| 88.89% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "a quiet breath Rory turned back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.643 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.111 | |
| 75.42% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1017 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "truly" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "barely above a whisper" | | 3 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1017 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "cacophony" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "testament" | | 5 | "reminder" | | 6 | "sentinel" | | 7 | "tinged" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "unspoken" | | 10 | "measured" | | 11 | "dance" | | 12 | "silence" | | 13 | "comforting" | | 14 | "fleeting" | | 15 | "etched" | | 16 | "pang" | | 17 | "echoes" | | 18 | "depths" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "the weight of unspoken words" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 46 | | matches | | |
| 18.63% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 46 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 44 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1021 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 913 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.99 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Evan" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Silas | 6 | | Rory | 9 | | Evan | 8 | | Finding | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Evan" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "photographs that seemed to whisper stories of their own" | | 1 | "seemed almost black in the dim light, met hers, and for an instant, they just stared" | | 2 | "felt like an eternity" | | 3 | "as if seeking refuge" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.979 | | wordCount | 1021 | | matches | | 0 | "not for what they had, but for what could never be again" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | |
| 80.96% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 21 | | mean | 48.62 | | std | 21.07 | | cv | 0.433 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 92 | | 1 | 88 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 53 | | 4 | 41 | | 5 | 62 | | 6 | 32 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 50 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 66 | | 12 | 55 | | 13 | 48 | | 14 | 64 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 66 | | 17 | 39 | | 18 | 35 | | 19 | 68 | | 20 | 50 |
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| 97.64% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 145 | | matches | | 0 | "was urging" | | 1 | "was fleeting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 52 | | ratio | 0.058 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn't until he took a step forward, his eyes never leaving hers, that the years melted away, and she saw him – truly saw him – for the first time in what felt like an eternity." | | 1 | "Yet, beneath the surface of these mundane topics, a battle raged – a silent war of what had been, what could have been, and the unforgiving landscape of what now lay between them." | | 2 | "\"I should go,\" he said, his eyes searching hers, looking for something – forgiveness, understanding, a glimmer of what once was." |
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| 98.13% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 878 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.04214123006833713 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010250569476082005 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 52 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 52 | | mean | 19.63 | | std | 8.92 | | cv | 0.454 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 37 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 29 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 32 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 29 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 33 | | 30 | 34 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 28 | | 37 | 24 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 28 | | 41 | 24 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 24 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 24 | | 49 | 44 |
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| 89.74% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.5384615384615384 | | totalSentences | 52 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 75.76% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, like the surface of" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 74.55% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | | 0 | "She pushed open the door," | | 1 | "His eyes, a deep brown" | | 2 | "he ventured, his voice low" | | 3 | "It wasn't until he took" | | 4 | "she whispered, the name slipping" | | 5 | "Her heart, once a frantic" | | 6 | "His hair, once a rich," | | 7 | "She stepped aside, gesturing to" | | 8 | "she replied, the quip lighter" | | 9 | "Their conversation unfolded like a" | | 10 | "They spoke of everything and" | | 11 | "It wasn't until the silence" | | 12 | "he said, his voice barely" | | 13 | "he said, his voice a" | | 14 | "he said, his eyes searching" | | 15 | "She watched him go, the" |
| | ratio | 0.364 | |
| 85.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 33 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter descended the stairs" | | 1 | "She pushed open the door," | | 2 | "The dimly lit bar enveloped" | | 3 | "Silas, ever the vigilant host," | | 4 | "Rory wove through the sparse" | | 5 | "His eyes, a deep brown" | | 6 | "he ventured, his voice low" | | 7 | "Rory's mind stuttered, caught between" | | 8 | "It wasn't until he took" | | 9 | "she whispered, the name slipping" | | 10 | "Her heart, once a frantic" | | 11 | "Evan's smile faltered for a" | | 12 | "The sharp jawline was softer" | | 13 | "His hair, once a rich," | | 14 | "Silas, ever the observant host," | | 15 | "Rory felt a nudge, as" | | 16 | "She stepped aside, gesturing to" | | 17 | "Evan's smile, this time, was" | | 18 | "Evan began, his voice measured" | | 19 | "she replied, the quip lighter" |
| | ratio | 0.75 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, beneath the surface of" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The dimly lit bar enveloped her, its walls a cacophony of old maps and black-and-white photographs that seemed to whisper stories of their own." | | 1 | "Evan's smile faltered for a moment before he regained composure, his eyes darting around the bar as if seeking refuge." | | 2 | "Silas, ever the observant host, slid Rory's whiskey across the bar, his eyes flicking between the pair before he busied himself with wiping down the counter, a …" | | 3 | "Rory felt a nudge, as if the universe itself was urging her forward." | | 4 | "As the night wore on, the bar's patrons began to filter out, leaving only the most dedicated night owls and Silas, who continued to polish glasses with a focus …" | | 5 | "Evan nursed his drink, his gaze drifting back to Rory with a frequency that grew more pronounced with each passing minute." | | 6 | "In the stretched silence that followed, Silas finally broke his vigilant watch, his limp more pronounced as he made his way over to their end of the bar." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, the name slipping out before she could catch it" | | 1 | "Evan began, his voice measured," | | 2 | "he said, his voice barely above a whisper" |
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| 78.57% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.357 | | leniency | 0.714 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.143 | |