| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she tried again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |
| 88.45% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 866 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 866 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "chill" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "loomed" | | 7 | "flickered" | | 8 | "stomach" | | 9 | "flicker" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "echoed" | | 12 | "trembled" | | 13 | "searing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "t with urgency" | | 1 | "e with panic" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 93 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 97 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 6 | | markdownWords | 21 | | totalWords | 858 | | ratio | 0.024 | | matches | | 0 | "\"The Fae Grove is the only place they won’t follow,\"" | | 1 | "\"Meet me there at midnight.\"" | | 2 | "Think, Rory. Think." | | 3 | "Rory!" | | 4 | "doing" | | 5 | "Now." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 27 | | wordCount | 820 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.46 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 12 | | Eva | 7 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Silence | 1 | | Rory | 1 | | Was | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Was" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.768 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 858 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 46 | | mean | 18.65 | | std | 17.41 | | cv | 0.934 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 78 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 61 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 45 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 43 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 49 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 31 | | 17 | 27 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 38 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 42 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 33 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 24 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 39 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 28 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 3 |
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| 90.17% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "been carved" | | 1 | "was meant" | | 2 | "been polished" | | 3 | "was gone" |
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| 27.96% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "was leaching" | | 1 | "was coming" | | 2 | "was wading" | | 3 | "Was still following." |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 97 | | ratio | 0.103 | | matches | | 0 | "The trees here were too tall, their branches too twisted, their bark too smooth—like they had been carved rather than grown." | | 1 | "It had been a gift—left on her doorstep with no note, no explanation." | | 2 | "The wind picked up, carrying with it a scent like damp earth and something metallic—blood, maybe, or rust." | | 3 | "Something moved at the edge of her vision—a flicker of pale fabric, a flash of dark hair." | | 4 | "Then—laughter." | | 5 | "She pushed away from the stone, turning toward where she thought the entrance had been—but the path was gone." | | 6 | "The screen lit up—NO SERVICE—before going black." | | 7 | "A shape emerged from the darkness—small, hunched, crawling on all fours." | | 8 | "She clutched it, gasping, and—" | | 9 | "Aurora let herself be dragged, but her skin prickled with the certainty that whatever had been in the grove with her—" |
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| 88.50% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 828 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 44 | | adverbRatio | 0.05314009661835749 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008454106280193236 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 97 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 97 | | mean | 8.85 | | std | 5.89 | | cv | 0.666 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 54.51% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.3645833333333333 | | totalSentences | 96 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the pendant and the" | | 1 | "Just the sway of tall" | | 2 | "Then, abruptly, it stopped." | | 3 | "Just smooth, blank skin where" | | 4 | "Then it scuttled forward, too" |
| | ratio | 0.064 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath fogged before her," | | 1 | "She shouldn’t have come." | | 2 | "she’d said, her voice tight" | | 3 | "She touched it absently, the" | | 4 | "It had been a gift—left" | | 5 | "She spun, flashlight cutting through" | | 6 | "she called, voice steadier than" | | 7 | "She took a step back," | | 8 | "She stumbled, barely catching herself" | | 9 | "She’d walked straight in, hadn’t" | | 10 | "She whirled again, heart hammering." | | 11 | "she tried again, voice cracking" | | 12 | "She gripped it tighter, the" | | 13 | "She swallowed hard, forcing herself" | | 14 | "She had to get out." | | 15 | "She pushed away from the" | | 16 | "She didn’t move." | | 17 | "Its movements were jerky, unnatural," | | 18 | "It lifted its head, and" | | 19 | "She ran blindly, branches whipping" |
| | ratio | 0.295 | |
| 62.56% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 62 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "Her breath fogged before her," | | 2 | "The trees here were too" | | 3 | "The wildflowers blooming in defiance" | | 4 | "She shouldn’t have come." | | 5 | "she’d said, her voice tight" | | 6 | "Aurora checked her watch." | | 7 | "Eva was never late." | | 8 | "The Heartstone pendant against her" | | 9 | "She touched it absently, the" | | 10 | "It had been a gift—left" | | 11 | "A twig snapped somewhere to" | | 12 | "She spun, flashlight cutting through" | | 13 | "she called, voice steadier than" | | 14 | "The wind picked up, carrying" | | 15 | "Aurora’s pulse thudded in her" | | 16 | "She took a step back," | | 17 | "She stumbled, barely catching herself" | | 18 | "That wasn’t possible." | | 19 | "She’d walked straight in, hadn’t" |
| | ratio | 0.795 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 65.64% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The wildflowers blooming in defiance of the season glowed faintly underfoot, their petals shimmering with an unnatural iridescence." | | 1 | "The Heartstone pendant against her collarbone pulsed, a slow, rhythmic warmth that had nothing to do with the chill in the air." | | 2 | "Shadows stretched long and wrong, twisting in ways that made her stomach clench." | | 3 | "Its movements were jerky, unnatural, limbs bending in ways that made her stomach twist." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she’d, her voice tight with urgency" | | 1 | "she called, voice steadier than she felt" | | 2 | "she tried again, voice cracking" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she’d (would)" | | 1 | "Eva hissed (hiss)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.375 | | leniency | 0.75 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |