| 6.45% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Silas replied dryly [dryly]" | | 1 | "Silas offered cryptically [cryptically]" | | 2 | "she whispered softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.452 | | leniency | 0.903 | | rawRatio | 0.214 | | effectiveRatio | 0.194 | |
| 79.47% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 974 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 974 | | totalAiIsms | 30 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | word | "practiced ease" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "scanned" | | 2 | "practiced ease" | | 3 | "glint" | | 4 | "unspoken" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "comforting" | | 7 | "tracing" | | 8 | "desire" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "reminder" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "clandestine" | | 13 | "coded" | | 14 | "eyebrow" | | 15 | "traced" | | 16 | "solace" | | 17 | "palpable" | | 18 | "echoes" | | 19 | "flicker" | | 20 | "resolve" | | 21 | "testament" | | 22 | "tension" | | 23 | "measured" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "flicker of emotion" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "a spark of recognition" | | 1 | "a flicker of hope" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 968 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 736 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 2.31 | | worstName | "Silas" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Raven | 2 | | Nest | 2 | | Soho | 1 | | Blackwood | 1 | | Rory | 13 | | Silas | 17 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Raven" | | 2 | "Nest" | | 3 | "Blackwood" | | 4 | "Rory" | | 5 | "Silas" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.345 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 2.066 | | wordCount | 968 | | matches | | 0 | "not about the path itself but the courage to walk it" | | 1 | "not entirely gone, but lighter than before" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 28.47 | | std | 17.98 | | cv | 0.631 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 78 | | 1 | 66 | | 2 | 61 | | 3 | 54 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 31 | | 8 | 53 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 32 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 34 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 38 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 33 | | 25 | 44 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 50 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 38 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 27 |
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| 99.32% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 132 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 76 | | ratio | 0.053 | | matches | | 0 | "The neatly trimmed beard, streaked with grey, was new—a mark of time she hadn't witnessed." | | 1 | "They had shared an unspoken connective thread—an understanding, a history lost in the archives of forgotten missions and childhood dreams." | | 2 | "Rory laughed—dry, almost humorless." | | 3 | "The clandestine meetings, old habits—the back room evoked memories of covert operations cemented in her upbringing." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 612 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 19 | | adverbRatio | 0.03104575163398693 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013071895424836602 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 76 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 76 | | mean | 12.74 | | std | 6.58 | | cv | 0.516 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 30 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 30 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 23 |
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| 78.95% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.47368421052631576 | | totalSentences | 76 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 58.48% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Perhaps it was the familiarity" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "She took a moment to" | | 1 | "It was impossible not to," | | 2 | "Her bright blue eyes scanned" | | 3 | "His presence exuded the same" | | 4 | "They had shared an unspoken" | | 5 | "Her tone carried a mixture" | | 6 | "She nodded, unable to keep" | | 7 | "He could read her like" | | 8 | "she agreed, her finger tracing" | | 9 | "He nodded, respecting her desire" | | 10 | "she admitted, the underlying vulnerability" | | 11 | "He got up, moving with" | | 12 | "she reflected, the scar a" | | 13 | "she whispered softly" | | 14 | "They stood together in the" |
| | ratio | 0.263 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 53 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter pushed open the" | | 1 | "The ambient clatter of glasses" | | 2 | "She took a moment to" | | 3 | "Silas Blackwood noticed Rory immediately." | | 4 | "It was impossible not to," | | 5 | "The straight shoulder-length black hair" | | 6 | "Her bright blue eyes scanned" | | 7 | "Rory spotted Silas at the" | | 8 | "The neatly trimmed beard, streaked" | | 9 | "His presence exuded the same" | | 10 | "Silas watched her approach with" | | 11 | "They had shared an unspoken" | | 12 | "Rory greeted, settling into the" | | 13 | "Her tone carried a mixture" | | 14 | "She nodded, unable to keep" | | 15 | "Silas chuckled softly, running a" | | 16 | "A shadow flickered across Rory’s" | | 17 | "Silas finished for her, his" | | 18 | "He could read her like" | | 19 | "Secrets hidden in plain sight." |
| | ratio | 0.93 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 34.63% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The straight shoulder-length black hair was exactly as he remembered, though the young woman who wore it had grown, matured." | | 1 | "Her bright blue eyes scanned the room with practiced ease, revealing a level of self-assuredness that belied the pain he'd once seen behind them." | | 2 | "Silas studied her, recognizing the weight she carried but also the resilience that had kept her moving forward." | | 3 | "He got up, moving with a deliberate slow stride, heading towards a hidden bookshelf, pressing a covert mechanism that revealed a secret room." | | 4 | "Perhaps it was the familiarity of Silas’s counsel or the realization that paths, no matter how uncertain, were meant to be traversed." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Silas finished, his voice comforting yet direct" | | 1 | "she agreed, her finger tracing an invisible pattern on the bar" | | 2 | "she admitted, the underlying vulnerability surfacing in her gaze" | | 3 | "Rory commented, her eyebrow raised" | | 4 | "she reflected, the scar a testament to her journey" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she agreed (agree)" | | 1 | "she admitted (admit)" | | 2 | "he suggested (suggest)" | | 3 | "Rory commented (comment)" | | 4 | "she whispered softly (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.226 | | leniency | 0.452 | | rawRatio | 0.714 | | effectiveRatio | 0.323 | |