, singsong, in her own voice:" |
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| 95.23% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 660 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 30 | | adverbRatio | 0.045454545454545456 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010606060606060607 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 86 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 86 | | mean | 8.3 | | std | 6.15 | | cv | 0.74 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 61.63% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.4186046511627907 | | totalSentences | 86 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the first wrong thing:" | | 1 | "*Just your brain filling silence.*" | | 2 | "Too fast to be human." | | 3 | "Too *fluid.* Rory’s pulse hammered" | | 4 | "Too-long fingers curled around the" | | 5 | "Then she was through, stumbling" |
| | ratio | 0.086 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "She hadn’t questioned it." | | 1 | "It was the laughter of" | | 2 | "She exhaled slowly, forcing her" | | 3 | "She should leave." | | 4 | "Her dress was made of" | | 5 | "Her teeth were perfect." | | 6 | "She dropped from the branch," | | 7 | "Her voice shifted as she" | | 8 | "She hadn’t spoken those words" | | 9 | "she murmured, reaching for the" | | 10 | "She leaned in, her breath" | | 11 | "She bolted for the standing" | | 12 | "It connected with something solid." | | 13 | "She didn’t look back." |
| | ratio | 0.2 | |
| 74.29% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "Rory zipped her jacket higher," | | 2 | "The Heartstone pendant pulsed against" | | 3 | "She hadn’t questioned it." | | 4 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 5 | "The Fae Grove." | | 6 | "Eva had warned her about" | | 7 | "Rory’s fingers brushed the crescent" | | 8 | "The trees whispered as she" | | 9 | "The grove opened before her," | | 10 | "The pendant’s warmth sharpened." | | 11 | "The sound didn’t belong—not here," | | 12 | "It was the laughter of" | | 13 | "The flowers shivered." | | 14 | "She exhaled slowly, forcing her" | | 15 | "Another laugh, this time behind" | | 16 | "Nothing but shadows and silvered" | | 17 | "A flicker at the edge" | | 18 | "She should leave." | | 19 | "The flowers parted as she" |
| | ratio | 0.771 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 83.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 24 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pendant pulsed against her collarbone, a slow, insistent warmth that had drawn her here." | | 1 | "The standing stones loomed ahead, ancient oaks twisted into impossible shapes, their bark blackened as if scorched by some long-ago fire." |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "She leaned in, her breath smelling of crushed petals and damp earth" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Her voice shifted (shift)" | | 1 | "she murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.273 | | leniency | 0.545 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.364 | |